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By : sailtheplains
  • From ANON - Maron on January 19, 2006
    Yay! I can't wait for Ciiiid.
    And I like how Cid and Zet are turning out. @-@ -Flails.- That chapter, like, made my heart all like OMGHOLLOW. Because I was aaaanxious. Poor Tifa, I feel so bad for her.

    And I'm not sure. They said I wasn't 18+, but I am... This girl I know here that hates me might have set me up. People are shallow. Rawr. As long as I can still review, it doesn't matter.

    Anywho. n_n Can't wait for the next chapter, even though you just updated. x3 Your updates always make me happy.
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  • From ANON - ezekiel on January 19, 2006
    this is a great story ( undoubtably the best FF7 fic and propably one of the best videogame fics on AFF)
    keep up the good work

    PS. did you borrow that monsters with gill and stuff from Legendary frogs: all about random battles ( if you haven't heard of it it's a flash animation
    on legendarylilypad.com, it's a must see)

    Quote: myes, i have no idea why these random monsters carry 1326 Gill and a magical fire ring, it will forever be a mystery.
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  • From ANON - Maron on January 19, 2006
    Err.. and the anon. review was me. ... Apparently I have no more AFF account! ^^; Just letting you know.
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  • From DarkFae on January 19, 2006
    GAH!!!!! you keep me on the edge of my seat! just when you think its over you hit us with something that doesn't seem like a big deal... BUT IT IS! *cries* oh man, poor cloud (i'm still not over that...) you're always improving with every chapter, i love it!! UPDATE!!!!!

    -nev
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  • From ANON - VahlanaAngel on January 18, 2006
    Cloud................ :( It's too sad. I almost cried, but Cloud is everlasting, so he won't be truly dead in our hearts. I hope Tifa ends up with Vince, cuz she deserves someone good. Vince should just make every woman his harem. Ya know we all want the man. Of course, all the cutiepies can be our harem too. (VxCxZxSxKxYxLxCid) Vince's hand is back, that's cool. You have to get Cid and Zet together for a bittersweet scene before this ends.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 18, 2006
    Whoo! @@ I had to catch up quiiiick. Eep.

    Since its really really late and I haven't slept for over 24 hoooours... :3 Short review. Apologies!
    ... Wow. Is that whole monster with the fire ring and gil thing... XD I was reminded of All about random battles. Muwaha.
    I LOVE YOUR CAMEOS. I don't think I said that before. x3 Cameoscameosyayay.

    I was on the edge every second when Vincent raised his gun. O_O Literally. PoorCid. TT;

    The flashback of Vincent's arm.. with Hojo.. it made me actually very uneasy, and cringe a lot. Which is most certainly a good thing! It's hard to make me cringe! -Whacks chest with fists.- I love how you can make me feel the emotions of the characters, the paaaain. I swear, I kept looking down at my arm the whole time, makin' sure that tingly feeling was just coincidental! x_o

    But then it was happyyaygiddycandygum dropsandsugarfuntimeland!! And then... it wasn't! I love the angsty drama. AGH. That was... a really.. really.. unexpected way to end that chapter. Wow. I love it. Loveitloveitloveiiiit. I'm happy to know its not -that- close to the end either. n_____n
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  • From ANON - Femme Fatal on January 17, 2006
    All I can say is wow. Vincent got his arm back, and Cloud... Almost makes me sad, which is a feat given that I'm a Cloud hater (no offence to any Cloud lovers out there). Wow. I wonder if he'll survive somehow? Anyways, looking foward to the next chapter.
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  • From odalisque on January 17, 2006
    You have written a cruel, tender successful ending for now although I have to admit, I am DESPERATE to read the next part. I'm not sure I can dawdle and wait for the chapters to add up as usual; I might have to check back on this every single day in an attempt to read the last bits. In an attempt not to ruin it for anyone, I don't want to say to much, except, holy fuck you asshole. That was brilliant.
    You know me, I'm a sucker for the sadness shit; I cried and cried.
    Madam, I salute you. Well. Done.
    PLEASE put up MORE of this SOON. I live in agony, racked in the theroes of little tears, no exaggeration.
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  • From ANON - Sands on January 17, 2006
    Yuffie waved her hand. “Don’t worry ‘bout it. M’fine. Reno saved my intestines like a champ.”


    And your last chapter. Holy shit. Well, I had a comment, but I don't wanna give any spoilers, just in case someone looks at these. But, you know, $%^&$%^&#!!!!
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  • From ANON - TheEndOfAllThingsGoodAndBad on January 17, 2006
    god... Tifa seems to be made to suffer. Im a huge Tifa/Cloud guy. The deeper (and in some cases tragic) it gets, the better, and when it gets like that, and turns out to have a happy ending, to me, thats the ultimate. If I get to see a happy ending in this one, to me, Ultima of ultimates, heh..

    But Tifa does seem to be made to suffer. Vincent too.

    I beg thee for a happy ending. I wish I had been reading and reviewing this story from the beginning. I feel like such a last minute joiner into something great.

    I beg thee again, happy ending. You've made me envision the poor girl killing herself with bedridden depression, thanks a lot, :p
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  • From DarkFae on January 17, 2006
    *CRIES* i knew it!! god that was great!! i'm curious to see how your going to wrap this up... oh man, ur a fuckin genius!

    -nev
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  • From ANON - Constantly Baffled on January 17, 2006
    Good stuff man, keep it up. Oh, and don't worry about your version of the past conflicting with DoC. the Game focuses on events somewhere around seven years after Advent Children. Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Femme Fatal on January 16, 2006
    Another great chapter. I can't wait! What'll happen to Cloud? How will Tifa and the others take it? What does Cloud want Vincent to do? Can't wait to find out! I found it pretty interesting that you mentioned the monsters having money and items. Been wondering this for years. My guess is that they get these things when they eat people who have them. I don't know, maybe they don't disslove in stomach acid or something. I never even thought about shiny objects! Makes sense too. As always, well done!
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  • From ANON - VahlanaAngel on January 15, 2006
    I was gonna say NNNNOOOOOOO NNNNOOOOTTTTT MMMMYYYYY YYYYYUUUUUFFIIIEEKKIIINNNSSSSS!! She rocks, and it would be very bad if she were gone. And would someone please knock Clenova on it's hiney? Here's a kiss to make Cloud better. My Vin i hope he's gonna be ok. I will cry if he dies or get hurt.
    more please..... :)
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  • From ShadrachVS on January 15, 2006
    Another good set of Chapters, yeah I was at work and more than a little bit mind stretched... other office employee was sick so I was trying to be two people... its a lot harder than it sounds...
    You are still doing great, and well everyone else is covering most the ground I would comment upon... but about the Vincent background thing I started last review - I meant to add in; I dunno where you are getting the background information, but it is really filling in well and meshing with the knowns I do remember about Vincent, if you are making it out on your own; excellent work with a complicated character.

    Oh about the swapping PoV, it is a powerful way to flesh out a story as long as it used correctly; and well, you have a good knack for it so keep on rollin' with it. If you want a bad example of PoV usage, watch any episode of DBZ where they spend 3 episodes reviewing each and every single active characters view points on each and every action that occurs... Even Robert Jordan at his worst is no where near that bad (he just gets carried away with descriptions that aren't exactly always important to the story) but atleast he tries to paint a full picture, a lot of authors, myself included just glaze what is necessary and let the rest be up to the reader. er rambling again.

    Oh yeah, love the usage on the materia now as well; I see my insanity made someone laugh, I think my job is done for now... wait nope... gotta do it again soon. If you do read my works, Wintermoor is kinda hanging at a the opening, and well Aberrations is also hanging there; Im working on 3 stories at once so my updates take time and come in clusters. So excuse the well... unfinished business there. Keep up the excellent work, and Ill keep reading!

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