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By : MystIc19
  • From ANON - ReaperRain on August 07, 2007
    Ah, that was a nice chapter - I'm glad it all worked out for Cloud in the end. Of course I know what's coming up...and unless you make this an AU, it's gonna have a sad ending :( Nooo! Don't have a sad ending!
    Oh, and great chapter! Be sure to email me when you update!
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  • From ANON - Rinoa on August 06, 2007
    Honestly i felt like crying at the end of this chapi....it was such a sweet chapter with a bit of a bitter feeling at the end ,you wrote it perfectly~! im really happy you did dicaided to include the sceane with Cloud's mother because it really is an importent sceane in my opinion and since in the game itself they only showed flashes of it it's really easy to manipulate it to fit your own story and by doing that you made your story more belivebal..making it possibale for all of this wonderful fantasy to actually be a part of the original game (or rather making it esiar for delusinol fangirls like me to pretend it was infact the true story before the ff7 game ^_^ tnx for that i can now die in peace...on the other hand i think i'll die in peace after you will complete this fanfic yep that will make me happely content).
    Im so happy Cloud's mother accepted their relationship! i also think that the fact that she accepted it so well is great for the part when in the game Cloud talks about his past but dosnet really wanna talk about his mother since it was such a happy memory that realted to Zack but then he repressed all his memorys of Zack when he died and took on his personality(sorta)...anyway~~ im rambeling and i wrote waaay too much this time..but i guess it's because i really liked this cahpter and because it's been so long since you updated. well then im looking forward to the next chapter, im sure it's gonna be a great one(yet sad ;_;) . Rinoa.
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  • From ANON - ReaperRain on July 12, 2007
    This is good, and by that I mean so so so SO good. Everything is perfectly written, all their reactiosn to each other, the progress of their relationship...it took me damn ages to read it, but it was well-worth it, I can assure you. Wow, just wow.
    Alas, though, I know what's to come, and the likelihood that there won't be a happy ending. Unless you change it? That'd be nice, but somehow I don't think it's gonna happen. And all those delays just stretching out the inevitable...wah, I don't want it to happen! *sniffle*
    ReaperRain
    p.s. ah, would it be possible for you to email me when you update the story? Just so I can keep track of everything - and that way I'll be able to review as well!
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  • From nickkroon on July 08, 2007
    nice, really nice, i am really curious to see how you are all going to draw it to a close! i just have to ask you, what does ja ne mean? keep up the cool writing
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  • From nickkroon on July 07, 2007
    pppfff... if that is what you call an 'attempt' i would love to see what you have in store when you get all fired up! on to chapter 16 now!
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  • From nickkroon on July 06, 2007
    my god i could almost feel cloud's heartache at finding out about aerith. i love cloud/zach relationships, and yours is just too sweet. i am going to keep reading.. more more more!!!
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  • From ANON - Maria on July 05, 2007
    hey this story is getting interesting. keep it up. update next chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - Rinoa on July 03, 2007
    Wohoo another chapter it was worth the wait ^_^
    i really hope that you will wright an epiluog to this story cuz i really like it and even though Zack dies in the ff7 story i refuse to acknowledge that cuz i love him way too much as a charecter thats why im hopeing for an epiloug where Zack will be alive and that he and Cloud will have a happy ending! anyway i liked this chaper and the way you detalied everything tough i would have liked to have a better explenation of the monsters cuz i didnt really get how they were supposed to look..but then again i just might lack the amount of imagenation that is needed ^_^;
    last comment about the chapter the last part of it made me really emberrased since i keep thinking that the walls were very very thin! and that seph and jin were hearing them..and as much as i love seph as a Seme and in yaoi thinking of him in this story hearing them was oddly emberassing...so strnage.. well anyway great work keep it up!
    Rinoa
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  • From ANON - Sora on June 21, 2007
    FUCKING UPDATE, ALREADY!!!!!! OMG. I. AM. GOING. TO. HAVE. A. SEIZURE.
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  • From on June 05, 2007
    I love this one :)

    You know, I normally don't read many-chapter-stories. Especially not when I'm just looking for yaoi fics (... lol? xD) But ehm, it's great... And I hope you'll submit the next chapter soon :)
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  • From ANON - Lady Shinigami on June 01, 2007
    This probably won't help, but I say let's get to Nibelheim only at the speed required. After all, if Cloud's going to be suffering from motion sickness, the trip is going to take ages in his mind. It might take a long time for Sephiroth, too, since he wants to get moving and it only seems that they keep slowing down for various reasons. It might not be so bad for Zack and Jin, who are so busy worrying about Cloud and each other that the trip doesn't feel like it takes as long.

    The dream was REALLY freaky. I'm not sure exactly what it means, but I think I have an idea. Even if I'm wrong, you get a Creepy Dream Award.


    --RN (LS)
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  • From ANON - Rinoa on May 21, 2007
    great another chapter! i liked this chapter because it gave me an easy going kind of feeling for some reson even though i know the end is nearing...and i personaly hate the end squaer gave zack..but then again the dream that Cloud hade made me a bit hopeful that is if i got the right impression... anyway loved the chapter and once again i'll say that i just love the way you write Zack & Clouds relationship they are just so sweet. about your question i would like to have more detalis about their journy to Niblehime cuz i dont really want this story to end to fast^_^; but it depeands on your mood right?cuz if you feel like jumping stright to the Niblehime incident then you should after all i think it's best you follow your gut ^_^ either way i'll continue reading and loveing this story. thats all keep up the great work!
    Rinoa
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  • From ANON - Rinoa on May 02, 2007
    wow were getting closer to the end...and it's going to be a sad one...*sigh* oh well if it wasnt connected to the real ff7 story it wouldnt have been this good...but still i wanna keep reading but im dreading the end.
    it must have been a pain to rewrite this chapter so thank you very much for doing so and not giving up i really liked the way you made Cloud lock away his feelings when Kyo died it's so much like him to be in pain but push it to the back of his mind ^_^ . it's also very smart of you to add Jin to the Niblehime assigment but then i guess that only makes his end a bit more obvious and yet thats a great way to connect the plot to the ff7 game.
    well thats all good work cant wait for the next chapi !!

    Rinoa
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  • From ANON - vailea on May 02, 2007
    Oh please thank you for this chapter... but please dont kill Zack!!-_-, i know the story but please make yours different...pleassse.I have no right to tell this but your story its simply great and.. well Zack(desperates cries)*_* doesnt matter(sigh),keep it like that
    bye
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  • From ANON - jen on April 04, 2007
    love the story!!!! Keep it up!!!!! Please! I cant wait to read the rest!
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