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Reviews for The Split

By : madkool
  • From ANON - Nora on November 10, 2006
    I love this story. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - Nomme de Plume on July 24, 2006
    i know it's been a while since you updated, but i just wanted to tell you how much i love this story. i ran across chapter one on some website...and that was it. to run across it here with more chapters made me quite happy. if you ever get a chance to continue, i'll be happy to read. ^_^
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  • From ANON - langehantent on October 29, 2005
    Ahhhhhhhhh, where's the update??? T.T Honestly I don't know who to feel for! I feel bad for Irvine, and Squall. I'm so glad their back together, though I know that somebody or something is going to fuck it up. T.T I don't want it to!!!!! I even got a shread of pity for Roane. A little bitty shread. lol Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Ri on October 29, 2005
    Yay IrvinexSquall got togerther! BUt oh man what will happen! The intensetiy in the story. Okya I know this review does not make sense. Let me just say I love your story, your writing style and the charater protrayels ^^ YOu ae doing such an awesome job! Keep it up!!!
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  • From ANON - A_FRAGILE_LION on September 04, 2005
    Finally, Irvine has some sense. ^___^


    You're writing Squall beautifully! He's so full of angst, the poor kid. I'm hoping Irvine continues to help open Squall up.
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  • From ANON - darkangel1210 on September 04, 2005
    Oh no! Roane is so totally going to fuck up their relationship isn't he!!! And Squall will be hurt again and Irvine will lose him for good and there's nothing but a puddle of tears where I've been crying so much!

    If Roane fucks Irvine's and Squall's relationship up I am going to be so mad! >:(

    Update soon I'm on the edge of my seat here!


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  • From ANON - lynn on September 02, 2005
    It seems Irvine is being Irvine and thinking with his dick.

    I do love your writing but I also want to rant at your muses. Which mean, you've done an excellent job cause I'm getting emotional over this story.

    I feel for Squall because he is atruly beautiful person on the inside. He's just so fucked up. Many people do not understand how hard it is for a person to learn to trust people again. For Squall, it would be even harder, it could take years in a faithful relationship before Squall would feel like he deserves or will be someone's complete devoution. I'm glad you didn't make Squall cheat, I just don't see him jumping into anything like that. Though, I'd like him to scare Irvine a little and let Irvine see that Squall has enough good qualities that alot of people would want him.


    Irvine is Irvine though. It's typical for him to think with his dick and question if he every really cared for Squall at all. He made it sounnd in ch. 4 like he really didn't know if he loved Squall are not. The Dick!!!!
    I really can't feel sorry for him because he knew Squall before he got into a relationship with him and should have known that Squall would be emotional fragile enough to hold himself at a distance.

    Roane disappointed me because he fell into bed with Irvine so easily. Rinoa will not be happy.


    Kudos for Zell/Quistis, I love that pairing. Zell is all guy in the game and I hate that he's turned into a wuss so much.

    Kudos for Xu cause she seems to be the only person who is a true friend to Squall. The kid is Commander at the age of 17 and emotional fragile. He needs people who will be a friend to him.

    Selphie should know how Irvine is and understand that everything is not Squall's fault.
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  • From ANON - hopemia on September 01, 2005
    Sheessssh, does Irvine know how to be faithful?

    I'm really starting to hope Seifer saves Squall's day. :P

    Your writing style is awesome... leaving me quessing how the next chapters end.
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  • From wickedorin on August 31, 2005
    Finally I get the time to roam over and read this! (I know, my "time management" sucks...)

    First off, I really do enjoy your style--it has a nice rhythm to it, not to mention a great tone to bring the reader in. Some humor, some sadness, intensity; good stuff!

    As for the story itself... there are a LOT of turns I didn't expect. And I appreciate that... plus general sexiness, of course! And now I'm waiting for the next chapter. Eagerly. *rubs hands together and prepares a tent to camp out*
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  • From writeright on August 29, 2005
    This could prove complicated. I like it.

    CP the sick
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  • From ANON - LAh on August 27, 2005
    More damnit! :)
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  • From on August 27, 2005
    That was amazing...your making me cry...I'm so glad there are two more chapters, but I really hope that you will update soon! *sobs with her tissue* I love it. There are not enough Irvine/Squall fics out there.
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  • From ANON - darkangel_1210 on August 26, 2005
    Oh please please *underlined* please! let squall and irvine get back together! I can't stand fics where it ends in sadness and heartbreak and lots of tears (on my part!) Update soon, hope squall won't be so closed in that he can't put his feelings for irvine out in the open.... hint hint ^_^
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  • From ANON - hopemia on August 25, 2005
    Extremely sad.

    I 'specially feel for Squall. Normally, the outwordly cold people are the ones who are the most emotionally fragile on the inside. I hope everything works out for him and Irvine.... or maybe Seifer might save Squall's day.

    Please continue soon.
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