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Reviews for Cold Wind

By : BooperD
  • From young on October 03, 2005
    I just have to say that I love this story. Yay for YazooxKadaj!! I hope the next chapter comes out soon. Good luck~!!
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  • From ANON - Seph Ish Nummy on October 03, 2005
    Awesome! New chappie plox! :P
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  • From ANON - shalanar on September 28, 2005
    Gaaaah!!! Kadaj! Why did you leave? 'drags him back' A very wet Yazoo wants to speak with you!!!

    Anyway, very nice few chapters (I was so happy you updated! ^_^) and the two are still dancing nervously around each other. Now Yazoo gets a sudden realization and Kadaj is gone.....dammit! Please write more, i'm dying here to know what's goign to happen next! It was cute to see Kadaj so jealous, and amusing how he viewed his brother as 'asexual.' Yazoo's too good for anything else on the planet, 'cept maybe Kadaj. ;)
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  • From ANON - noone on September 27, 2005
    Oooooooooooooooooo Revelations are always good ^_^ Well, I'm wondering where Kadaj went, please update soon so I don't have to wonder anymore (such things as wondering hurt my head) baibai!
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  • From ANON - Leena on September 27, 2005
    You do realize that since Sephiroth was an asexual sociopath his "shards" would most likely be asexual sociopaths too. I'd slap an AU or OOC warning on this one...
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 27, 2005
    I agree with your author note. As someone who HAS a BROTHER, brother-fucking just squicks. It's refreshing to read someone's opionion that's the same as mine. Incest bites. >.
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  • From ANON - Erzulie on September 26, 2005
    Your Story Is L.O.V.E. ::snuggles::


    More soon, hai ? : x
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  • From ANON - kia on September 25, 2005
    ooooh~ I LOVE this *0*
    I really can't wait for more. I love how you portray them ; truly addicting!
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  • From ANON - Kumachan on September 25, 2005
    wah! I don't even have a hint of what's gonna happen next!mou... now I'm going to be reading the whole thing so don't get any ideas of stopping the stroy >_> or I'll have to follow you around with little puppy dog eyes XD
    Anywaaaaay..... onto the more intelligible comments.
    I think you should try to keep the talky confessy stuff off for a bit... because if you did all the confessing now, it would just make it too short.
    try making the chapters a little longer, or more descriptive. just a little bit more so, so you get more of a sense of imagery.
    other then those few suggestions, keep what you got! It's going quite well. I wish you luck!
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  • From MackyoStar on September 25, 2005
    Awww, this is cute. You have to let Loz have a chocobo now. Even if it’s just a pink plush one to hang from his wing mirror. Bless him lol
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  • From ANON - silver on September 24, 2005
    wow! i think you described him very well! i liked the idea of stopping to see the chocobos!
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  • From ANON - Erzulie on September 24, 2005
    I WANT MORE!!!!!! ::tugs cutely at your pants leg:: @.@
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  • From ANON - noone on September 23, 2005
    Awwwwwwwwww! I love this chapter! please update soon! And I think you're doing a pretty good job with Kadaj. He can seem, ummm, sad? I dunno what the word is, remember in the mocie when he's talking rufus and he's let "but we don't even know where mother is" he kinda sounded like he was going to cry, so thats how I imagined him when you wrote this chappie. Um that was random, but anyways, thanks for updating so quickly, hope you do it again! baibai!
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  • From ANON - shalanar on September 22, 2005
    Yay, one of my fave pairings! And I agree with your theory about the 'brothers.' It makes sense, and if anyone has a problem with it, well, no one is forcing them to read. Me on the otherhand, I loved this. Both Kadaj and Yazoo are dancing around the issue of being attracted to one another, but stubbornly denying it. Very good, please write more soon because the last chapter was much too short (basically, I want more). :)
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  • From ANON - noone on September 22, 2005
    oh my gosh! you already have the second chapter up! XD Hehheh, so Kadaj is imagining Yazzo without knowing it? Poor both of them having to suffer like that. Oh well, I hope you update soon. baibai!
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