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Reviews for Shattered Dreams

By : Crya2Evans
  • From ANON - Tant on March 15, 2007
    Poor Vince. He just doesn't get any breaks, does he?
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  • From ANON - Samma on March 09, 2007
    Alice Hojo! How the hell did I forget that walking calamity? Mind-control chips... I wonder if they're even theoretically possible. All I really know is that I wouldn't want to tanlge with her, if she can control the Knights of the Round with them. I also have a feeling that there's going to be some double-crossing done between her and the rebelling powers.

    Who's doing the setting up, here? Is it the demi-deities that they're fighting, or is it the supposed good ones? Balaam wants Vincent there for some reason (my guess is that he still has a portion of Balaam's power inside him, ergo his being unable to take full physical form), and it seems convienient that there's three powerful demi-dieties left at the Lost Grounds. Our Heroes are walking into a trap.

    I really liked the goodbye scene on the rooftop. Showing it from Cloud's perspective was a good choice--he's one of them, but apart, at the same time. He was able to watch Reeve and Reno have a touching moment without giving it too much detail, giving both of them a bit of dignity. Sephiroth and Denzel was absolutely priceless and touching. As my mother would say, "You done good, kid."
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  • From ANON - Tant on March 08, 2007
    Lol. Cid and Yuffie would laugh through a wedding. Poor Cloud, little slow on the uptake, huh?
    Sorry it took me so long to review. Kingdom Hearts II is taking over my brain. :P
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  • From someonesneaky on March 08, 2007
    Dammit, you made me sniffly again, you wench.

    Poor, poor Vince. Mean, selfish Anima. Can't blame them, but I like Vincent better, so there.

    Once more, I have to say 'not enough'. I love watching things unfold, even if it's just a little at a time. Want mooooore!

    And do you know how happy you made me when you mentioned /sequels/? I'm tempted to bug you for more info on them, but I really like surprises. Enough that I skipped over the preview. =P

    Thanks for the newest update!

    ~SneakyOne
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  • From SorceressFujin on March 08, 2007
    Mwhahahaa! :) Oooo, eager to see the next chapter. A Vincent/Cid lemon thrown in sometime soon again would be nice too. :P
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  • From CannibalisticIntentions on March 06, 2007
    Urgh! Tseng and Sephiroth are so frustrating! >.< I just wanna lock them in a room together. Great story, btw. 'Tis very loverly.
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  • From ANON - Ri on February 23, 2007
    Awesome chapter! Loved it, the wedding, the plots the wonderful sister! Reeve's sister is so sweet! They will start a family after everything is over. Loved how they prevented poor Tseng from drinking any sort of alochol. This was a sweet and yet emotional chapter. I cannot wait to read more! I always jump for joy when i see your updates. ^^
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  • From ANON - Samma on February 22, 2007
    Ah, just what I need after a corperate meeting...

    The wedding scene was beautiful, with the right touch of comedy with Reno and Cid's names revealed. I kept having to read bits of it out loud to my fiancee (Kitsuwa), as they were so sweet or comedic. And finally, progress on the Seph/Tseng relationship! You move them along at a very realistic pace, neither one is one to jump straight into bed--though once they move past this dithering stage, I bet that's where they'll end up!

    And let me put in that it's not just men Sephiroth has questioning their sexuality... I'd go straight (or at least bi) for him!
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  • From someonesneaky on February 22, 2007
    >>Let me know if you liked it or not!

    Like it? Love it!

    Sorry I haven't stopped for a review the last few chapters, it's about time I dropped in.

    Another nice, long read, but seems far, far too short once the end is reached. I keep wanting to beg you to hurry with the next update, but you'll get it in your own time. The fact that you can keep up with this, and the side projects, all at once, just astounds me - especially looking at how MUCH there is. With this chapter, that makes 99 chapters -just- in the two main ones - Ice and Dreams. AND YOU'RE STILL GOING. That just totally blows my mind.

    Thanks for rocking so much.

    ~SneakyOne
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  • From SorceressFujin on February 22, 2007
    Mwhahahaha! LOVED that chapter! Hopefully Elena will get Tseng and Sephiroth together soon. :P Yum! Loved the part towards the end too with Cid and Vincent and during the wedding... hehe, well, i loved it all! :)
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  • From ANON - Ri on February 10, 2007
    Okay this chapter is fasinating! I mean the characters the way it is written like this epic tale like Homer's Odessy! Okay i am being a dork here no but seriously love it, you just write amazingly. I kind of rushed through it though due to me being at work and being tiredbuti will re-read it and of course give a much more proper review but what i read and what i got i believe this interlude is bloody fantastic!
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  • From ANON - Pooky on February 09, 2007
    It has honestly been ages since I last had internet access, and you can't believe how happy I was to see so many new chapters in this story ^__^ I read the whole thing through again, and all I can do is curse you once again for making me cry and laugh, sometimes simultaneously. Emotional rollercoaster ride indeed. There are just so many things that I like in this story, can't wait to read more. I first began to read the Shattered -storyarchthingumine because of the smut, but now I read this because of the plot :) Um, however, some Sephi/Tseng smut in near future? Please? Pretty please? *puppydog eyes* Not that I completely adore that pairing or anything *shifty eyes*
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  • From ANON - Samma on February 09, 2007
    One word can easily describe this chapter, but even without coffee, I can't keep it to that. Fascinating.

    I love the depth your original demideites have. All you really have to do is change the names of Square's characters and locations, and you have a new epic story. One that I'm sure would be on the bestseller's list for quite some time.

    Keep it up. It's one of the few things that keeps me from committing murder at work.
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  • From SorceressFujin on February 08, 2007
    Great chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - Tant on February 02, 2007
    Poor Sephiroth, he's just not having an easy time, is he?
    I forgot Vincent didn't have Galian anymore. Oops. ^_^;
    I wasn't sure what Gojyo's weapon was called, so I tried to look it up and found both names.
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