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Reviews for Righting the Wrongs

By : Scorch
  • From ANON - Halibel on June 12, 2013
    Plz continue
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  • From xflarebearx on April 03, 2010
    i absolutely love this. are you planning to continue this story or leave it as is? please, i would sooo happy if you do decide to pursue. it would be interesting to see how things develop between them and how their life would be like after their night of passion.
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  • From maleaanne on March 13, 2007
    i hope you continue. i want to know what happens next...
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  • From ANON - Renjiluvah on November 08, 2006
    This is my first time at adultFF (don't worry, I'm of age lmao), and I have to say, I found this link on FF.net and I'm glad my curiosity led me here. Although very provacative and forward, this was just the juiciest, most erotic and yet sweetest thing I have read in some time. There is no better subject than a forbidden love, although sinful yet every person has been in that situation. Stories like this one reminds us of that. It was great. Can't wait for another update and if you'd like to comment on this review, I can be found on FF.net under this same name. ::thumbs up::
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  • From ANON - Molly on June 17, 2006
    It was very good. However, you should read it yourself and correct something. Some words are nice and sweet, but some are just like a brik hitting ones head. I mean, you could use mahood, her flower or something along those lines. You might be tired of those words or they don't sound good, but it would be nicer to read those words and they would make the story more... sencitive ^^; or something like that.
    I don't know if anyone already told you this, but... ^^;; well I just thought I'll stop and tell you this ^^
    I really love the story, good job and continue, if that's not the end ^^
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  • From ANON - Sailor Star Dust on November 04, 2005
    I decided to read this as the pairing seemed a bit unusual, and was I pleasantly suprirsed!
    It's really nice to see some plot in H fanfics and not just sex.
    Keep up the great work!
    btw, if you continue this, I can't wait to see what would happen if Sephiroth and Cloud meet up!
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  • From ANON - Malz on October 25, 2005
    *outs a quarter in a jukebox. Hits J-5 for a song, by a singer whose name i forget, playing "Hot pants" to come on* Try playing that song to relive any blushing like a school girl tension you get while reading this smut ridden hot action body rubbing......*Stoops drooling to put in another quarter* Damn you and your literary skills. Hope to see another chapter >_>;
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  • From ANON - Mistress of Destruction on October 23, 2005
    Well, your other chapters were better, but you did say that. Although, I'm so very very glad you updated. Now I can't wait to find out Sephiroth's decision.
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  • From on October 22, 2005
    I've been dying to see this updated. Good work and descriptive is good sometimes.
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  • From ANON - Katy on October 22, 2005
    First the bad- ...I want to know why Sephiroth suddenly went "...I'm gonna be a good guy now!" ...Okay, so it wasn't exactly like that, but some backstory into how he survived and why he's not a megalomaniac bent on destruction would be good.
    Next, I giggled more than you probably wanted readers to giggle in the first three chapters. Some things that were said just struck me as oddly hilarious.
    And finally...Tifa seemed...off to me. Still In Character, but off. Especially with how quickly she succombed to Sephiroth's charm.

    Now the good-
    I LOVED the story. My favorites types are Sephiroth!Redemption fics, and you pulled this off well. Despite what I said above, it was definitely a well written fic. Sephiroth's words sounded like stuff he would say, only thing I'd object to is lover, but that's because I can't see *anyone* actually saying that. You also led into the sex with 4 chapters. Not exactly PWP there. Kudos.

    I did enjoy this, and I'm looking forward to more. :)
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  • From ANON - Rikku on October 21, 2005
    Ooooomg you updated. I almost had a fucking heart attack when I saw it on the main page. ...I think that's the second time this week I've used the term 'fucking heart attack' in a review here XD

    But gaaahhhh don't ever make me wait that long again! You more than made up for the wait, of course, but still, there was a few months of a cliffhanger to endure XD Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 13, 2005
    that was great cant wait to read more

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  • From ANON - silver_fox on October 12, 2005
    Hey, great fic so far. I've like the SephTifa Fics, their interesting. Hope to see Chapter 4 soon! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 07, 2005
    Great fic i just love tifa/sephiroth shippers, dont take to long with the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Sea-EnigmaDare on October 06, 2005
    Cool, but why does it look as if it's not finished?
    It's good and making me want to know more, good job :) .
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