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Reviews for Crystal Clear

By : MystIc19
  • From ANON - Tanoshii-Chan on October 14, 2006
    AH! you don't know how happy i was to see that you updated! -^w^-

    this fanfiction has become my FAVORITE among all fanfiiction! and it's my favorite pairing, which is better! XD
    can't wait for the next chapter! XD
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  • From SilverPhantom on October 13, 2006
    Yay! Practically everyone loves Cloud >< But then again, who doesn't? I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - nijiyume on October 13, 2006
    lol hey hey hey!
    I can review here too! ^-^
    yay! you rock!
    awesomeness again.............................
    ......................indeed..............

    so uh....yea...keep it comin yo.

    XD
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  • From ANON - Rinoa on October 13, 2006
    waiii~! another great chapter another great and hot sex sceane~!! i really love Zack & Cloud toghether~!! and your story continues to remaind me how much i love them as a couple~! the way you write their relasionship is brillient~!
    i think your right about focusing on Clouds disapoinment in not makeing it into SOLDIER after all it really was an importent thing in his past~! and god i just knew Jin would make a move on him~! i really want Zack to find out about it and be overly protective of cloud~ that will be major cute~!!
    so tnx for writing this keep up the good work im looking forwared to the next chapter~ ^_^
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  • From ANON - Marcy on October 13, 2006
    Yes, an update! I love this story and always eagerly await an update. But, don't push yourself too hard, okay. :)
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  • From ANON - Sekre on October 12, 2006
    Kind of saw that Jin thing coming... I was wondering when he was going to get it out ^^ I'm glad cloud's getting 'better', but I'm not sure how Jin is going to help things by telling Cloud the truth...then again, I don't think Cloud can fully get over (well, if you're going by the game, I guess he never did) it if he doesn't hear what Jin has to say. Lovely chapter.
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  • From ANON - leaf on September 18, 2006
    Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, but I must say that you're keeping up with your quality. Please update soon, I would really like to know why Cloud wasn't excepted.
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  • From ANON - Rinoa on September 15, 2006
    waiiii another great chap! although i knew that cloud was going to fail i kept wishing he wouldnt honestly he deserved to pass it so much ;_; i just wanna hug him~~ the parts with Jin are cool cuz i think zack is going to have himself a little raivel in romance (i wonder if that will be true??) anyways good work im so happy your continuing this story and not giving up i admire you for that so much *bows* keep up the good work i cant wait to the next chapter!
    ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kokoro.Karazu on September 15, 2006
    I like very much the way than you describe all their lovemaking. Great fic!:D
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  • From SilverPhantom on September 14, 2006
    Update more, please! This is one of the few stories I follow nowadays and I can't wait for more chapters! I look forward to the next update!
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  • From ANON - EG2 on September 12, 2006
    PLEASE update soon!!! I love this fic and I'm dying to know what happens next =)
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  • From ANON - Tiffany on August 31, 2006
    -SQUEE!-
    Wow... I have to say that for your first lemon scene, that was bloody well amazing.
    This whole story is bloody well amazing. I started this just after midnight, and now it is 4, and I have to say it is the best spent four hours of my week thus far.
    Your writing makes me smile and I love how you portray the characters, the plot and everything.
    Gah.
    I am jealous of your talent.
    But really... that lemon scene. I really liked how you made it more realistic, if you will, not just some attempt at a low grade porn script. It has to be one of the best that I have read. And I live on here, so that is saying something...
    Only thing I would have to say that is not me going on about how amazing your writing is that you should watch how your tenses shift. I noticed it in a few spots where the tense was off either for one word or just a strange shift between sentences. Aside from that, brilliant work!
    -scatters sakura blossoms about-
    Cheers!
    -tips hat and rolls away-
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  • From ANON - The Critic on August 29, 2006
    Just letting you know that was the BEST lemon I have ever read...it was so real! and i have been reading yaoi for a long time now, this is the best, especialy for a first time! What I realy like about your writing, is that it's so mature and cool at the same time, I especialy like the way you stay in character..not like other writers....anyway keep up the Impecable stories ;)
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  • From ANON - leaf on August 22, 2006
    Yes, its about time Zack pounded Cloud into sexual bliss! ~Cheers~ Anyways, very good chapter! Please keep up the hard work you've been putting forth on this story, for I am sure people will keep reading!
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  • From ANON - Okita (I'm not logged in) on August 21, 2006
    Wonderful chapter!! I can't wait for the next. And what's up with Cloud's eyes being all glowy ?_? Hmmmm, please update as soon as possible, and thank you for lemony goodness ^-^ I shall love you forever more. What's the file say? What's Sephiroth gonna say ... or is it Zack that says it ... whatever it is that they might say ... hmmm. Update soon, k?
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