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Reviews for My Broken China Doll

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  • From ANON - sephslover on November 26, 2005
    Thanks for another great chapter. The ecchi scene was absolutely delicious. XD
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  • From ANON - Crimson on November 26, 2005
    Nicely handled I think. I just want to hug Yazoo, and yet...I love when Vincent gets the better of him. Nice of you to have Vincent comment on the 'why' in that way--having his secrets, getting to act how no one expects him to. Nice. I still can't believe Kadaj is dead, but since Vincent gave Yazoo a sort of way out, and Yazoo does get that their cause is hopeless...I don't know, but it sure would be intersted if they did decide to give up and 'repent'. I don't know where you plan to take things from here, but I am more than ready to read another part if you write it.
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  • From on November 25, 2005
    OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG.

    This is like the best ever!!!!

    You're doing good, friend.

    //That'll do pig. That'll do.//
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  • From ANON - KereiKitsune on November 23, 2005
    >_> you must continue! They're a bit ooc but meh. I feel so bad for Yazoo ;_;
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  • From ANON - LordIckarous on November 18, 2005
    Wow..i didn't see that coming..Cool!^_^ Update pleaaaase!
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  • From ANON - RaiL on November 17, 2005
    Oh my gosh he's dead. O_o Ahh. O_o

    Nice chapter. I hope you write the rest soon.
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  • From ANON - Mariah on November 16, 2005
    Great chapter! It really shows Yazoo's emotions perfectly and I felt so bad for him. You've gotta continue, I love this fic!
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  • From ANON - silver on November 16, 2005
    aww!!!! poor Yazoo! awwww!!!!!! *sniff* wow
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  • From ANON - Crimson on November 16, 2005
    (sniffle) NOOOOO! Ahem. Anyway, so sad killing Kadaj off, but I like how it plays on Yazoo's emotions. I am really getting excited for the next part, seeing as how fragile (but bitterly angry) Yazoo must be right now. Anything could happen. I like to think that Cloud would not be so heartless, but then...Vincent would never REALLY do what happened in the first part as far as I see it, and THAT sure hasn't kept me from eating this fic up, so...BRAVO! And please keep going. There are some typos, but the plot is too well done to detract. Anxiously waiting again...
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  • From ANON - sephslover on November 15, 2005
    Wow! Ch3 was really intense. I mean, can I breathe now? ~_~"
    Thanks for one more excellent chapter.
    Your fic's goin' right to my personal FF collection. ^^ *chus*
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  • From ANON - RaiL on November 14, 2005
    I re-read the first chapter and must say that I love the "chocobo in head lights" line! Nice!

    I really hope your next chapter is longer! I was just getting myself fully glued to my screen when the chapter ended. Ahh and the cliffie! Cliffies are evol! XD Good cliffie though, I can't wait to find out what happens next. I truly hope you continue soon, the suspense is killing me. :) Great story so far.
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  • From ANON - Kasuchan on November 11, 2005
    This was really wonderfull. I love how vunerable you made Yazoo, and the relationship between him and Loz is quite adorable. Actually, the relationship between the two of them is probably my favourite part of this story. I normally don't like stories in where there in unconsentual sex, but this was written very nicely. Really, this is one of the best stories I have read on here.
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  • From ANON - eerian sadow on November 07, 2005
    i don't know who told you that you weren't a good writer, but they lied to you. your piece here feels a little rushed in spots--mostly things i would have expanded on that you didn't--but it is a good piece of writing. you've done well. i'm anticipating more of this story.

    eerian
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  • From ANON - Crimson on November 07, 2005
    Not a good writer, I think that is quite a mistaken belief. I was floored to see a new part, and I enjoyed the brotherly interaction, though I am not so sure about the City of the Acients part. I thought perhaps Vincent would show up again when Yazoo was alone in Midgar, but having things like this, changing the story-line...it does intrigue me. You better not leave things here. More!
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  • From ANON - marianne on November 06, 2005
    waiting anxiously for the next chap. Im really liking this fic. bad bad vinny. But I think he and Yazoo make a good couple(evil grin).I had already saw a fanart between them. HUGS YAZOO AND COMFORT HIM...KEEP WITH IT, PRETTY PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!
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