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Reviews for Evolution of a Turk

By : Kathythetwisted
  • From ANON - No real name on January 15, 2006
    To be honest with you, I know absolutely nothing about final fantasy. Im too busy with real life, school, a career, etc, Ive never even cared. I know people who like iit, I guess. But even then they were more or less ambivalent.

    All I know is that FF(too many to count) is a video game.. I dont know who these people are, what materia is, ect. The first time I read over this, I kept wondering what relation the turks had to Turkey (the country), what's an Aeris, and why Shin-ra was suborninate to the Turks. etc.


    With that said, youve still managed to make me like this story. I suppose that's the best compliment I can give you. Your characters have a dynamic that works solidly, and are in themselves as mutifaceted as characters should be. Reno is not just a rebellous goofoff, when the situation demands it he can be a strong and decisive leader, etc.

    You've convinced someone who's never touched Final Fantasy, who's always disgusted by "Adult" themes in fanfiction to enjoy your story, enough to spend hours on wikipedia looking for more BKG info.

    Youre good, I really have to give you that.
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  • From ANON - 1984 on January 14, 2006
    It's good.

    How far along is Reno, and when's he due?
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  • From falsechaos on January 14, 2006
    Recced in on a forum and too lazy to retype so copypasting here. S'all true, though.
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    " "What about it? Like this wasn't already bad enough before. Now I have to go on living knowing that this little monster is drinking its own piss inside my synthetic man-uterus? !" "
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    Read it if only for that. A Final Fantasy VII fic in which Hojo did something weird to Reno and now Reno has to deal with it all the meanwhile keeping up with Turk business and those pesky AVALANCHE kids. Rude and Elena co-star in the fic as well, facing almost as much of an ordeal watching over Reno as Reno does in carrying Aeris' little Ancient tadpole.

    An exception in quality to most FFVII fics in general, not just mpreg fics, because *gasp!* it deals directly with events from the game! There's a real sense of this taking place in the FFVII universe, not just some generic quick photo backdrop so many fics are prey to. Add to this a very in-chara Reno and interaction from his fellow Turk members Rude and Elena, and you've got a solid story. While the mpreg is the overall plot of the story, it's not to the point that every sentence directly refers to it. Shit still happens. A meteor is about to slam the frigging planet and Reno's still got a job to do.

    "Evolution of a Turk" treads a very nice line between not taking itself too seriously and still presenting a non-parody story. It also avoids several mpreg cliches rather nicely. The doctor is shocked to find out a male is carrying a baby:
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    " "Last one saw me was a fucking nutjob." Reno remarked.

    Dr Harte nodded. "Understood. If we could get down to business,"

    "Of course." Tseng paused, and deciding Reno really wasn't going to say a word, continued, "How often do you deal with high risk pregnancies?"

    "Whenever one comes along, I suppose." the doctor paused and looked to Elena. "I'll need to examine you before we determine anything."

    Elena shook her head, and appeared a little flustered. "N-no. Not me..."

    "I don't understand." Dr. Harte admitted.

    Reno pushed away from where he'd been leaning on the wall, and spoke up. "Told you the last doctor saw me was a fucking nutjob." "
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    Dunno about the rest, but I'm kinda tired of the ol' doc smiling and calmly announcing to a guy, "You're having twins!"

    And best of all, bestest best of all, upon finding out he is with child, Reno's first reaction is somewhere along the lines of wanting to dig it out with a rusty spoon. None of that, "But it's a wittle human life! Meh bebeh!" No. He freaks. Wants it *out*. Over the course of the fic, he does develop a bregruding tolerence for it, to the point where he does recognize it as at least potentially human. This is done over the course of several chapters, however. In which stuff happens. And... hooboy... characters actually change and *develop*.

    Dear god. Three dimensional characters? What will these wacky fan-authors think of next?
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 16, 2005
    Interesting story:) I really liked the way the characters have been developing, but it seems odd Reno didn't put much effort in getting rid of the baby in the beginning. I think he would have been more than delighted about the fact that a great consumption of alcohol and drugs are a safer way to get rid of the kid in the beginning of the pregnancy than an abortion. Please, continue this story:)
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  • From ANON - Alexandra on November 28, 2005
    I think I died giggling at this chapter. It is odd, yes, but not out of character to learn how to /sew/ just to get clothes. And him stealing Rude's pants and hemming them just cracks me up. I love how you deal with the dynamics between the three Turks, and hopefully Tseng will be back. The Turks are kind of empty without their leader bossing them around. -snerk-

    Update?
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  • From ANON - RaiL on November 14, 2005
    Written really well. It took me all the self restraint I had not to laugh at the funny bits (it's night time here and there are people sleeping, I don't think they'd want to wake up to a hyena cackling.) I can't wait for the next chapter, you're doing an awesome job so far. Thank you for brightening up my night.
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  • From ANON - sephykoi on November 09, 2005
    aww hell, that Anon was me >
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 09, 2005
    Fuck, it cut off my freakin' review. *dies*

    Oh well.

    Recap:

    Loooove it. Can't wait for the next one!
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  • From ANON - sephykoi on November 09, 2005
    Weak? This chapter? Hell no! I loved it!!
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  • From ANON - kay kay on November 08, 2005
    Weeeeeeeeee! I think it was great and cute and fluffy!!! No the endidng didn't suck!!! Can't wait till the next update!
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  • From ANON - vspirit on November 08, 2005
    lady, a better author who could write the way you do simply does not exists. there ARE other good authors like you but i believe while there there are not-so-great authors, once each person find his or her style and gains a following from it, a better author doesn't exist anymore because you're already occupied a niche that's only big enough for one. means you're one of a kind. every good author out there is. be proud.

    and once again, thanks for this amazing story. i hope 11's in the making...

    =)
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  • From ANON - Atrocity-Chan on November 05, 2005
    holy. really, well, its not the best word i could think of, but really, this thing is god. i absolutley love it. Normaly, i'm not one to have anything to do with m-preg, but i was in a "Why teh fuck not?" kinda mood, and decided, if anything, m-preg with Reno would be more than slightly amusing anyways, i'm babling. . . if you dont continue.... i dont know what will happen, but i ebt it'll be something bad? how many people tell you that?
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  • From ANON - Maron-kun on November 05, 2005
    Omg. Just, wow... I've been looking at the title and summary for this fic for quite some time, shaking my head and going "wtf." I've had a bad night, and I must say, this fic made me smile and giggle and everything in between. :3 I love it. Your knowledge of FFVII is incredible. Wow. Ahah. Just, awesome. Write more. NOW. XD
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  • From ANON - jade on November 03, 2005
    ok...umm...it's alte so i might just be really tired but...is tseng dead? or just...away? i know stupid question but i really do not know.
    anyway great story...poor reno *sigh* i love him...he's so adrably annoying. please continue ^__^
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  • From ANON - sephykoi on November 03, 2005
    OMG a bitchy!Reno and Turk story!!

    You just got me addicted to Turk stories (again--had been years earlier but stopped for some reason o_O)

    LOOOOOVE Mpregs, and I was like, "OMG RENO PREGNANT?!! ... *grins* Awesome~"

    :D

    This story makes me VERY happy! I can't wait for the next chapter :3

    ~the Seph
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