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Reviews for Surely, She Ain't Serious

By : KSipesh
  • From ANON - Gelgarin on December 30, 2005
    Chapter 17 is here and we learn a valuable lesson about smoking.

    Well writen as allways.
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  • From ANON - Sands on December 30, 2005
    I'm just saying here....because this has been going on the last few chapters...

    Cid dwells on depression because he can't have Tifa. Tifa comes and says, "I'm goin' back to Midgar whether you like it or not. Sorry." And then she gets him aroused. Cid has second thoughts for about half a second and then they have sex.

    It's all pretty well written and everything...I'm just getting a little....burned out on the pattern. It's almost like...I'd either just like to them to get to Midgar and cut the crap.....or for Cid to just get ahold of himself and tell her no. It's only gonna make it harder that she's leaving. And it's gonna butcher his pride when it's all over. She doesn't want him. She doesn't love him. For her, it's just sex. But he really likes her and he keeps giving in to her. He may look on that as weakness on his part. (And Tifa's reactions to his rejection might be interesting to explore).

    So yay....that's all.
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  • From ANON - Marcus on December 30, 2005
    This is a great story :), I love it. I find myself coming back everyday to see if its there. About time you updated. You need to type faster, suspense is not my thing ;) Keep Writing!
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  • From ArdwynnaMorrigu on December 25, 2005
    Wow. Cid's a direct kind of guy but that takes the whole three-tiered wedding cake. Vincent was very understanding. Although I don't suppose he'd really mind being groped by a tough rugged pilot. Whee! A little CidxVinny just because... XD
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  • From ANON - Marcus on December 25, 2005
    That was pretty funny what Cid did blowing up on Vincent, though it was pretty apparent when they started dancing, something like that would of happened. I'm curious it seems that you are trying to e loyal to the movie, if you seen it? With Vincent going to the Ancient City, or is it just me tripping on weed? The point is on whether you are going to get Cid with Tifa or no. Well whatever, that was pointless, anyway I am enjoying this story, I hope your updating isn't as bad as you make it seem it is.
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  • From ANON - Risa on December 23, 2005
    Holy crap, that was brilliant!! So funny... priceless, even. Great work, doll. Some of your absolute best character work in this piece, once again demonstrated in this hysterical chapter. You rule. You know this.
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  • From ANON - Risa on December 16, 2005
    Oh, crap... interesting twist for Vincent. Poor guy... kinda. lol Great work, once again! I'm still as interested as ever to see what's coming!
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  • From ArdwynnaMorrigu on December 15, 2005
    I know it's not nice to laugh at the misery of others but that's just too funny. Dude, how wasted was O'Malley?
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  • From ANON - Gelgarin on December 15, 2005
    Fast becoming one of my favorate stories on the sight, I find myself checking abck every few days spacificly to see if the next chapters up.
    All the charicters are realy well writen.
    Cant wait for part *err 15 I think*
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  • From ANON - abbykitty on December 15, 2005
    still reading and still in love with this story!^^ I'll start commenting more after exams are over.;)

    *motivates*
    http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v283/sweetabbykitty/TifaCidBanner.jpg
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  • From ArdwynnaMorrigu on December 14, 2005
    Clear the flight deck... oy! =P I never actually thought of Vincent as the type to revert to cracked analogies to explain things, but I can see that one. He'd probably be more direct and clinical if giving an actual Official Birds and Bees talk instead of just having a discussion about the cruder aspects with a friend. None of that "Daddy has a car, Mommy has a garage" business. I wouldn't ordinarily see it, but Cid and Tifa fit pretty well in this story.
    (no, I don't meant THAT kind of fit =P although that's working out well too). I'd love to see if or how they sort out their dating/commitment issues.
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  • From ANON - Nevaeh Bluden on December 14, 2005
    what do you mean only a few ppl are reading? i've been following this thing forever! lol, well i guess i should leave more reviews then, huh? god, this is great! it makes me giggle!

    -nev
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  • From ANON - Moonglider on December 14, 2005
    Tifa's going to be sore in the mornin' I say. Well done chapter, I love the trust that's developed between the two, and you had me almost crying the last few chapters. I'm glad to see another update and can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Moon_Muse on December 14, 2005
    Naughty, Flirty, Angsty.....I love it! Keep those chapters coming you're doing great.
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  • From ANON - Risa on December 13, 2005
    That was an AWESOME chapter!! I loved the... analogies given by Vince. Very nice. You still write as beautifully as ever. Well done.
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