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From ANON - MaTaKi on January 11, 2006
Oh my God. I absolutely -loved- chapter 19. The materia!! Can you tell I'm a Yuffie fan? XD Me and my obsession with materia and all. I dunno what it is, but gee, the way you described it all, I could practically feel like -I- was holding materia and that I knew what it felt like. XP As corny as that sounds. I love you for it, though. XD And I thought Zet was so cute buying those goggles for Cid. Aww!! x3

And chapter 20 was awesome, too. I really like Cloud's point of view, too, like Maron. It's really a surprise that JENOVA is taking a hold of him again; I didn't expect that, but I really like that twist. I really can't wait to see more of what happens. Keep it up, man!! An again, like Maron said, you have an awesome way of ending your chapters. It really keeps me coming back for me. :3

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From on January 10, 2006
Yey for a Cloud chapter!!! -Huggles the author.- X33 I loved it. Eee. YOU END THE CHAPTERS SO... PERFECTLY. o_o They're so suspenseful! And I actually like Zet. A lot. Does she have a thing for Cid? Wait. No. Don't answer that. XD I like surprises. I love the way this is going. You have a knack for describing simple things perfectly. And Tifa finally gets her way. xB Yayayay. I was kinda afraid you'd make Vincent and Tifa together.

Also, wow. You're updating a lot recently. :'D YAY. I think I'm gonna cry the day this fic comes to an end.
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From ANON - Femme Fatal on January 10, 2006
Ah, more suspense. Looking foward to the next chapter. I feel kinda sorry for Zet. As for Cloud, I can't say I'm a fan of his, but I really like how you did this chapter. Only one thing I'm wondering though; is it Sephiroth or Jenova or both that possess Cloud? Keep it up!
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From ANON - Stephanie on January 10, 2006
Oh man, this honestly is my favorite story on AFF. The plot, style, everything is intriquing. It's so hard to find such things on AFF, and when I come across them, they aren't written well. ... This one, however, is. It's simply the best thing on here in my opinion.

I love the bittersweet relationship between Cloud and Tifa. This chapter was... amazing. You handled Cloud's POV very well.

... I'm curious as to how this is going to end. You've got me all confused about who I want with Tifa since I love both Cloud/Tifa and Vincent/Tifa. ...You're toying with my mind!

In short, I can't wait for more!
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From ANON - Nevaeh Bluden on January 10, 2006
hell yeah, ramen rocks! Oh man, u got Cloud down so good (geostigma... or some variations thereof, right?), and yaaaaaaaaaaay tifa finally getting some! that poor girl, i felt so sorry for her. i was expecting (hoping?) that she would go for vincent, but she got what she wanted ^_^ *ponders* what's cid gonna say about the goggles?! gaaaahhh! i love this story!

-nev
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From ANON - MaTaKi on January 10, 2006
Sorry I didn't get to review the last chapter. Although, I did really love it. Especially the description of materia. Materia is such interesting stuff. I just love it. XD Oh yeah, and when you described Vincent's snack. XP And this chapter was really great as well. Again, I love the way you do Yuffie and Reno and Vincent's personality is just... perfect. As for Vincent liking Tifa, well, I don't really like that couple, but what can I say? XD It was still really cute. Especially all the way at the end of it. But! Other than my biased opinion on the couple, I did love it and I do hope to read more of it.

Gah. Tifa, Yuffie, and Reno are so sweet. Thinking of Vincent and his chocolate. Soo cute! x3
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From ANON - Femme Fatal on January 09, 2006
I've been reading this a while and I finally caught up with you. This is pretty good! Hope you don't leave us in suspense too long. What happens to Cloud? Is Jenova really dead? What will happen between Vincent and Tifa? Can't wait to find out!
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From on January 09, 2006
About the materia; I've never read that in any other fanfiction. I love it. I would've never thought of something like that! The way you say it, it makes sense. Why doesn't everyone have materia, when it seems so easy to handle in the game? Only the strong should be able to carry such a responsibility, eh?

And another chapter from Cloud's POV would be excellent. It's interesting reading the way he reacts to things, and its very amusing too. xD

Eeee chapter 18! -Flails all happy-like.- I hope you don't mind my sudden constant reviewing. x.o Now, I usually hate things concerning hinted Vincent/Tifa, but it was so FLUFFY and CUTE. O_O I even giggled a little, and awed and cooed and all that other mushy stoof. Arr. And Reno's so cool.
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From ANON - Nevaeh Bluden on January 08, 2006
lol! angel sanctuary... angels, demons, love, hate, betrayal, political trickery, sexual boundaries... heaven, hell, right, wrong... yeesh, i couldn't even begin to describe it! i highly recommend picking up the series (all 11 of them -_-;).

But ne way...

That was great! (30 years, huh? ;-) ) damn, i wanna see vince and tifa get it on, thats a hell of a way to get them together! (way to bring the focus back! ^_^)
PS, thanks for the advertisement! lol ^_~ see u next chappy!!

-nev
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From on January 07, 2006
Ahh!! -Flails.- Gosh, I am so glad I read this. You are doing.. So. Well. All the characters personalities are fit to perfection. I love the way you portrayed Cloud, confused and crazy, as most people tend to overlook that. As many of your other reviewers have claimed, I must agree on the whole Vincent chocolate thing. XD So adorable. I think I squeak everytime I read him taking out a peice of chocolate. Or a cookie. Or something.

Reno/Yuffie... Oh dear. I never thought I would actually consider the couple, but after reading, I love it. Their relationship is so hilarious, and Reno's such a little perv. Muwaha.

And, in your last chapter, I adore the way you described the materia. It was really chilling, and even sent shudders up my spine thinking about it. And you left it at such a cliffhanger!! Eee. I'm adding this to my favorites. xD Keep it up, this is a story I know I could go back and read over and over and never get bored.
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From DarkFae on January 07, 2006
GAH! not fair! lol, another great chapter tho! it proves you can do action as well as angst. ^.^ its good that you listen so well to your fans (chocolate! yaay!). Hey, do you read Angel Sanctuary? i was noticing parallels, but mebbe its cuz i just read #11. (mostly the hip statement Reno made to Vincent... god, he cracks me up! "...And your hips!� He shook his head. �But I suppose it�s a blessing. It�ll be easier when you have children, you know.� ) now i must demand a prompt update! i'm getting all worked up now...

-nev
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From ANON - VahlanaAngel on January 07, 2006
Hey no prob. Still can't get enough of Vince and the chocolate. I hope you don't mind that I put that in my fic too. I've seen a few people put the Vince/Chocolate thing in theirs. Yuff/Reno they are perfect for each other. This fic makes me laugh too.Gotta have laughter. (My fic is under Games/Rpgs, FF7. It's called JI Project. )
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From DarkFae on December 30, 2005
hey, now, don't take me too seriously, i love your fic! i feel its our responsability as reviewers to offer support and suggestions in a constructive nature ^_^ (did that sound lame to anyone else? lol did i spell stuff right? yeesh...) you portray vincent as an quiet intellectual with a dark past, not a sappy douchetart with super-baggage, and i respect that. can't wait for the next chapter, as usual ^_^

-nev
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From ANON - MaTaKi on December 29, 2005
I really love your fic! I even showed my best friends and they love it too. XD Please, please continue.
You did an amazing job with their personalities and I absolutely -LOVE- Yuffie and Reno's relationship. I never thought that pairing could work out before I read your fic, but now I really support it and I love the way they treat each other. XP

And Vincent being a chocoholic is absolutely adorable. x3

Keep it up. I'd love to keep reading more!
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From ANON - Rune on December 28, 2005
Always been big fan of cloud/tifa. I'm a hopeless romantic for the Childhood love thing blossoming.
You do angsty romance very well. I find myself always reading ahead in the chapters to read about Tifa :p

This is easily one of the best fics I've read on this site. I just wanted to say kudos!

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