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Reviews for Fantasy Love

By : Aydrian
  • From ANON - Yunie on January 01, 2006
    Then my advice to you is don't write when your tired. If you have to wait a week or two before you're 'in the mood' again then so be it. Your writing won't suffer so badly then.
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  • From Aydrian on January 01, 2006
    I've never tried mixing romance and sex. Well I did once, and it became a very popular Harry/Hermione story on HPFF. But the thing is, this is the SECOND sex scene I've written in over a year. I wrote all 15 pages in one sitting, and by the time I got to the sex I was tired as hell but I knew that if I didn't finish it then I wouldn't be in the mood to for at least another week or two.

    I tried my best to put these two's feelings for each other into the mix, not wanting them to just fuck like rabbit and that's it. Besides, it's not over yet, do you judge a porn that's only had a fingering scene so far? No, that's stupid. As I get more into this story, my familiarity will come back and it won't be so "tasteless".
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  • From ANON - Yunie on January 01, 2006
    A story can have a plot then during the sex scenes degenerate into tasteless porn...such as this story showed so very well.
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  • From ANON - Kathy on January 01, 2006
    Tasteless porn? Well, a tasteless porn has no plot and this story definitely has one. And it's so romantic! *sighs* Don't listen to those stupid people. You did a great job. Please update soon, I'm so curious what happens next! ^^
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  • From ANON - Yunie on January 01, 2006
    I don't read M/M. I think it's disgusting.
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  • From ANON - Hannah on December 31, 2005
    YES!!!!! Finally someone decided to write a Yuna/Tidus fic!!!!!!!!! This is sooooooo gooood.... You really know how to write for pleasure!!!! Please update soon!!!!!
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  • From yaoijunkie on December 30, 2005
    Oops. Aff.net ate the second half of my review.

    Anyway! While the squished text makes your story hard to read it is still a good story. It has a lot of potential :)
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  • From yaoijunkie on December 30, 2005
    Omigod people don't be so mean >_
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  • From on December 30, 2005
    Really good. Love it.

    Emerald and purple.... eyes?

    Hehehe. Love.
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  • From ANON - Yunie on December 30, 2005
    I find it funny that you whine about there being no "quality sex" on aff.net and that you're going to change that... then you write cheap, tasteless porn filled to the brim with clichés and jargon all squished into nearly unreadable chunks of text. If you're going to get all high and mighty with people you might want to first make sure you're as good as you think you are.
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  • From ANON - Aydrian on December 30, 2005
    Homophobic rant? Man, if you're not going to write a constructive comment then don't bother commenting at all.
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  • From ANON - Mo on December 30, 2005
    This would've been better had it not been for the homophobic rant.
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  • From ANON - SpiritWolf on December 19, 2005
    WOW so far I really like this story heck it is rare to find a story here and FF8 that deals with M/F I mainly see it only being M/M eww and anothig thing that is rare well for me that is see stories dealing with Tidus and LuLu or Tidus ad Rikku so far I only found one story with Tidus and LuLu and that was good oh well keep up the good work and update soon
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  • From ANON - PockySamurai on December 16, 2005
    Interesting. I like it. (But then again, I like your writing.)


    Where's the next chapter?
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  • From ANON - Jadeskye on December 16, 2005
    It's the main source of love story throughout the game yet people never focus on it. Thank you for creating the start of what i hope will be a fantastic yuna/tidus. I'm very impressed so far :)
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