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Reviews for Goodnight Kiss

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From sailtheplains on January 14, 2008
I forgot how much this pairing amused me.

They really are perfect for each other. Haha. :)
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From Idwraith on June 06, 2007
The Wife Says -> I liked it *looks panicked because he's typing what she says* *raises hands helplessly* I...don't know what to say...I enjoyed it...*blushes* *raises hands helplessly again* *rolls her eyes and glares at husband* You're a pain in the ass! NOT TO HER! *smack*
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From Withered on January 22, 2007
I've been searching for a good Vincent/Aerith fic for a while now besides "Snowfeilds" which was also a brilliant fic with them, but this one was seriously one of the best ones i've read out there so far. I'm glad I happened along this..you truely brought the characters to life and portrayed them perfectly. I have always been a Vincent and Aerith fan...and now that i've read this, I think I am an even bigger one. Thank you so much for making a great Vin/Aer fic...I really wish you'd wright another...or make a sequal. Aerith comming back to life maybe? I know..people don't like that...but oh well..it's better then him being with Tifa. No offense...personally I just think Tifa is ment for Cloud is all. Anyway...thank you for this...I really enjoyed every minute of it..
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From ANON - elena on December 08, 2006
this is just a fantastic story. even with the graphic sex scenes, it manages to stay lovely (pretend that makes sense XD). you captured the characters very nicely, and vincent and aerith's relationship throughout the course of the story is how i'd imagine it. i think you should shoot for a sequel; i'd like to see what you could come up with. :)

also, may i suggest a couple stabbing westward songs that would work well for this story? (i'm gonna anyway! XD) "inside you" for, well, their sex. and "waking up beside you", in my opinion, sums up his feelings for aerith after she's gone.

i need to finish my aerith/vincent soundtrack...

but anyway! i loved the story! thanks for providing us scattered aervin fans with a good piece of work like this.
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From ANON - darkmiko90 on July 07, 2006
That was the best het fic I think I've ever read in my entire fricking life!!! Secretly, I've always been a closet Vincent/Aerith fan but when I stumbled upon this I had no idea how beautiful and heartwrenching it was actually gonna be. You wrote Vincent so beautifully and I loved the fact that there was a plot behind the smut (don't get me wrong the smut was great). No offense, but if you were to write a sequal would it be Vincent/Tifa? I hate that coupling with a passion, no offense but I probably wouldn't be able to stomach it. I like the idea of them as friends but nothing more. No offense or anything, but there's already a whole bunch of those out there and there's barely any fics revolving around Aeris (she's my fave character next to Vinnie). Do you think you could write another Vince/Aer fic? Pretty please? I would so &heart you if you did!! *cough* Sorry if I'm coming off as a demanding bitch. But could you atleast consider it? Please, I'm begging you (damn you for reducing me to this...)!

Um, anyways I'd just like to say overall you did a great job. Peace out, and keep writing.
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From ANON - Original Sinner on July 04, 2006
I just couldn't stay awake any longer and it looks like another late one tonight girlfriend! Wow... this chapter was so sweet. Aerith managing to evoke a smile for the ice prince. I totally loved it. Yup it was short but absolutely sweet....

Peace pixie...
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From OriginalSinner on July 03, 2006
Oh I had to have a chuckle at the beginning of the story when you mentioned that you had a little run in with that thing called �life�. Brilliant! I�m sure a lot of people think that you have nothing better to do than have your bum glued to a seat in front of a computer, happily running after little plot bunnies and typing your heart away for their enjoyment� Yup� �life� kinda has a habit of keeping my bum away from the computer quite often, so I can relate wholeheartedly sweetpea. Anyways, Chapter 5� wow.. *gasps, deep in emotional reflection* That was just an awe inspiring chapter hon. Truth be told, I�m only a newbie to FF being introduced to it after reading a yaoi fic by Tainted Dreams. So I�m only kinda vaguely beginning to discern the characters personalities, and I had to say that I hadn�t really given Aerith�s much thought till reading this story. You have, however, in this chapter given me a profound insight into her inner-machinations and I have to say, this pairing isn�t quite as strange as people may think after reading this story. I believe that you have paired Aerith perfectly with Vincent, their personalities complimenting each others symbiotically no? I was moved sweetpea. Your writing is so descriptive and deep in such an envious simplistic way. Ohs� and I love the blue in the bar between Vincent and Reno� what a crack up! Reno�s such a hot little try-hard but I love him! Once again, very, very hot stuff *drools at recollection of Vincent�s awesome tongue running wild* I�d have a cold shower if it was so freaking early in the morning!!!

PS. The bike helmet came in handy *lol*

Peace

The Sinner ~_^

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From OriginalSinner on July 03, 2006
Oh my gawd!!!!! Chapter Four!!! Vincent broke his promise.... how happy does that make me?!!!! *gack.... slides across room and smashes head into wall!* The shower sex was so HOT. I'm gonna have to find my bike helmet to avoid smut induced brain damage from falling off my chair!!! *~_^* Nothing like a bit of steam and water to heat things up... oh... and Aerith was washing his hair with cheap motel shampoo *sighs* How sweet was that? So the deed has now been done... how well written was that sweetpea. I love your simple, straight-forward style. No beating around the bush, just plain, simplistic, stylish smut. What a happy little vegemite I am.... I'm so happy... should be in bed sleeping but can't pry myself away from this story *doh!* Talk about Pixies flying around in my head *giggles* K... off to read some more *runs out to find bike helmet* LOL.

Peace sweet Pixie

The Sinner
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From OriginalSinner on July 03, 2006
*gasps in perverted shock...eyes popping out of head...* Chapter 3! Hot dang! What a notty lil gal our Aerith is no? *starry eyes* Vincent *drools* cops a gobby! *ack... bang crash... that's me falling off my chair* How hot was that?!!! *Crawls back up* Squirms back on to seat and races of to read chapter 4... Yippeeeeeeee

*lol*
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From ANON - OriginalSinner on July 03, 2006
Oh sweetpea! You've finished! Gawd... look at me... I haven't even read your updates yet... shit... I've only just keyed on to your penname (and that's after having to arse around and go through my old emails to find it *doh!* Note: Drug taking is not good for you... it impairs the brain and causes severe memory loss....) What was I saying again... *teeheee* Yes, that's right... You have been a busy little vegemite... I see that you did end up updating last month... good for you (now I wish I could pull my finger out and update anytime soon.....) but I am sadly dissapointed to see that Goodnight Kiss is complete *sniffles* Oh well... nuff chat... Now to read.... *runs off to stick plastic to chair so as not to leave a wet patch >_>,,,
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From ANON - Fishgirl on June 22, 2006
Yes, sequal.

Please.
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From KokoroOfAnime on June 20, 2006
OMG. This is the Vincent/Aerith I have read and it is absolutely beautiful.... I nearly cried at the end and the Vincent blushing thing was sooooo endearing! The thing is... I can't find another like it! Please write another Vincent/Aeris! I love this coupling now. And you are the only one who's written a really good one out of the ones I've come across. Thank you for writing.

-KokoroOfAnime
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From ANON - WhatTimesAreIt on June 04, 2006
Hmmmm, what can I say. I mean I knew it was coming, but the notion was still really disheartening despite. Gosh, I loved it! You definitely have a way of telling a good story, and I admire that. But about the sequel? I'm not too sure. Of course, I'd love to see more of Vincent *winkwink* (as would the rest of us) but maybe you should just let it simmer for a while, and then see how it goes. =) Anyway, another great read!
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From Crya2Evans on June 03, 2006
It is I that admires you! And a truly brilliant ending, just what I expected from your mind. And of course I want a sequel! I want to see what happens next! I could see your little hints and stuff about things that could come and so I ask, PLEASE?

I'm telling you this was great. It's the first het fic I ever read that I enjoyed... and to think it was Vincent het at that. You even got me twirling about a Vin/Aeris fic in my mind, see what you've done?

The Tifa and Vincent moment was perfect and I do so enjoy the way you write him. You know how to get in his head so well. And the little Cid addition in the end was even better. I love Cid!! Ahem, anyways, great story, great plot, great ending... looking forward to whatever you come out with next.
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From Crya2Evans on May 31, 2006
ahh, you write him so beautifully, I am truly envious of this talent you have.
I am still faithfully in love with this fic, the first time I can Vincent in a het light and enjoy it. But its so sad, my eyes were burning and I struggled to hold it back. I'm anxious to see where you are going next.

Oh, and I loved how you said that for once in his life, Vincent missed. I've always wondered about that little piece of plot. Technically, if Barret, Yuffie, or Vincent were present, they could have done /Something/.

Brilliant as always!
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