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Reviews for Field Day

By : Ping
  • From ANON - Ri on December 24, 2005
    Mmmm hot mmmm Zell on the bottom. XD I mean i enjoy always reading about Zell being on top and all but finally seeing Irvine! ofall FF8 guys actually being on top, made my day. Lovely job keep it up ^^
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  • From ANON - lo on December 24, 2005
    This is great not only is the character interaction great, but the story is also increadibly hot. Keep up the good work, this is a lot of fun to read!!
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  • From ANON - Eoko on December 24, 2005
    Kay, now, I'm known to read anything with Zell as long as it's yaoi and not with Squall. -holds up fingers in a cross- Anyway, I'm also a long time RPer of Zell and my bestest RP buddies are KittyMeowMaxwell of Irvine and Valeska of Seifer. It's a very nice RP. I like the writing of this fic very much. It's actually punctuated properly, it's got capitals and grammer and spelling and frankly it's a dang rare find! The writing is so good I only have to grumble minimally about Zell as uke. If you read anything by myself on FF.net or KittyMeowMaxwell anywhere you'll see the Zell I play and write and have gotten her writing. I just can't see Zell-strong-buff-powerful being submissive to tall-thin-femine-horndog-Irvine. Sometimes I hate that height "rule" and Zell's even older. Le sigh. But I did say minimal grumbling cause this fic is well written.
    Bit of a cliche "Hi" "You're hot" "let's get friskay" but it is Irvine so you gotta expect that and they didn't actually have smecktual intercourse (I hate you, Eoko.) Go away Zell. So I give you cudoes to that. So lessee, I've covered everyone has their own view of Zell and I need to write lots more to make my view dominant... that this is very well written, that Irvine's a horndog, that's all good.
    Now, I have only one problem. One little tiny itty bitty thing. Irvine's eyes aren't green... like... at all... not even slightly... If you actually take pics of him and put them in photoshop and zoom in really close and take swatches of his irises and then paint larger boxes with those colors to see them better... like I've done a few times -_- they range from blue-purple... It's just one of the things Kitty and I always go "HUUUUUH?!" over when we see it.
    And since I read the first 3 before the review I'll add that Seifer is a jerk, sexy pervert and should appreciate his shows a little before thinking firstly of blackmail. Almost wrote blackmale there. They're good too. Okay, I'm getting tired. But this was a lovely bedtime story.
    I appologize if anything mention above was at all hurtful in anyway to either writer. I do not review often, and only the fics I truly like very much get reviewed. Or ones that need to be flamed so hard they get taken off. Your's is one of the prior. I enjoyed it very much and my review was based completely on my own head-strong views on my Zell and other observations. The only observation was the eyes which I take as a fact that his eyes are violet-blue or one or the other.
    I believe you are in the writing ranks just under Scarlet Fever. She is the paramount of FF8 fanfiction, but you two get to sit in second spot with Kit and me and several other very good writers out there!

    Thank you for adding something well written and grammatically correct to the site!
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