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Reviews for Evolution of a Turk

By : Kathythetwisted
  • From ANON - RaiL on October 11, 2005
    Lol, I love the witty banter. Very well written and it really gets funnier as it goes on. XD I like how you write the dialogues between Reno and Rude.
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  • From ANON - RaiL on October 11, 2005
    I like how you've incorporated the game script into your fanfic! Very nicely done and it shows good effort. XD
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  • From ANON - RaiL on October 11, 2005
    Lol I love the innuendos you put in Chapter 2. Really suits the setting and Reno's becoming ever more adorable. XD
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  • From ANON - RaiL on October 11, 2005
    Wooh, just read chapter 1 and wished I finished FFVII sooner so I could've found this great fic sooner.
    Really nice idea you're going on with. I love the way you write it too! You characterize Reno really really well. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Tracy on October 11, 2005
    This story is really awesome! I love the detail and the characterization, it's really canon and believeable. Not to mention the fact that I, myself, think that MPreg are extremly underrated and they need more respect in the fiction world, and hopefully they can with good fics like this ^_^ Good work, keep it up!
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  • From on October 09, 2005
    Aww Reno. Loving this fic. I didn't think anything was wrong with this chapter at all. I love how you write Reno. I'm sure him knocked up can be hard. Can't wait until your next update, love this to death!

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  • From ANON - Nova on October 09, 2005
    OMFG... XD It's just so funny... and as it's happening during the game, and not after, I find it all very amusing. Poor Reno... But I love it when he and Elena talk. "Godmother?" XD
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  • From ANON - Sienna on October 09, 2005
    This chapter definitely had a different feel to it than the others, but it wasn't bad by any means. I thought one of your scenes ended a little abruptly but other than that, it was another great chapter.
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  • From ANON - vspirit on October 07, 2005
    -QUOTE-
    "What?" Reno asked, somewhat snippy, pulling apart his hamburger and flinging the tomato slice over his shoulder, not caring where it landed.

    "What's wrong?"

    "I don't like tomato."

    Elena shook her head. "That's not what I'm talking about."

    Tseng and Rude ate in silence.

    "I know something's bothering you." Elena insisted, picking at her salad.

    "Mmm hmm." Reno muttered.

    "And I want to know what that something is."

    "I can still taste the tomato. I know it was there." Reno mumbled.
    -UNQUOTE-

    This, my friend, is a work of pure genius. You SO got Reno and the chemistry between him and others down pat. And it's frickin' funny!
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  • From ANON - Sienna on October 07, 2005
    I'm glad this story is finally getting some well-deserved reviews. It's incredibly unique. It's wholly believable, strange as that may sound. I loved how you incorporated the sense materia into the story. The character relationships are well represented and each scene is beautifully written. Better to be nonspecific than overly specific and make a careless mistake, I say. I find nothing wrong with your timeline. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - ShadowIcia (not logged in) on October 06, 2005
    Oh cool! Reno knocked up! love it already.
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  • From ANON - Dark on October 05, 2005
    WOW!! I love Reno fics... I have to say this is really good.. Reno being pregnant... Its soo cool!! I hope you write more.. please?!?!
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  • From Firestorm717 on October 05, 2005
    Mmm...very interesting theory you have here. I'm incredibly obsessive when it comes to complex storylines, so this promises to be intriguing. And it's the Turks; can't go wrong with that, heh. Like the fluidity of the narration (there's a certain rhythm to good writing, and you've really nailed it) and Reno's characterization especially. Don't worry, I am quite amused at him as a jerk, plus there's much *jerking* around you can do...with his banter (what were you thinking of, eh?) in that context. Anyways, good luck with future chapters. And thanks for your wonderful recent review ^^.
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  • From ANON - Sienna on October 02, 2005
    Your knowledge of the Final Fantasy 7 universe is astounding. It just may rival mine. You have a gift for detail. You've seamlessly woven your own story into the established storyline. Very impressive, considering this is an MPREG. ^^; I can't wait to see how this story unfolds. I'm completely hooked. I love the Turks and I love how you've characterized them all thus far. You bounce effortlessly from humor to drama. Your plotline is realistic, so far. Very, very cleverly done.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 30, 2005
    OH YEAH! M-PEG! can't wait for the next update
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