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By : RaceUlfson
  • From ANON - Caroline7 on June 11, 2005
    This is the first time I've actually reviewed a story, despite being a bit of a fanfiction junkie (YAOI FOREVER). I do like the way you've fleshed out the characters, especially Zell and Laguna who often come across as a bit flat. Loved the Screwaga lines and Laguna's rant at the ambassadors was hilarious. Can't wait to see how you manage the pairings later on, there are so many HOT prospects.
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  • From ANON - shay on June 09, 2005
    plot!

    SQUEEEE!!!!
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  • From ANON - Fishgirl on June 09, 2005
    Pardon me for saying this but I am getting sick of waendil's anti-Seifer ranting. I just want to say I love Seifer and how you've written him. Don't compromise on him just because of one persistently negative reviewer.
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  • From ANON - Fishgirl on June 09, 2005
    Ooooooh! Now we have more of the story! It makes me all the more suspicious of those two Ambassadors now.

    I love the POVs - both Zell's and Seifer's were hilarious!
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  • From writeright on June 09, 2005
    I can SO picture Quistis freaking out like that, and my inner Seifer is wincing and grabbing his groin. Seifer really needs to explain himself a bit more clearly, though this is finally starting to come together in my head.

    CP the hungry
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  • From ANON - Iron Dog on June 09, 2005
    *Does happy update dance* I love you. I love this fic. Now, it feels like you're really getting this rolling. Everybody is coming to one place and all hell is gonna break loose or solidarity will be reached. It'll be interesting either way. Thank you for answering how Irvine happened to get the fever in the first place. I was curious about that and how he managed to live after being wounded so badly. Great job here, keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Hope on June 09, 2005
    I HATE ZELL'S GUTS!!!!

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    Well... gheesh, thanks Zell... you REALLLY Love Squall!

    I do adore this story..you know that.. but Zell is soooo "arrrggghhh"!
    He knows Squall has all this pressure on him but, all Zell can do is think with his penis.
    He doesn't even think to offer Squall any help... all he wants is sex.
    Bet he'll change his tune if HE gets to top Squall.
    And they call Squall self-absorbed.

    Stupid Zell!

    Everything else is perfect... just ( throws Zell out a window.)


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  • From ANON - waendil on June 09, 2005
    I dont now how anybody coud feel anything except hate and frustration for Seifer.
    And Zell coud be little more sympathetic for Squall. Squall is sick and Zell´s main concern is that who woud fuck him.
    And naturally Seifer does not show anything but glee and malicious delight for taking Quistis virginity by raping her.
    Seifer needs to be pull down from his high horse.
    Did I understand this correctly. The Fewer is Seifers fault becouse he and his posse screwd up.
    Excelent chapter.
    Please write more.
    A LOT more.
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  • From ANON - kieshar on June 08, 2005
    (crips corners of seat so hard it cracks) You just had to leave it there. CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!! lovelove
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  • From ANON - hopemia on June 08, 2005
    Another chapter... I love you so.

    Now.. Seifer needs his Squall.... so type lady, type.
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  • From on June 05, 2005
    I've been meaning to review this for a while, simply because it is AWESOME in every aspect of the word. Who doesn't love when your favorite Final Fantasy characters turn quite litterally into sex kittens? Makes me want to curl up into a ball and purr....
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  • From ANON - Kaorustalker30 on June 02, 2005
    Ah!!!! You update too fast!! >.< I go away for a bit and come back with 4 chapters to read plus an Interlude (omfg @ Tiger!Seifer) Last time I read this, I was on... chapter 10 -.- But, fuck if chapters 11 - 14 (and The Interlude. *rawr* Tiger!Seifer) weren't excellent! I'll keep this short, don't want this turning into an essay.

    Chapters 13 & 14: Awesome! The way you wrote Laguna was excellent, I had almost forgotten all about him (Despite the fact that, aliens coming to ESTHAR should have sent a few bells ringing). In fact, as of now - Laguna is my second favorite (Zell, of course, being my first) in this story, I just love the way you wrote him. I really don't know why, Laguna just never struck me as the type of person to make a bunch of 'hurrah' over (And on that list, Selphie, Quistis, Rinoa, Kiros, and Ward are in the same boat as well), meaning that he's written to be well... simple - almost one-dimensional - and definitely nothing to be enthused about; but I guess that's because Laguna is hardly written as more than an idiotic clutz. Laguna was SOMEONE, not just the President of Esthar (which can sometimes mean that he's just wallpaper in some stories). He cursed! He got angry! He was both silly and serious. He was himself and yet he was different, he was three-dimensional like he should be. Amusing all the same, still scatter-brained, and still talkative as ever (lmao @ "I guess I’ll go find a towel. Congrats on having a second chance at teenage, Kiros. You look 17. Eat something, you’re too thin. Maybe a cupcake or something, I’m hungry.” - its just like him to begin talking about something, and end (if he ever ends) speaking of something not even remotely *related* to the main topic). But also, one mean bastard when he wants to be, sarcastic as hell and surprisingly taking no-shit. He was like, the Squall version of Zell *ponders on that thought* or maybe just a Squall/Zell/Seifer hybrid... *bad thoughts* In short - I loved him, absolutely loved him.

    On a side note: Kiros. Wow. I never thought of him to be vain, and he BIT Ward?! Like BITE - BIT?! I actually winced when I saw '>crunch
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  • From ANON - Fishgirl on May 31, 2005
    Wheeeeee! New chapter! Yaaaaaay!

    Hee! I *love* how Laguna talked those two aliens down! Stuck-up things! They *really* expected the same customs when they came to visit another world? Yeesh!
    And Kiros and Ward! Cyoot! That whole scene is really sweet, Ward's such a sweet sorta guy and Kiros biting him! LOL!

    I'm still waiting to see how things go down when Seifer gets there! I'm starting to see an outline of One Big Happy Family (which I kinda love the idea of to death!) and I really wanna see how the family heirachy works out!

    I hope you can post more soon!
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  • From ANON - Darkie on May 31, 2005
    Gaaaah!!!! *Glomps* I so love this! I haven't read this part before....
    I WANT MOOOOOOOORE!! ...Please? ^____^ I really, really like this fic.
    It's one of a kind! I love the plot, and the smut, ya should never forget
    the smut. ^___^ And Kiros rocks! lol. He chomped dowm on Wards had!
    And he's so vain! I think that's a great way to portray Kiros.

    *Huggles*

    Please update soooooooon! ^____^ You have a ton of fans who want more!


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  • From ANON - waendil on May 31, 2005
    Excelent chapter.
    It is starting to make sense.
    Selphie and Irvine taking care of Squall together, so sweet.
    I hope that Squall will get his Zell back soon. After all Zell has been hoping to be with Squall for so long, and now he is drugged and Seifers toy.
    Please write more.

    Ps. Some Squall/Zell/Irvine Fever smut woud be great.

    http://www.freewebs.com/waendil/
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