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Reviews for Revenant

By : RaceUlfson
  • From writeright on April 02, 2005
    Fun chapter. I cracked up when Zell fell on Irvine, and I have the funny feeling that a certain cowboy will NOT be lying to lovely ladies in the future. Didn't scare me, though. :P. The battle scenes were great, though I'm wondering why people like to think that Quezacotl is female.

    Only nitpicky thing (aside from the speed that seemed to fly by with) is that Phoenix Downs cure the status known as KO, being knocked out and unable to fight. Death is death, as anyone who's played FF7 will know all too well.

    CP the annoyed (not with the fic, so don't worry)
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  • From ANON - Honey Nut Loop on April 02, 2005
    Hiya. It's me again. This is sooo amazing. I love it. So what's gonna happen next huh? huh? huh? tell me! Whats with the glowing. is Iblis still around? Is Squall ok? Surely he's pretty shattered. Well update soon. I can't wait and i know i won't have to wait long.
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  • From ANON - Honey Nut Loop on April 02, 2005
    Wow i love this. Brilliant. Update soon. Please. You've been really good at updating so far. Some stories take forever.
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  • From writeright on April 02, 2005
    Umm, Race, some of us are reading this at 2 AM, you know. I think listening to 1000 no Kotoba (the Japanese version of 1000 words) is all that kept me from jumping a couple inches out of my seat when Irvine saw the naked girls. Am I getting startled? Yes. Have I been scared to the point of not wanting to turn my lights off when I go to sleep? No.

    Starting to rush the plot a little, I think, and this is beginning to feel almost predictable, but you've probably got some big loop planned for the next chapter. At least, I hope you do.

    CP the jumpy
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  • From ANON - lynn on April 02, 2005
    NOOOOO! you can't end a chapter like that!!! i command that you update now!!! ......please oh, please update now
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  • From ANON - xiang on April 02, 2005
    akljfhskladgjhkajlg.

    *blinkyblinkyblinky*

    l;kasdgh. Oh. My. Sweet. Jalepenoes. *blinkyblinkyblinky* You have no idea how incredibly much I love this story. I love it SO incredibly much that it's just. . .alkfjaslkdg. Yes. Well. Update soon please? I don't like Seifer that much, but being shot in the gut in then stabbed in the shoulder while a quasi-friend is yelling off in a different part of Garden is definately a BAD thing to have happened when a different quasai-friend is possessed by an evil ghost/demon-thing.

    lsdkjgkl;gh. . .*shakes head* My Sweet Jalepenoes. . .
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  • From ANON - QueenAdreena on April 01, 2005
    Leave us hanging, why don'tcha? That was a good chapter though . . .
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  • From ANON - jazzbo22 on April 01, 2005
    This is so interesting! I love the way it's going right now, update soon!! I love how it's so freaky, people killing themselves in the bathtub, eerie happenings in the basement, and Seifer with a past secret. Awesome job
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  • From writeright on March 31, 2005
    First of all, damn you're updating this fic often. And I'm actually started to get creeped out now. Your Squall is most definitely possessed by something not quite right and I'm scared of what he might do to the other guys before it gets stopped. I mean, it has to get stopped eventually, right? *Shudders at the mental image of Squall's bloody smile that only Seifer can see*

    CP the unnerved
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  • From ANON - Honey Nut Loop on March 31, 2005
    What?? How dare you end there. I need more i tell you more. U have to update this is an amazing story! Love it. How uch praise do i have to give you?It's 2 o'clock in the morning andi'mstill reading, does that tell you how good this is? update!! You have to update!!!!!








    God i hate cliff hangers
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  • From ANON - QueenAdreena on March 31, 2005
    Chapter 3: Made me laugh with all your metaphors, the plots starting to get a bit scary now! Update!
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  • From writeright on March 31, 2005
    Nope, not scared yet. But I am a little grossed out because of all the rancid blood and bad smells you keep mentioning. Your characters are still nice and believeable. The only area I'd say you're approaching cliche with is the lack of power. I've seen House on Haunted Hill one too many times, maybe.

    Would've liked more description with the sex scene. Then again, I know that's not the main focus of this fic and I don't care if you choose not to elaborate on it in the future. Keep trying to scare me. Maybe you'll succeed.

    CP the brave
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  • From ANON - Akare on March 31, 2005
    Fantastic! I love it. Especially all the references. Funnily enough it's always Emily Bront� that I forget, not Anne. I'm getting really curious now as to what's going to happen. Can't wait. Hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Nami on March 31, 2005
    Love you
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  • From ANON - Kyasuri on March 30, 2005
    This story is amazing. Very well written and i love your sarcasm and humor. Usually these types of fanfictions tend to be lame (ya know, the ones that actually attempt a plot other then so-and-so wants this guy and they shag endlessly). All i have to say is you're doing a great job and i cant wait to read the rest ^_^.
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