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Reviews for The Ultimatum and Reverberation

By : Lchan
  • From ANON - squalmasy on July 19, 2005
    Um, no offense, but...what??

    I suppose if your future chapters aren't this spread out and vague, this could definitely prove to be something worth reading. But what you have posted here would have made a better introduction to a chapter than a chapter itself. Perhaps you should have waited to put this in the beginning of the next chapter?

    well, I'll wait and see what you do with this fic. until then,
    -tah!-
    squalmasy
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  • From wickedorin on July 07, 2005
    Well, you've got my interest.
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