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Reviews for Shattered Dreams

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From ANON - Ri on January 27, 2007
Woot! This chapter is like a mystery story...no wait no wait! Okay what is going on with Sephiroth? I meanthe whole is Jenova still in him? Loved hos his first real lust is Tseng bwa!ha!ha! ahem, i do enjoy that even though there are serious issues being discussed that it is all serious and well just in the stressful moment you add a tad of Humor like Zack just being a goofy guy.Which is awesome cause that gives it a sense of realism...well in my opinion. I have no clue whati want to say >_< I just love when you update cause your chapters bring awesome awesomeness everytime!! I mean they are unexpected events! It makes you just want to keep on reading over and over and just hoping you update fast! Anyways update soon! I cannot wait to read more!
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From ANON - Samma on January 26, 2007
Another good chapter, with excellent characterizations.

I really enjoy the way you write Sephiroth. He's delightfully human, with hopes, dreams, fears, and desires. His social awkwardness, raw terror at even the thought of Jenova, and painful shyness make him more likeable, even if we, the readers, and Zack, to some extent, are the only ones who see it. He's still the pseudo-god "The General", but he's like everyone else, even if no one sees it. Though the upcoming battle should be interesting, especially with the relationship dynamics that will undoubtably form, with the 'first lust' along for the ride.

I'm awaiting the next chapter, and off to look at your original fiction. Oh, and yes, I did recieve your email response to my review, much thanks.
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From SorceressFujin on January 26, 2007
Excellent as always! :) Still loving this story, it gets better and better! :P
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From ANON - margyy on January 21, 2007
good chapter! Boy, Vincent sure did call Cid "chief" alot huh? And a shaved Cid? *gasp* I can't wait till the wedding!! Cause Sephy and Tseng will be going together!! Im really excited about it! I daydream about it alot *giggles* anyways! I want to be on the info mailing list!! I know you had my email from before, but its hapylittlelf@hotmail.com :D
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From ANON - SneakyOne on January 20, 2007
There was supposed to be a less-than-three at the end of that ^^^ so that the last comment wouldn't sound as rude as I think it does now, after re-reading it. That wasn't a demand, just a heartfelt plea, because, you know, you're just that awesome. (insert less-than-three here)

And, I forgot to mention. I've gotten into the habit of listening to the Advent Children soundtrack on repeat almost constantly - for some reason, just about everything else eventually makes my ears ache. Every once in a while, I'll actually pay attention to what score is playing during a scene I'm reading over, and some of them merge so perfectly, it's amazing.

I really should've taken notes.
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From ANON - SneakyOne on January 20, 2007
I think I'm falling in love with your writing and your perception of the FF7 characters. Yesterday I read the Shattered Ice Redux and the original, then stayed up with Dreams until four in the morning (a good five hours after my usual bedtime, I'll have you know), then finished it after I got up. For a long, long time I've avoided reading any sort of fanfic, thinking it'd ruin my own views of how characters would behave; but, instead of ruining that, you've managed to simply offer alternate possibilities that somehow merge flawlessly with how they appear to me. I've got my own cherished pairings - Cid/Vincent being one of them, which is why I picked up your story - and you've managed to turn others on their heads. (Barrett and Elmyra? Rude and Shera? Definitely ones I'd never think of.)

My only regret is that I read too damn fast. It's not often I have to yell at myself at that - until I reach the end of a most marvelous but unfinished story.

So now you have a new adoring fan waiting with bated breath for an update. Which, you know, I'm really really hoping will be soon.

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From ANON - Samma on January 19, 2007
Okay, after eight days, I managed to catch up. Let's just say I sympathize with Reeve on the job that gives you no time to yourself!

Where to start...

You blend the supernatural and the mundane beautifully; the existance of demigod/esses and the everyday hell of monsters and lover's quarrels seems real, as does the war they fight. (Though one can see your favorite series rearing their heads if they read between the lines)

The relationships are still startlingly real, and the children adorable. I can predict where certain things will happen, especially with Yuffie and Tseng. Will Godo spin clockwise or counter?

I guessed Reeve came from money--one doesn't simply gain manners and presence like that living on the streets (my apologies to Reno), but Cid, that was a shock. I look foreward to hearing your explanation to that.

Consider me another one of your avid readers, please. Take your time with the updates, it's better not to rush quality.
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From ANON - Kitsuwa on January 13, 2007
*Snerks* Gods...I'm still laughing. Marlene's suggestion of Sephy and Tseng going together was perfectly childlike and adorable. I choked on my sub when I saw that, and everyone's reaction. Priceless...

*Is also looking up fishing so she can make a certain amusing picture.*
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From ANON - Tant on January 12, 2007
Yay, make up sex!
Lets see... ok, first, sorry I didn't reveiw the last chapter. My parent's computer has a hate/crash relationship with the internet. I did like the last chapter, though.
Are you sure Cid would be upset if Vince let Galian chase his relatives around a bit? Vincent and Reis could just not tell him about it or claim Vincent lost control.*evil laugh* If Reis helps the other girls plot Reeve & Reno's wedding, the guy's better be careful. :P
Raven was a sharpshooter too? For whatever reason I was picturing him with a jakujou (a staff with a crescent-moon shaped blade attached at the end with chains). Anyway, your character, your decision, right? ^_^
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From ANON - Limpet666 on January 12, 2007
*grin* Yay!! new chapter!! I've been checking every day for the last 3 days now!! =3 I dont know if it's possible but Vincent is even smexier now that everyone else has started being angsty too and he's gotten himself all humanified *nods wisely*

Heh, and the idea of Cid all clean cut...*blurble* very nice image indeed...

Aww i cant wait for the wedding!!! XD the image of Reeve in a white dress with the veil...and his beard...ah that cracks me up XD or Reno...in makeup...ahh! I'm really finding this too funny aren't I? Eh, we need some humor with all the angstness going on.

'Specially with Cid's family...Vincent should kick their asses. They should all have their asses kicked!! *huff*

Tseng is teh smex, and he'd look so good with Sephy...mmm...*imagines*

*huff* it's just annoying because I read Shattered Ice not long ago, so I cant really get in to redux until I've left it some time so I can be all 'Wow, this is incredible' over the plot and writing again XD But readt assured, when I have left it a sufficient amount of time I will read it and review!! *promise*

*gives muffin* Write more! Please please please!! And if you've already written it then post it!! please please please!! :P
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From ANON - ayachan on January 12, 2007
ahh, so the truth of cid's past comes out.. it was very interesting! And I liked how you used the nightmare to find out where balaam is :) Yay! good to see them all nice and happy again. Haha, I would like to see Cid as a weak and weepy uke- now that would be an interesting sight! Can't wait for the wedding, I bet it's going to be cute ^^
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From ANON - Ri on January 12, 2007
Omg! I amso sorry i missed the last update! Gah i curse holidays. Sorry; but i read them both and wonderful!! As usual! And loved the last update and the make up sex and Vincent being all evilish playful! Loved that, made me forget about Cid's evil family! I cannot wait to read more! And yay we met Reeve's sister! I already like her ^_^. And this time i will be sure to check like crazy for updates! I do not want to miss anymore like last time! Keep up the awesome job! Update soon i cannot wait to read more!
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From ANON - Death penalty on January 11, 2007
wonderful chapter!!!, really, I enjoyed this one a lot, I love the way you portrait vince and cid, they make such a great couple!!
guess it was time to see Cid have a breakdown like that
thank you for updating!!and keep up with the splendid work!!

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From SorceressFujin on January 11, 2007
Mwhahaha! Absolutely LOVED that chapter! :D
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From ANON - limpet666 on January 10, 2007
*blink blink* There's no more? WAH!! I'm been steadily reading through this for a week and I cant beleieve I have to wait for the next up date now, that's not fair! I want more!!

Heh, i always find myself getting annoyed when I get to the end of one chapter and then the next chapter is on a diff set of charries. I'm like 'But what's happening to Cid and Vincent!?' or 'No! I want Sephy/Tseng smex!', and then I just get equally involved in the next chapter as soon as I start reading it and I'm just as annoyed even if the next chapter is about the characters I wanted to find out about...if that makes any sense XD

I absolutely love these sets of stories Oo and the Zack/Elena bit was the first het I've ever read in like...ever XD I just always go for yaoi, but reading that i was like, 'wow, man that's hot.' And i like how you've made Elena super cool as well. Usually people make her really clingy, whiny or annoying. I like your badass version better, especiallu since you still keep her girly. XD I hate to think what her and Aeris would be like if Cid and Vin decide to get married to. I see...reds and blues...

Write more Sephy/Tseng! That's really hot, and cute how they're like embarrassed teenagers!!

*glompage* post more soon! Pleeeeeease!!!! *gives bagel*

Limpet666

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