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Reviews for Birds of Prey

By : Lchan
  • From ANON - pinkfeathers on September 22, 2005
    at last! i can't believe it! this is best fanfiction i ever read >_<
    your the best! [hugs] i can't wait what will happen next!!! update soon! good luck!
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  • From ANON - Emeraldwolf on September 22, 2005
    That, my friend, was mean. ^_^ sucky cliffhanger. Yay for the update though. Hehe. I check this thing like three times a day. ^_~ How sad is that. Can't wait for the next part. I'm glad Cloud and Kadaj have finally 'hooked up' but I also hope that the tension remains. That's my favorite part of the story so far. Rock on!
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  • From ANON - S.s on September 21, 2005
    Ah you're so mean! Now I have to come back here every 5 minutes to check if you've added the next chapter xD

    I love it how this fic goes on, and it actually has an interesting plot too. I think CloudxKadaj just may have become my favorite FF7 pairing of all time. Thanks to you!

    Keep up the great job. :)
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  • From BooperD on September 21, 2005
    Noooooes!! Cliff hanger!! Meanie head.... please write more?
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  • From ANON - Minako on September 21, 2005
    I like it.
    Yeah to tell you the truth this is a lot bitter then the movie. I like CloudXKadaj, as a couple but you're right about one thing Kadaj has Sephiroth soul in him or something another. but I really don't think Kadaj would like it if Cloud did die I mean in you're fic. he maybe be a ass right now but I think in some way he did care fore Cloud. not unless you bring Aeris, Sephiroth or Zack back from the dead But I don't think that would happen beside the Major Jealousy on Tifa's part but the Idea of VincentXCid, is a good one. but Good Luck with this one.

    tbc...?
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  • From ANON - pinkfeathers on September 20, 2005
    i love this fic! there are too few kadaj/cloud fanfics, so i'm glad your here! everyday i'm always droping by and checking when the next chapter is updated, and it is! so every day i just can't stop keeping my eyes on my laptop! i'm thankful that you update so fast, not like the others not completing their work, unlike you, you update everyday and i just can't stop loving this fic! i just can't stop reading it all over again!!! >_< so please please pretty pleeeeeaaaaase write more!!! and about the time your going to update please don't make it that slow, i just can't wait for what's coming up next! so good luck!!! i'll keep on looking! and keep up the good work! will be waiting!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - =) on September 20, 2005
    i like it. =)
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  • From ANON - Emeraldwolf on September 20, 2005
    I love this story. You are doing a fantastic job. Especially because you don't have Cloud and Kadaj immediately be all lovey dovey. I get sick of that cliche in fanfics a lot. I love your Vincent. ^_~ so conniving. I am waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter. Bravissime author!
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  • From ANON - Rissie on September 19, 2005
    Keeeeeeeeeee! *hides beneath rock* I don't know if any of that was referring to me or not. I know I commented that The Scientist was Shera, but I didn't think I was being offensive...Ehhhh. Sorry if I was - I'm just a little on the thick side, and I believe I was a little sick when I was writing that review.

    Despite the fact that it's quite different from the movie - which I have seen - it still fits. So...just, no complaints from this corner, you know? I think it's a great fic, and I'd really hate to see it suddenly get deleted because people got picky. So...just...um, sorry if it was anything I said?
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  • From ANON - atOmicSquid on September 19, 2005
    I think this story is fun! It's like a soap opera on 'shrooms.
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  • From ANON - Booper on September 19, 2005
    Wahhh!! Don't delete it just becauseof meanie pantses!!! I am enjoying it quite a bit ^^. I discovered your story last night, read all that was there, and then skimmed AFF for anything involving little Kadaj to fill the void :( Do you think the other boys will ever be involved (sorry if you mentioned them as beign dead or something in the story...I just got out of orientation for work and my brain is dead as a doornail!)

    Also to the people who are flaming...WTF?!?! This is supposed to be for fun and enjoyment of both the author and the readers. Who CARES if it isn't 300% accurate and every single character is "in character" It's fun and it's FICTION. Get off of your high horses,get over yourselves, go read something else or leave if you don't like it but don't ruin it for everyone else. The author is doing this for just as much of his/her enjoyment and owes no kind of service to you whatsoever. Go away kthxbye.


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  • From ANON - Aya on September 19, 2005
    whew! had me scared for a minute! I thought you were going to stop updating I was all 'NUUUU!!!!!' and stuff XD
    I'm so glad you're not ^_^ because this has a real plot (which is just too rare) and the random cuteness is included!
    (I kinda feel guilty but I skipped the little CxV lemon completely.... >.> I would have read it.... but old men are just too creepy lol)
    Cloud and Kadaj seem to moodswing all the time XD one minute 'grr rgh STAB' the next 'omg i wurb you' it keeps me well entertained ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kadaaju on September 19, 2005
    Hai. Everything is cool. -Waves a hand.- S'fine. Been in a rather foul mood, so you're not the only one cranky. I appologize for any attitude it seems I may have given you. -Patiently awaits another update.-
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  • From ANON - Arien on September 19, 2005
    Great story ^__^ I check often for updates and i think it's coming along really well. It'll be cool when you can see the movie, both Kadaj and Cloud are verrrrry hot in it. Keep up with the chapters, I look forward to finding out if Vincent catches up with them ^__^
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  • From ANON - nihiliatrix on September 19, 2005
    This is an intersting AU story...You might look more into the way that Jenova was leading the shm around by their need for a parent...They needed a mother so much that they'd do anything to get one, even such a crappy one as Jenova, even to the point of giving up their very selves...Becoming Sephiroth instead. By the way, you do realize that Rocket town is on a separate continent from Midgar right? By the way, Cid's scientist's name is Shera...he aborted the rocket launch to save her...but she was working on a faulty oxygen tank that would have killed him if he had launched. She becomes his servant because she doesn't know for absolute certain that the tank would have blown...When the rocket is launched against meteor, she helps save his ass again when the tank DOES blow.
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