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By : RaceUlfson
  • From ANON - Kaorustalker30 on May 03, 2005
    I always love to read about character's like Zell, his perspective is always so energetic and so... teen. 'I saluted Quisty and stared at Xu. Gradually the dawn came and Xu saluted me. ‘Bout damn time. I wasn’t Seifer’s whipping boy for years without picking up a few pointers on how to be a prick.' - I loved that line. I could actually see that happening and couldn't stop laughing at the sun slowly rising while Zell waited for Xu to show him his due respect. The 'Mistress of Snide', 'Feel the Love!', and the 'Pleeeeease let there be a Screwaga spell! Ooooplease oplease, I’d just use it for the Powers of Good, honest!' were among the many comments that were just fucking excellent. You really catch Zell's character beautifully, making him energetic and amusingly sardonic- had me laughing at how true the things he said were and how sarcastic he could be.

    And with that said, Zell's not going to... oh, ya know... DIE is he? Dead Zell is not a fun Zell, no it's not. I mean Zell's death may lead into a chain of events: Dead Zell = Dead Rinoa = Dead Squall = Much Irvine-eye-leakage (THE KITTENS MUST LIVE!) - actually, I don't like that chain of events very much. Not at all, really (except for the Irvine-eye-leakage). ZELL MUST LIVE! I'll be (nervously) waiting for the next chapter. *worried that Zell might die, say it ain't so!*
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  • From ANON - Kaorustalker30 on May 03, 2005
    *Really warming up to a crying Irvine* That “Sweetie, how can a girl not love a guy who’s really willing to pitch in and do half the work?” line was too cute, and so very Selphie. I'm happy for Irvine that she didn't flee to Trabia like in his dream, even though that would have promised more Irvine-eye-leakage (What can I say? I'm a sucker for guys who cry prettily. And Irvine would definitely be one of those). The idea that Selphie isn't angry with Irvine even though he had sex with Zell and Squall- Amazing. I've never thought of it like that, but Selphie's reaction show's just how close the Orphange gang is- "More like sharing a good thing, getting everyone to join in. And you know I’m always in favor of that.”- as well as how much of a pervert she can be. Poor Squall though, the bastard just doesn't know when to rest- which now makes me wonder, is he dying?! *horrified* I hope he's just... got a bad case of... *does not follow through with that thought*
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  • From ANON - lynn on May 03, 2005
    nice action scenes, not a lot of people can write them as well as the sex scenes. I also love it when the stories are told from zell's perspective, his inner voice is really amusing. and i know i've said it before, but i really really am grateful for the fast updates.
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  • From writeright on May 02, 2005
    Eek, what's wrong with Squall? Pregnant Irvine and Selphie...oh dear, that'll be amusing when they get farther along. And, as cruel as this seems, who cares about Rinoa? I really don't care too much. Fun chapter, write more soon.

    CP the bored
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  • From ANON - lynn on May 02, 2005
    yeah! selphie isn't mad, i'm glad about that. maybe she is a big yaoi fan girl as well....maybe she can watch? hehe, i cant' wait for the next update
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  • From ANON - waendil on May 01, 2005
    Perfect,
    just perfect.
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  • From ANON - Fishgirl on April 29, 2005
    Eeee! Love the fight, love the result! Now they've worked out their places with each other! I do wonder how the girls will take it though.
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  • From writeright on April 29, 2005
    Yummy. The fight was good, the smut was VERY good, and Zell was fun to read. How long is this fic anyway? LOL. Yeah, I have a thing for rough sex scenes...that hit all the right mental buttons for my muses.

    CP the content
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  • From ANON - hello on April 28, 2005
    Squall X Zell, thank you! i was hoping that would happen, and i was not at all disappointed. I kinda like the idea of Squall being the bad ass alpha male and getting everyone knocked up...oh, and i really luuuvvv the quick updates
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  • From ANON - Kaorustalker30 on April 28, 2005
    *drools* One of my all time fave pairing's, Squall/Zell (And Squall/Irvine, and Zell/Irvine... so yeah, this is like winning three lucky 7's). That scene. *drools again and zone's out* That was so. Oh god. DOMINANT SQUALL FOREVER! RAWR! *calm's down* Okay. Now that I've let that out, if Zell can get pregnant - I will forever be mortified. A pregnant Zell scare's me shitless (moreso than a pregnant Selphie) so yes, much mortification to be held. Hysterical laughter is also a plausible option - laughing because if I don't, *I* might faint this time. Whether Zell does end up pregnant or not *whimpers in fright*, I will still stick with this story - I'm way too attached now to turn back. Not to mention, the lemons are just too damn hot to pass up -.-
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  • From ANON - Kaorustalker30 on April 28, 2005
    *laughs at Irvine's dream* That was funny - Irvine having kitten's. At first, I was worried that you were rushing the pregnancy - safe to say, I'm very happy it was just a dream (or nightmare in Irvine's case). When Squall smacked Irvine, I laughed from shock. Then I re-read it, and laughed when Irvine started to cry... I think I'm somewhat still in shock. I mean, (out of nowhere) as soon as Irvine starts being a smartass, Squall just lands him one. And over Seifer no less. Wow, possessive much? Again, Squall's instinct gets the best of him - loved how he was just as shocked at hitting Irvine as Irvine was at being hit. Little worried that Selphie might be pregnant, wouldn't that just be scary? *shivers* As if she wasn't dangerous with that nunchaku in the first place. Who know's, she may even adopt Quistis' whip *coughSlavedrivercough*. Dominatrix Selphie - the apple of Irvine's eye. lol Anyway, great chapter! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - fishgirl on April 28, 2005
    Just notice someone else's review. Want Seifer to turn up. Hope he does.
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  • From ANON - Fishgirl on April 28, 2005
    Loved the dream scene. Wonder how testing will turn out for the rest?
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  • From ANON - waendil on April 28, 2005
    Great chapter. I hope that Squall and Zell will settle their arguments and share Irvine.
    Although Zell shoud sumbit to Squall, but not be complete bottom like Irvine.
    Hopefully baby is Squalls, And the NEXT Irvines baby coud be Zells.
    Please write more. http://www.freewebs.com/waendil/
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  • From ANON - lynn on April 28, 2005
    HAH! that Mpreg thing came out of no where, but i'll stick around. I still think its really funny. Seifer was vaguely mentioned....is seifer gonna show up...cause i wouldn't at all be opposed at him make a guest appearence. (that wasn't very subtle was it?) oh, well, i really like the quick updates, they are a really good stress reliever during my finals week!
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