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Reviews for Rebirth

By : GreenEyez
  • From ANON - Anon on November 08, 2006
    Wow, this was seriously the best FF7 fic i have read so far, i mean, wow... you have done a fantastic job at creating the plot and characters, i'm simply stunned at how well it was done. It really is a total mystery as to why this fic has so few reviews, but that tends to happen to stories that try something 'original' like yours did, i have read some fics in other archives as well that have plots that blow my mind, yet have so little amount of hits and reviews.

    People tend to want to read 'traditional' stories instead of original and new like yours, that might be the reason there are so little reviews, i know this, because i was skeptical about reading this fic after i read your note at the beginning of chater 1, that this was your version of Advent Children, i was hesitant to read afterwards.

    But now i am glad i read it, to think i was about to miss this fantastic piece of fanfiction because i was skeptical about reading it... hahaha.

    Anyways, i truly loved this fic, my hat is off to you and i will now end this review by saying: Fan-fucking-tastic, keep up the excellent work with your future fics!
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  • From TheSmoothSeungsation on September 13, 2006
    You know, I've read a lot of fanfics in my time, and yours was by far the best I've ever read.
    Upon saying that, let me be the first to admit that Advent Children would be a hell of a lot better if it followed your storyline, not that I dislike AC, the film is great just the way it is, but your version is just so much better.
    A huge 5-star and a "well done" from yours truly.
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  • From ANON - Chobi on January 06, 2006
    That was awesome. How the hell hasn't this got more views and reviews!?!

    It's a well crafted story. The love scenes are actually written well, there's actually genuine feelings of passion there, not just mindless humping and crap which get really old really fast. It's wonderful how you actually incorporated a decent plot into the story, and tender feelings between Cloud and Tifa. The pregnancy thing was powerful and sweet, and it was really touching how Cloud was so protective of Tifa and his child. Not that lemons are bad, but tender feelings such as Cloud fighting to protect Tifa and his baby girl beats lemons anyday. It was good to see a feminine, motherly and vulnerable side of Tifa and a protective side of Cloud.

    Gorgeous story, you make the cloti fangirl in me proud! ^___^ You should really write up more cloti fics around here, they're in dire need, and you've got potential!


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  • From ANON - Saoirse on December 18, 2005
    Cloti rules and so does this fic! I am surprised that there weren't more hits for this fic! It's too good to pass up.
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  • From ANON - GreenEyez on October 20, 2005
    I find the review from Angledust really rather sad. Its not often an author gets criticized for spending more time on plot and character development than describing sex acts. Its people like you that give fan fiction a bad name. I posted my story on this site because the original version of Chapter 3 contained information that I could not include in the edited version which is posted on fan fiction. If all you really want is to read pornography, there are much better examples in Hustler or any of the other snutmags than you will find on this site. Its obvious from the way you write that you have only a basic grasp of the English language and really no writing skills to speak of. The fact that you have one more review than I do with twice as many hits should tell you something. Anyway, I am reconsidering posting my story on this site. If I get one more review like this, I will pull it. I just hope that people like you are the exception, not the rule.
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  • From ANON - angel dust on October 19, 2005
    alright, i have to say that this story really looked like somehting good until there was hardly any smut going on in here. there are to much facts and too much story and there isnt enough smut.

    now i can see why you only have 2 reviews, with mine 3, you shoulf put this story on a site like fanfiction . net

    it would go better there.

    p.s dont insult me or tell me to go to hell or anything else that has to do with an insult, cause ive heard most of it already.
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  • From ANON - Alyssa on October 18, 2005
    Very nice write. You just made my day. =) Please update soon!
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  • From on October 17, 2005
    Holy crap, I've been dieing for some Cloti CloudxTifa around here. I haven't read it all yet, *needs sleep*
    I'm so glad someone is writing this pair. So you made me a very happy Cloti fangirl.
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