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Reviews for My Broken China Doll

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  • From ANON - person on November 06, 2005
    oooooooooh, cool! ^_^ What happens next, what happens next?! I hope you update soon, I really wanna see what happens next. ^_^
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  • From ANON - sephslover on November 05, 2005
    Oh, don't be so modest. You ARE a good writer, and your fanfic's becoming more and more exciting.
    I was afraid you'd get discouraged by some review but fortunately you were not.
    Keep going please. ^^
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  • From ANON - Sarah on November 05, 2005
    Very nice fanfic. Hope to see another chapter soon. :)
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  • From ArdwynnaMorrigu on November 05, 2005
    I like it. There are some issues with sentence construction, but overall the grammar is decent and the story is fairly easy to follow. There's not much exposition of the plot yet, but it's just the beginning. I'd like to see what Vincent's reason was, if he had one. Yazoo's shame and Loz's anger at what has happened is coming across very well. Fanfiction is different things to different people and we're not all militant fandom purists. Sometimes a bit of eye candy smut is all I want. Your fic has that and shows potential for becoming something more. I definitely got the kind of thrill I come to this site for out of your fic.
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  • From ANON - kita on October 29, 2005
    I actually thought about how fun it would be with a V/Y pairing when I read this thing. Nice!
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  • From ANON - Crimson on October 22, 2005
    I don't know why, but I really liked that. I know Vincent would never do something like this, and yet...I still enjoyed every minute. Well written, especially from Yazoo's point of view. He's my favorite of the trio, and you did him justice, I do believe. I would certainly read it if you continued this.
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  • From ANON - Lettie on October 20, 2005
    That was awsome!! Please continue. Maybe Loz and Kadaj could revenge their brother and hurt one of Vincents friends this time? (well I´m not sure Vin has friends. I mean the characters he travels with in ff7. I´m not finished playing it yet. But I have seen the movie though. Oh now I´m rambling on and on. Sorry!) Update please :-)
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  • From ANON - Aihythil on October 19, 2005
    I loved this one!!! MORE!!! Give ous MORE!!! :)
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  • From on October 14, 2005
    Nya! This was a really good story! Please do another chapter or something! Wonderfully done! ^___^ *huggles Yazoo*
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on October 14, 2005
    I thought you did a good job on this. I almost fell off my chair, as I am right in the middle of writing a Vin/Yazoo dark fic, with Vincent being the dark one. Its nice to see someone else doing a different take on him. Please continue on with this!!
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  • From ANON - RaiL on October 13, 2005
    Yes!! Please continue!! Don't leave it just like that! I like how you write so please do write more! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kada\'-kun on October 11, 2005
    -Gasp- You have to continue, my Aniki would love you. You see, I roleplay Kadaj on Yahoo, and I have Yazoo and all that....my Yazoo is totally obsessed with Vincent...seeing a well-written fanfiction would make his day. ;-; Please continue! I'll give you cookies....!!!!
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  • From ANON - Faust on October 11, 2005
    ^_^ That was good, I really liked it. I'd toyed with the idea of a Yazu/Vincent relationship, but it never went anywhere. I hope you continue this story. @_@ Eee, short review, but I don't know what else to say.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 10, 2005
    Sorry, winter, but saying it's just fan faction and we can do what we want doesn't fly. Fan fiction is no excuse to take characters people love and twist them to suit the author's own personal fantasies. That's what original fiction is for.

    Leaving a review of a story you like and I don't makes me a poor and negative person? Tell that to the many authors whose work I've liked and told so.

    Please explain the don't like, don't read rule? How do you know if you like it until you read it?

    I know this is all a waste of time since my original review has magically disappeared and all that's left are reviews praising this work. How sad, final.

    That is all.
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  • From ANON - Aya on October 10, 2005
    ;______; poor Yazoo!!!
    I would love it if you continured this, it has potential! And while I looove Vincent.........
    Have loz kill him in the most painful way imaginable >_____>
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