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Reviews for Vivi's love

By : Tyranid121
  • From ANON - Real on November 27, 2006
    Ok bad man. Just bad. Writing a paragraph is not a chapter and you don't need to doublespace the sentences.
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  • From vivilover69 on June 03, 2006
    Well, you wanted pointer.

    *First of all, let it flow.
    *Descriptions are good, but don't overdo them. Sometimes it's better to be concise.
    *Write what pleases you. If you aren't pleased with it, there's little chance others will be.
    *Act your characters out. It helps. You'll get the feel for them.

    That's all for now, and thanks for mentioning me. It's good exposure. ;)
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  • From ANON - jozepy on September 14, 2005
    YES!!!!!
    new vivi fic new vivi fic
    i am so happy that their is a new vivi fic
    please for the love for god continued
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