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Reviews for Birds of Prey

By : Lchan
  • From ANON - Aya on September 23, 2005
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    I was gonna be sooo mad if you had left it at that sad ending XD
    But that was soooo kawaii!! I look forward to those other stories!
    and BTW....... wha the hell do you feed your muse? Miracle-gro???? Steriods???
    Though you might want to get a beta to check over several grammar and spelling mistakes in (mostly) earlier chapters.
    OMEDETOO GOZAIMASU!!!!! (congratulations) one awesome fic completed!
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  • From ANON - Booper on September 23, 2005
    Gah! I cried!! but then I was happy!! Yay happy endings!!
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  • From ANON - Shadow_Dweller on September 23, 2005
    OMG that story made me cry...and i dont cry that often, brilliant work ^.^ ...tis ashame to see it finish though
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  • From ANON - Rissie on September 23, 2005
    Keeeeeeeeeee. Gorgeous, gorgeous, you made me CRY. *bursts into another round of tears*

    That was such a beautiful fic, thank you for sharing it. I enjoyed the pairing greatly (they're so cute together!) and I'm glad to hear that you're planning to write more. You portray them to a tee. I'll definitely love your next fic, whenever it makes its appearance. ^^
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  • From ANON - Kadaaju on September 23, 2005
    -Just.. falls over and dies..- @_@.. Maybe I won't show Kuraudo this story. He had enough trouble with Kadaaju dieing in the movie.. But either way. Good story. Sorry to see that Bisentou is as dense as a rock, and just as dull too. -cough.- Anywho.... Hope to see more stories from you like that. And am waiting to see the epilogue.
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  • From ANON - Lchan on September 23, 2005
    AHH. It ate the rest of my post. ANYWAY. I will be writing another AC fic, this time I'll make it much longer. ;D Maybe leading up to why Cloud felt this way about Kadaj?
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  • From ANON - Lchan on September 23, 2005
    ;D I'm glad everyone liked the story. ;_______; I'm actually really sad its over, because I enjoyed writing it so much!
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  • From ANON - atOmicSquid on September 23, 2005
    I don't usually do this but.....*SSSSQQUUUUEEEEEE!!!!*
    YAY! A happy ending! I'm sure Tifa would not be pleased but who cares what she thinks....she hired a hit-man!
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  • From ANON - Arien on September 23, 2005
    Awww..it ended! >< I really hope you write another AC fic soon with lots of yummy boy-sex. Kadaj makes a great uke ^_^
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  • From ANON - pinkfeathers on September 23, 2005
    whew! that was soooo close i thought it will be a sad ending!
    i have a bunch of tissues gathering on my floor now >_< i really thought kadaj will die back there!
    i love the 'real' ending MUCH than the other though.
    but wow! you are the best author i have ever met!
    i hope you'll continue to write other kadaj/cloud fanfictions! ^_^

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  • From ANON - Aya on September 22, 2005
    LMAO!!! 'you've got hairy balls' normally that wouldn't strike me so funny... but that was just fucking great
    and that was the cutest and sweetest lemon I've seen!!
    And you are now the greatest authoress
    1) you keep good content, don't make the ideas hitty with just stupid crap
    2) You update often (REALLY often)
    3) YOU UPDATE!!!!!!!!
    4) you hardly include Tifa!!! YAY!!!!
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  • From ANON - Emeraldwolf on September 22, 2005
    Aww...smut. ^_~ I really like how you wrote this. Especially with Kadaj being his first time and asking all those adorable questions. I really hope you keep up the crazy fast updating. ^_~ I'm spoiled now. Rock on!!!
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  • From ANON - Lchan on September 22, 2005
    What are you people doing awake so late? - Rubs eye tiredly - o_o I just woke and there are like, many more hits then when I went to sleep at one. LOL. To the person I ranted out in a little intervention chap; sorry if I seemed mean. I have seen the movie, Japanese ver., and I understood about half because I had Japanese subs on to read it [ Because they spoke waaay too fast @_@. Sometimes japanese people have hard times with that ], but most of it was written in Kanji [ Most difficult Japanese written lingo ]. > yeah. Maybe I should toss Reno and Rude into, because they were funny in the movie [ Reno gets locked out xD ].

    -Lchan
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  • From ANON - nihilatrix on September 22, 2005
    Errm...I guess I came across as somewhat abrasive...Please allow me to clear the air. I like this story! I only intended to be informative...If it came across as a flame, I apologize. This is what happens when I write reviews after 48 hours without sleep. :P I have seen the movie, (yay bittorrent!) both with and without subs...(I'm still buying the DVD for the quality, and to support the artists who made it.) I won't spoil it for you, but I think you'll know what I meant when you see it.
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  • From ANON - S.s on September 22, 2005
    “ Man… you’ve got some hairy balls. “

    x'DDDD

    *wiping her watery eyes* Oh my, you're a genious. That statement just made my day. And I loved the whole chapter too, of course.

    *the mental image of Cloud's balls floats around her head and she just can't stop laughing*

    Umm yeah. Can't wait for more!
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