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By : Lchan
  • From ANON - Kadaaju on September 19, 2005
    Actually, it's not dubbed. It's subbed, and it happens to be translated perfectly, thank you. Besides that fact, it came out sept 13th, with the subtitles already available, in Japan. November 29 It comes to USA. -Tilts his head.- Take it or leave it. Up to you, but I could now hardly care if you accepted the chance. -Shrugs, waves off and goes back to RP.-
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  • From ANON - Rissie on September 19, 2005
    *cackles* Wicked! Three chapters! *dances* Lady's name is Shera - thought The Scientist works, too, I suppose.

    You update so fast...Wow. Wish I could update like this...but I kinda forgot what the hell my fic was about. *sweatdrop*

    Onwards!
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  • From ANON - Leoth on September 18, 2005
    squeeeeeeeeeee! pls update tis awesome ^_^!
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  • From ANON - Aya on September 18, 2005
    ok... one minute cloud's an asshole then he's a hopeless romantic? He's got as many mood swings as Kadaj XDD
    OH NOES!!! TEENAGE ANGST XDD
    ok ok all joking aside, that was a really good chapter! Finally someone who doesn't have it an immediate 'i love you' 'i love you too' 'let's screw' 'ok' >< gets annoying after a while, you know?
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  • From ANON - S.s on September 18, 2005
    Oh - my - I - love - this - fic. I found this today and just started to read it... and now I'm begging for more! Oh my, I just love FF7 and Advent Children and Cloud and Kadaj and... this story is just so gorgeous. Perfect. Simply amazing. Please write more soon!
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  • From ANON - Lchan. on September 18, 2005
    Thanks everyone for reveiwing. ^^; Erm, yeah, I dont know what Kadaj is going to do next. Probably go balistic because his brothers abandoned him. xD He's already half way there in my veiw. Sorry if my Cid seems to flucuate, I never liked that character very much in the game; I thought he was too cocky. To the reveiwer with the AC dubbed, its most likely a chinese Rip because the real DVD doesn't have subtitles, and chinese cant translate Japanese for crap, in my veiw. Vise-versa. I'll be receiving the original AC from Japan in a couple of days, and I can speak Japanese locally. @_@ I hope there are no long conversations or my head'll explode.

    -Lchan
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  • From ANON - atOmicSquid on September 18, 2005
    I really like this story!

    I would love the read of Shera bitch-slapping Cid around a bit though. ^__^
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  • From ANON - Just_me on September 18, 2005
    I'm totally sorry if my last review angered you... I can be a horrible critic... It's just that I really enjoy your story.. so please, gomen ne?
    I think I did read some of your other works too... something with Vincent and a wolf-woman...
    I did like this chapter. Even with the sad parts... Rather kinky of Kadaj to turn Cloud into temporary shish-kebab... Heh, the wonders of revenge...:3
    Again, continue...onigai? ^^V
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  • From ANON - Kadaaju on September 18, 2005
    Mmm... I'll be waiting for an update, again. And, if you think your internet is fast enough, and if someone didn't already give you it... I have the link to the FFVII AC movie with subtitles. If you want it.. -waves a hand.- Just ask. Poor little Kadaaju.. He doesn't know how to handle love, never was one to receive it, ne? -Smirk.- Can't wait to see what is instore for our little SHM..
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2005
    :/ Okay, so I forgot the name of the bike. Big whoop. I saw the name -once-, and I just popped something out that looked similair. x3. As for moving too fast... I'm always thinking of new plotlines for different things, so I tend to loose interest in current projects quickly. Just check my other stories to see. Some havn't made it past chapter one. I'm trying to get this out before I loose track and not update it again. So, either keep up or not have it updated again because I became too busy. So thats probably why it seems fast.

    I'll try and slowl it down though. >> For your sake. I just sorta wanted Cloud to seem desperate for some lovin' after practically having everyone he cared for die, and Kadaj is just sort of " o__o... yeah... whatever dude. ". I think its just Cloud and he want to be loved, because he's lonely. ;3

    -Lchan
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2005

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  • From ANON - Stixx on September 17, 2005
    I love your story! :)
    Hope you'll update it soon!
    Kadaj and cloud are such a cute pairing. ^.^
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  • From ANON - Just_me on September 17, 2005
    Okaay, when I read the words; "do you love me?" I completely freaked out and thinking; this story is going way to fast... and once again I've proven myself to be a dork and read on before I do or say something... Is Cloud seeing Sephiroth in Kadaj or something? You know, one time hero and Cloud's eternal wet dream... poor Kadaj... *snickers*
    And isn't the bike called Fenrir? After the Northen myths of Ragnarok?
    And you got me laughing out loud with the 'putting mother together and rule the world'... Cloud should be so friggin happy it's a teen in front of him and not Sephi...
    And maybe I should be freaking out and saying that Cloud's 'I love you' 's are starting way to soon...

    Next chappie...
    *blinks and blinks again* Charming friends indeed... Cid really that snappy? and dangerous once given a beerbottle? :S
    I love the smut in this one, but don't turn everything lovey-dovey in the next chapters. I guess you already wrote the chapters, but please, let Kadaj be ashamed or something the next morning. a side-effect of his pride. Besides, I want to see Cloud suffer some more in the way of utter sarcasm between Cloud and Kadaj.
    You gave away a few spoilers here and there, but don't worry. A few grammar-mistakes, but hardly noticable... I've seen worser....
    And please, continue... you got my perverted mind on the role, so please update soon. ^^V
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  • From ANON - Shadow_Dweller on September 17, 2005
    OMG OMG OMG OMG FINALLY!! another AC related story, this is just like *drools* so well done, good job!! *hugs* im so HAPPY!
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  • From ANON - Kadaaju on September 17, 2005
    Woo, keep em coming! -Happy little clone now. Has had his fill for the night of stories, but would gladly like to see more, before he passes out cold.-
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