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Reviews for Land Of Confusion

By : Reppa
  • From DarkFae on November 05, 2009
    rockin so far
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  • From jglasscott on April 23, 2007
    I pray that you update soon because this is the best Final Fantasy Unlimited story I have found on all of my websites.
    ~Jaime*
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  • From ANON - mistress of yaoi on November 15, 2006
    i have been waiting and i was just wondering if this will ever be updated?
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  • From ANON - laine on August 09, 2006
    wish i could read the next chapters! this plot is great1 i like how you tell the story too. nice.
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  • From ANON - Yersi Fanel on July 28, 2006
    Oh my sweet GOD! a FFU story! so man thanks, I love this anime
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  • From ANON - Azdel on July 21, 2006
    wow this is good keep on righting plz
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  • From ANON - Lady Chaos on June 24, 2006
    Wicked Story, please continue it I really love it, Please please please,
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  • From ANON - jamielee on January 14, 2006
    oooh what happen next? what happens next i want to know what happens next please!
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  • From jamielee on January 07, 2006
    huge fan of the series and i must say i love this fanfic please continue
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  • From ANON - Ledikins on December 14, 2005
    It's nice to see a Final Fantasy Unlimited fanfic and with everyone in character. The cultural bits are realy interesting too. It's realy fun to read ^_^
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  • From ANON - Possessed on September 30, 2005
    Hi, great fourth chapter!!! I loved all the descriptive details and the comical conversations, especially the one that took place right after Kaze pushed Ai!!! 'Don't you da-"
    Kaze dared and shoved Lisa next into the rabbit hole, very funny, and it was interesting to see Yu be brave, in the series he kind of seemed more like the cowardly type, though yeah around near the end of the series he did build some strength. Anyway why exactly was Lisa aggraveted by the fact that Kaze only seemed to respond to mention of White Cloud, or Makenshi as he is also known by? I know that Lisa kind of has a crush on Kaze, but was I wrong and its actually something more serious? And yeah I completely agree what was with them berrating him like that, they asked for his assistance and he gave it to them!!! Anyway I think they all need to lay off and give him some respect, especially the two females in the part. Oh and what a BEAUTIFUL way to end a chapter, I cannot wait for the next chapter because I am sure that it will be full of Makenshi and Kaze action!!! Though it sounded like White Cloud had already moved in to attack, WHY, I thought that from all those dreams, those memories, that there meeting would be different? Is something wrong with Makenshi? Did he lose his memories, or did he never have them? But then again I had thought that in the series Makenshi had more memoreis of his past than Kaze, so what has happened in the time they were apart, I mean from what I remember you left Makenshi in this village of some kind, resting from all his injuries. So he must have recovered if he can be where Kaze and the ohters are right now, but SERIOUSLY what is wrong why is the White cloud attacking Kaze? They after all have no reason to fight anymore with the lords of inner world gone...HURRY with the next chapter, I'm waiting anxiously!!!
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  • From ANON - Possessed on August 07, 2005
    HEY, THAT WAS GREAT!!! The way you started this chapter was very interesting and exciting! At first I was confused much like Kaze was, but then I thought, HEY could this be like a memory that he forgot or supressed and is now resurfacing for one reason or another! Because it's not like anyone really knows what occurred before the series between Makenshi the white cloud and Kaze the black wind so maybe before they were enemies they were just acquaintances woh met because Kaze from what I could garner from the short lived memory, saved Makenshi from freezing in the snows, but then something MUST have gone terribly wrong for them to start fighting eith one another and for Kaze to suddenly lose all his memories, like amnesia or something?! But of course I'm only speculating!!! I REALLY LOVE THIS and can't wait to read and review more, because I truly enjoy the mysteriousness of it all and the title really suits this story, 'Land of Confusuion', YEAH seriously I'm confused and LIKE IT, because that's what makes it so fun! Cause I don't like a story that just flows over me I like to be involved and kept guessing, and this REALLY FILLS IN ON ALL THOSE ACCOUNTS!!! Oh, and when Moogle said 'Snowball' was he referring to 'Makenshi'? WELL hurry and post again soon, your FAITHFUL reader Possessed, though I'm sorry if this was a little late, OH AND ONE MORE THING, I just was looking at some stories at FanFiction.net and I SAW YOU THERE, though you still only had two on that site and here you had three so, I should check here for any updates on this story, right? LOVED IT CONTINUE A.S.A.P!!!
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  • From ANON - Goeleven on August 05, 2005
    This is interesting, please continue.
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  • From ANON - Possessed on July 23, 2005
    Hey, here's your second review from me until you write more! Okay, again the descrptions were phenomenal, and AH, how did Ai guess that so quickly, that Kaze's feeling for Makenshi are more than they seem. AND poor Kaze he doesn't even realize it yet, I wonder does Makenshi know how he feels for Kaze? Or are they both so dense and blind? OH, and I feel really bad for Lisa, she was an enjoyable character, but I'm afraid the feelings I think she has for Kaze will never lead to anything, Sorry Lisa! And that was funny, 'I think you've found yourself a new NEST?! Well that's weird to say, but it adds more to her character! And I really like that since in the series, more over, especially with Kaze and Makenshi you never really got to know their characters very well, their both even all the way up to the end, very mysterious. I mean sure we get to hear about their past lives before CHAOS, but not really how they changed or their feelings along the way! But I think your adding those things, and making the story all the better! PLEASE, now I'll beg, HURRY AND POST AGAIN SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - Possessed on July 23, 2005
    Hi, I've seen this series and LOVED it! This is an excellant story or portrayal of a sequel if they ever did make one that I've had the pleasure of reading. I truly enjoyed the small tid-bits that were made, like 'If I find white cloud, or Makenshi, whatever he is to me.' And then from Makenshi; 'I'll have to look forward to our next encounter, though it will most likely be his gun to my head.' There VERY small hints, but I LOVED them just the same. All the detail is written in suberb fashion, and YES I have also played FFVIII, and know what the Shumi village is and what the moomba's are! The begining for this was very captivating, a real bait-hook-and sinker! Wow, wait a second is Kaze actually going insane or what? Who's voice is that, and was he actually a real jerk to Aura, his little sister? Nah, I can't believe something like that, but then, well what is it that is going on? YEP, I am now officially going to be one of your loyal readers and reviewers, cause I adore this so much!!! Oh and I would say please hurry with the next chapter, but seeing as the second chapter is already up, I'll just go ahead and read and review it, instead!
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