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Reviews for The Birthday Arc

By : darksquall
  • From ANON - Jazzbo22 on June 07, 2005
    This is so great! I hope there is more to come. The way you portray Seifer and Squall is brilliant, most times authors make them being in love too cheesy, but this is perfect. Keep writing more please!
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  • From ANON - yukiko on June 02, 2005
    lol, the last one Seifer is evil lol, really evil.
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  • From ANON - Tsubasa No Koe on June 01, 2005
    wow hot scene!!! haha can't believe i said that!
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  • From ANON - Sammei on June 01, 2005
    (Too lazy to log in..) I LOVED this! Very hot.

    In some of the earlier chapters, I think there needed to be more commas, but it's like that's a big deal, anyway. I liked how you switched to 1st person pov for this latest (4?) chapter. Seifer is such a perv. ^_^

    Definitely one of the best Seifer/Squall fics I've read! Great job, and can't wait until you update. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Tsubasa No Koe on May 02, 2005
    I dont' know what to say but AWWW. hehe
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  • From writeright on May 02, 2005
    Two sex scenes, both of them absolutely great. And I can easily picture Selphie as being some pervy yaoi voyeur, wanting to watch Seifer fuck Squall. It's good they came out about things, though I didn't like you skipping an entire year. Kinda wanted to know more about what happened in the meantime.

    CP the perv
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  • From ANON - Tsubasa No Koe on May 01, 2005
    Wow! I really love your fics! Seifer finally told Squall too! Um was that the last chapter? Hope not, but if so, it was a nice ending. =)
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  • From ANON - Iron Dog on April 30, 2005
    Gawd I love you. You just have a way of writing these two that is perfect. Race is one lucky chicky tohave gotten this for her birthday. Please tell me that there is going to be more in this arc than just two lonely chapters.
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  • From ANON - Race Ulfson on April 29, 2005
    mmm, Seifer and I both enjoyed that present. I love how they are finally finding each other after so long but there are still some bumps in the road. Love is never easy, lol.

    And you know you write lovely smut.
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  • From RaceUlfson on April 28, 2005
    I'm so glad you are posting this. I loved it to bits. I think Squall would miss his rival terribly, who else is his equal?
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