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Reviews for Crystal Clear

By : MystIc19
  • From ANON - Rinoa on March 18, 2007
    yay another chapi i was afraid you gave it up since it's been a while but you continued and im so happy about it.
    im quit sad about Kyo he was such a cute and happy charecter i really liked him but i think the way you wrote the whole situasion was great it felt real ^_^
    anyways seph shouldnt have lied to Zack like that and i have a bad feeling but i'll wait and see what happens next ^_^
    tnx for another great chapter and keep up the good work!
    Rinoa
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  • From ANON - vailea on March 16, 2007
    Oh god! thanks for this chapter,its sad,very sad you made me cry actually.I´ve been waiting for an update since the last one(of course genius!) but no really,i´m stuck with you till the end,this is one of my favorite storys.Its amazing how you can pull out all sort of deep strings on the plot.Its great so please update soon,cause you have a great number of "fans" after you.Thanks again.
    bye^___^
    PS:I hope Seph will trust Zack enough to tell him about the slimmy creture,oh well! its up to you!
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  • From ANON - rin on February 02, 2007
    ffffuck. that was insanely hot. best sex scene i have ever read x__X i think this story is a lot more well thought out and realistic than most of the fics out there. like 99.9999% of them, at least. thank you, i needed a good read.
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  • From juxtaposePARADOX on January 28, 2007
    Oh, I can not wait to see what will happen next! This is a very well written fiction, and I have been reading it [almost non-stop] for the last two days! Very well-written, very good, the drama is building up good. =)
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  • From ANON - Rinoa on January 22, 2007
    it's always nice to cheack for updateds and to see that another chapter has been uploaded! im so shocked that your going through with it most ppl quitafter chapter 16 im really glad and hopeing im not speaking too soon but it truly feels like your going to finish what you started and that makes me so happy since i love ZackXCloud and there isnt alot of fanfiction with them and even less that are any good , what i really want to say is thanks! and now about this chapter:
    Jin is becoming more of a nuisense i really dislike him his such an arragont charecter that disrupts cloud and zacks peacful relationship but then without him their wouldnt be as much tension to the plot so im guessing i'll stop complaining about him (that stupid jerk kissing cloud like that -_-!) zack is so cute,the perfeact boyfriend! the cuppcake suprise was so adorabal. i think i may be knowing where the story is headed to but i'll patinutly wait and see ^_^
    well done another great chapter in the continution of a great story , im anxiuosly waiting for the next chapi ^_^
    p.s. sorry for the bad spelling and grammer

    Rinoa
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  • From ANON - sekre on December 26, 2006
    Ah, everything is concluding ... makes me sort of sad. Wonderful chapter :)
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  • From ANON - me me me on December 25, 2006
    mwahahahahah! *evil sephiroth laugh* of course sephy is just cooler not evil...no?
    lol Im probably the only person in the world to even say that! *gasps*
    anyhow....
    as expected of you this was a great chap. ^_______^
    keep up the good work o.o

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  • From ANON - Rinoa on December 25, 2006
    yay another chapter~!! hm this one was extra intresting and cloud and zack had their first lovers fight and make up sex it was so sweet~ hm..im worried though..it feels like some rough things are waiting up a head..oh well i'll just quitly wait for your updates merry christmas and a happy new year~ tnx for updating keep up the great job ^_^
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  • From ANON - X on November 28, 2006
    Cloud was trying hard to relax but…damn, this wasn’t a finger.



    *snickers* oh god.....i just about died laughing reading that
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  • From ANON - SheWolfe7 on November 17, 2006
    Great chapter, I was slightly surprised by Zack's reaction about Jin but I suppose I can't blame him. Plus Possessive!Zack is cute! *grins* Can't wait for the next chapter but take your time if you need it,

    -SheWolfe7
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  • From ANON - Tsuki no Taiyou on November 17, 2006
    Oiiii, cutie Jealous *Zackary*. I just love when Sephy calls him that o.O. I love this story, and I'm so glad it wasn't abandoned, since I just only recently started reading it. Glad it's back and getting along finely. Should get interesting. TnT
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  • From ANON - Rinoa on November 17, 2006
    wohoo~! another chapter~! cloud is so sweet the way he shys from jin now~ and i love it when zack is over protective! but i have a bda felling for some resone hope it's nothing..but then again storys advanced with plot twist so i'll just sit and wait patinatleey for another chapter~
    tnx for the wonderful work hope to read more~
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  • From ANON - JJ on November 09, 2006
    Wahh, great chapter! Your story has really reminded me how much I love Zack/Cloud. And I really love the character Jin... I'm usually not a fan of OCs but I really feel for him. I can't wait to see what else he tells Cloud, and how Cloud will react...
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  • From ANON - LilLaDae on October 21, 2006
    *Sparkle...Sparkle* Ay, I love this story so far ::Enter vaudevillian chibi V:: So funny, so romantic, so the bitch of cliffhangers =T_T=!! Lol, it's great so far, though, can't wait to see how the next chapter turns out. *Spaaaarkle*
    LlD
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  • From ANON - DeconstructiveSin on October 16, 2006
    I blame you. I blame you entirely because I didn't get any homework done today! ;) I just got totally wrapped up in this story...and I couldn't stop. Addictive...that's what it is. I can't wait to read more. Especially with Jin's little...confession. The plot thickens! Keep it up, I'd love to see a conclusion to all of this angsting and drama someday...though I'm sure there will be more angsting and drama ahead. :) It's really great to read because it's like "a day in the life of a soldier in training", which is just...it's like Harry Potter in that it goes through all the details really closely. Awesome story. And now I'm rambling so I'll leave my review at this and wish you the best of luck!
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