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By : RaceUlfson

From writeright on May 18, 2005
Yum, smut. I'm kinda still on an endorphin high from getting a tattoo, so I can't say much else. This plot is still confuzzling me, though, so I hope it gets a little clearer at some point.

CP the inked
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From ANON - Koji Nokemono on May 15, 2005
waaaaah I'm confused lmao XD Please finish it so I know wtf is going on lol

You're a very good writer ^ ^ I don't usually read anything with much of a plot *usually it's a one shot or a PWP even if it's in chapter* and I certainly don't read much about Zell heheh XD or the others.... Sq/Se is SO so so....abundant ..... we need more Irvine XP

I still wanna know how in the world they get pregnate.... AND I'd like to see more Squally and Irvy heheh :3 Squalliness XD heheh so kawaii ....

Well... I'm waiting *sits down with a sleeping bag*

.... Still waiting

STILL WAITING XD heheheh :3
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From ANON - Iron Dog on May 14, 2005
Oooooh. Seifer/Squall action? Yes? Please? If I beg? There would be one rip-snortin' fight for dominance if that were the case considering how they are both currently alpha males. You've got me totally beat on the update thing and I love ya for it. Short but cool foreshadowing. I'm waiting patiently (mostly) for more.
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From ANON - KIN.. one and the same XD on May 14, 2005
�You and Selphie were sick. I was good to go. He needed me. Don�t be so jealous.�

ohhhh he's going down ... that was suicide ... so to speak XD

Squall... like Alan Rickman as Snape.... sneaky and quiet in anger... so much scarier mwahahaha

cat fight! whoo er I guess?

then again Martial Arts aren't used for fighting any fight anyway :/ if it was artist against artist maybe but it'd hurt Zell just as much... also, just pressure point him XP you know, lower his blood pressure or sumin.... knock him out a while... hehe XD

�C�mon, you gonna give me the Papercuts of Death, Leonhart? Don�t you know how to hit?� He held up his fists. �Stop with the sissy scratching, it�s so freakin� girly.�

I happen to like his girliness... hmmm is THAT what gets him such a cute ass ? XD heheh *My Friend Cody wonders what women do to have such nice asses... I told him it was child bearing XD We have to make up for sumin here*

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From ANON - KIN on May 14, 2005
O.o; well that was a rush of .... 9 months for a human, how many for a cat?

this is a little weird.... I dun usually read fics with men like this lmao oh well I'll get over it...

I still don't understand how he switched genders...... is he really a hermaphrodite we didn't know about?

WAHHHh four XD wow this is confusing lmao I think I'm having fun though lmao

fainted again XD at least he's honest XD

cheater lmao XD it's okay I do it too XD throw in something completely whack and then have em wake up hehehehe

awww this would so work for me... my husband is pregnate and I'm the father ^ ^ lmao it would so work for me XD and dammit I'd be the best father he'd ever know XD

a baby baby..... er .... there's one way to put it XD

And now I'm RPing as Muraki... yaaaaaaay but I will finish reading it asap :3 =D heheheh *handcuffs you to me* so you can't run away >
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From ANON - KIN on May 14, 2005
You can own people *gets out a leash* ..... *gets out handcuffs too* heheh

you know at last years con *Animazement 2004 in Durham NC, same place I'm going this time* they were auctioning the Shirtless Bishie..... someone won a bid at $70 =D heheh

aww retractable claws... I have em... but they're not retractable heheh

"I was ravenously hungry, but I was already so tired I wasn�t sure I could stay awake long enough to eat anything." we talked about that at school the other day XD how ppl'd come home, really tired but they're feel so hungry they'd keep eating, yawn, eat..... so tired... eat XD lol

Sounds like we're bishonen shopping.... He's mine and he's mine and him and oh yeah him too

First paragraph of ch 4 ... heheh sounds like me XD I'm so contradictory... I can never take sides unless in preference

Galbadian soldiers lmao and Seifer's in the crowd XD ah someone would be missing a few limbs! *this is a diff chapter btw*

"Mmmmm� wait, no impure thoughts! Nooooo! "

You sound like my ex lol XD Mmmm yes hehehe

Heheh it's just Irvine..... he could stand there and be a magnet =D but we love him *hug*

"Okay, can we all say �personal whacking fantasy�? I knew you could! " Ok tell me when to stop saying it XD

WEll sure Irvine's a whore and all but it's cute to see him submissive ^ ^ Even though I really don't like Zell x.x You draw him in a pretty decent light :3 at least one I can stand heheheh what you say goes =D XD

lmao hardest XD psh not much of a joke but damn lmao XD

Zell's worried about Selphie killing him? Well damn, if she gets him first what would Squall have left? Not much XD

Next chapter.....

Pregnate? well ...... um....... never thought of him beig pregnate... nonetheless if it's my OC *who's already so much like a mother* he's an angel so for whatever reason this is possible?

Dammit now we need an explanation of how exactly this is possible XD lmao I'm too much fun...

Okay this is kinda long, I'll start another review heheh

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From ANON - Koji on May 13, 2005
�Selphie. Wait. He�s gonna either recognize us or fall over. Just wait it out.�

hmmmm options XD

awwwwww ........ it's like.. beastiality ..... like really OOC beastiality XD

Yes I love his leather pants too... Squall has such a nice ass :3 ^ ^=

resist sleep... he either has a sleep guard equipped or he's an insomniac XD

"Ummm ummm ummmmmmmm" sounds like me XD heheh I was Selphie for a con about 4 years ago heheh :3

Zell! NO YOU CAN'T DO IT!!!! YOU CAN'T I SAY YOU CAN'T! NOOOOO .... I'm okay >

Screwaga lmao like majorly XD ah where was it earlier in the game? Like when they were locked in the room before asassinating Edea XD

Yes Zell it stays in ur pants x.x

I never liked him much but what can I do ?
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From ANON - Koji again XD on May 13, 2005
and bc my other review wasn't in a new window

heheheh I love your writing XD

dammit I get to here : Squall almost purred, those sounds drove him as much as the taste, like lightly salted peaches, of Irvine�s skin. He wanted more from him.

before I completely lose focus lol You're just that good :3

awwww ... cats heheheh you want animal insticts do Fruits Basket....

Ima be Irvine for the con I'm doing to in two weeks time :3 heheheh XD
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From ANON - Koji Nokemono not signed in on May 13, 2005
awww at least Squall's honest XD

Damn we gotta hurt Irvine so Squall can take the bait.... like... everytime lol XD oh well Lemme read the rest now =D
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From ANON - Iron Dog on May 13, 2005
Yea!! Frequent updates. I don't mind the lack of yaoi action as long as you keep feeding us pieces of "What the hell is going on?" (although yaoi is always good too). Now I'm really getting anxious to see what happens when Seifer and Squall do finally meet. And what the hell was that line about where Seifer said "I'm not pregnant anymore." Did I skip a chapter? Miss a post? Completely loose my memory? I'm sure I would ahve remembered reading that. There are so few Seifer mpregs out there. Anyway, great story going here and I hope you keep up with this frequent update idea.
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From ANON - Honey Nut Loop on May 13, 2005
aw that was an abrupt ending. This is a fantastic chapter to go with a fantastic story. I'm fascinated as to what is going on.
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From ANON - waendil on May 13, 2005
Nice chapter.
I might actually like where this story is going, even with Seifer, providing that this storie is not "selfexplaining Porn".
Please dont let Seifer becom SeeD. He failed the SeeD test 3 times, and he can not take orders, and he is too selfabsorded to be leader.
Poor Zell, is he Seifers bitch, and will he be mocked by Seifer for rest of his life. Zell deserves better than Seifer. Seifer does not deserve Zell or Orphanet gangs friendship. I hope he goes away after he has done his job with Green Fewer.
Please write more.
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From ANON - Iron Dog on May 12, 2005
'Kay, I'm offically addicted to this fic. I love that Seifer has entered the fray. I really want to see some kind of dust-up between Alpha Squall an Alpha Seifer over Zell (who they've both claimed, more or less). And what about Zell? Does he get any choice in this? He has a thing going for Squall and some kind of previous relationship/thing for Seifer. Are you gonna be so cruel as to make the poor boy choose? If you do, great angst potential. I do hope you tell us just what the hell is going on with all these SeeD's turning into...whatever they are becoming. I love that you updated. keep it coming.

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From ANON - lynn on May 12, 2005
more, more, more....please. I looove seifer, oh, i luv him. Just keeep it coming.
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From ANON - Fishgirl on May 12, 2005
Hmm, starting to get some more info now.
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