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Reviews for Shattered Dreams

By : Crya2Evans
  • From ANON - Miko on February 01, 2006
    I was a tad bit confused the first time I read it, but I went back for a second go and I think I have a vague notion of what might be happening. I am assuming the demons conversing after the Cid scene are the main baddies and that Vincent is the only vessel for the ones who can defeat them (Am I even close?). Ovbiously, regardless of whether I am right or not, there is something about dear Vince that has all the demon legions out to kill him, but his old Turk training (Gods bless the Turks) seems to be saving his life, as well as opening doors to long, lost memories... Oh, and there seems to be several good demon-like things hidden in his mind, not able to break through to him because of some barrier he may or may not be projecting subconsiously.... Did I forget something? Well, anyways. That's just my guess.
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  • From ANON - Jessifer on February 01, 2006
    I really wish I could go back and edit my comments.

    Replying to l-chan:

    Ever think that mebbe Archer actually just wants to help Cid...genuinly? I mean...if he did actually try a move on Cid (or Vin later on, who knows?) then yeah, he'll deserve a horrible death by sporkage. But he has yet to do anything. Seems to me that he just wants Cid to be happy.
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  • From ANON - Jessifer on February 01, 2006
    Oh noez! Run Zack, run! And stop ignoring the Demi-God, damn you!

    Great chapter. I love how his instincts are kicking in. Poor Vinny tho, has no idea what's going on. Also, I honestly didn't expect Annalee to die so soon. I felt bad for her. She didn't deserve it. :(
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  • From ANON - Drac on February 01, 2006
    OMG! You kick @$$!

    This totally RULES!!!!


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  • From ANON - l-chan on January 31, 2006
    I shouldn't do this... and it's a testament to how this fic needs its own forum; but as I was checking for updates I have to answer Jessifer: I can only speak for myself in the case of Archer. And I still want to stab him in the kidney. XD

    And tell him ta get a life and move on and he doesn't deserve ta breath the same air as Cid. You are SO not worthy Archer! You... creepy stalker (not really but go with it) person! *rantrantrant*

    Maybe if the chance presents itself I can do an actual 'Archer rant'~ That would be fun~ (Unless my prior psychobabble can be considered as rant - then it'll just be another rant. ^_~ )
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  • From ANON - Jessifer on January 31, 2006
    ...Am I the only one who actually LIKES Archer?
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  • From Cidsa on January 31, 2006
    Another great chapter :D
    Poor Cid, he's really mad isn't he?

    Anyways, I can't wait for the next one. I check for a new chapter constantly and it's always awesome to see that there is a new one!

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  • From ANON - l-chan on January 30, 2006
    This is too good! ♥ I adore your writing for the Cid/Vincent, but your characterization of Yuffie has me actually liking her! *gasps* You write her extremely well and the part where she figuratively smacked down Archer (yes I still want to stab him in the kidney) had me pumping my fist in the air in glee. ^_^

    Also, it was of my opinion that SI covered quite thoroughly the different pairings you’ve included. I really – really enjoy that! You write the compilations wonderfully without it feeling at all choppy. It flows so beautifully together and touches on all the characters incredibly well.

    I can’t help but giggle at Yuffie and Nanaki, they are just too cute! You win at life for that pairing, and doing it SO DAMN GOOD!

    I also had no clue as to what they had found. I’m truly lost as to where you’re going with this fic, and OMG I love it being that way! XD You’ve also got me dying to see what’s going to happen when Vincent and Cid finally cross paths… or if Vincent will remember before they cross paths… or …whatever it is you have planned! And just between you & me… I’ve been trying to imaging what exactly that will be like… but all I envision is Vincent’s gun accidentally discharging – striking Miz Anna-Sue dead, ricocheting off the inside of her empty skull, and then piercing Archer’s right lung *insert bloody wheezing death scene here*.

    Ah… yeah. ^_^;; Soooo~ if you want me to stop entertaining ways to kill the two of them I could suggest an update soon? ^_~
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  • From ANON - Twich on January 30, 2006
    *glues eyes to screen waiting for update* 0_O must...read..!
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  • From ANON - Jessifer on January 29, 2006
    Well, Cid likes his tea strong, Nanaki with milk, Yuffie with lots of sugar...and me? I likes my tea with lots of angst!

    Great chapter. ;D
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  • From ANON - Miko on January 29, 2006
    Good chapter, I'm glad I decided to check and see if you updated. The story's really getting tense, huh? Poor Cid... Not knowing that Vincent's been out there the whole time, just not remembering anything. I also liked the way you added a little light-heartedness and humor in the Yuffie/Nanki scene. Angst and drama are well and good, but some happiness is appreciated. Not everyone can be sad all of the time.
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  • From ANON - LordIckarous on January 29, 2006
    Drama? I can never get enough drama! *break dances*. But no...i have figured out nothing. i am about as bright as a brick, so unless someone comes right out and tell me things i won't catch it. ^_^' But still wonderful!

    oh vince...*cries*
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  • From ANON - arora_kayd on January 29, 2006
    Ahh! Why they be so mean to Cid? Now he's gonna kill Reeve d-e-d ded.

    Definetly enough drama and angst. I was bouncing through the entire scene. Which probably doesn't say much for my mental health.... But who cares! Twas prudy. What is goin to happen next?!?!?!

    Oh also, yay for subplots! They were there in SI but i just had to mention my love of them ^.^

    Update soon!!!

    (You're very welcome. Glad you enjoy my rambly comments ^^)
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  • From ANON - tee on January 28, 2006
    Woo Now what.. Suprise! But, oh, I think I could feel Cid's rage physically when I read this. It blew me right off of my chair, lol. I feel so so SO sorry for him.. Poor Reeve, though. He only tries to do his best..
    Gee! Great job!
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  • From ANON - ???????? on January 28, 2006
    I have to say that was AMAZING !!!! I could've died from how much angst and drama that occured !!! I can't wait to see what happens next !!!!! YAY !!!!!!
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