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Reviews for Shattered Dreams

By : Crya2Evans
  • From SorceressFujin on December 30, 2006
    :P Fantastic chapter! :) hehe, Yuffie and Nanaki are actually quite a nice coupling. :P
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  • From ANON - ayachan on December 18, 2006
    CAMBRIDGE?!?!?! lol, wow, didn't see that coming. I'd change my name too if i was named that XD that's cute.. but anyway, wow.. I did not expect his family to be that screwed up! but it was a great chapter- nice and angsty. Reis- that name sounds familiar.. where is it from? good luck on the next chapter ^^
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  • From ANON - elvenarchress on December 16, 2006
    what a chapter. I could really learn to hate the Highwinds (Cid excluded of course). One word to describe them would be stubborn but proud's just as good. The Captain is too, but not to their extent. Any hope for reconcilliation? Cid obviously loves his family regardless of the way they treat him. Chosen sexually aside, what other reasons could they have to hate Cid? Why Cambridge? What happened to Cid's mom and brother? On another hand, I like Zack and Elena togther; they look like a fun couple, especially when they're trying to hook up their superiors. Speaking of which are Tseng and Seph ever gonna get together?
    ...okay. I'm asking too many plot-spoiler questions. Sorry. I just really wanna know. I like this story.
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  • From ANON - Tant on December 15, 2006
    Cid's relatives are all jerks, except that kid. Maybe Vincent should let Chaos or the Galian Beast have a go at them.>D
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  • From ANON - Ri on December 13, 2006
    OMG!!! I was boiling angry!! Cid's family....omg they gah they had me so angry!!! I mean poor Cid the pain the suffering he must have endured back then and now dealing with his family's crap all over again like that!!! Horrible! They are horrible!!!! *Hugs Cid* I mean it was a shock seeing Cid come from a rich family but still it wasn't like "HOLY CANNOLIS! That is sooooo not Cid!" I liked the idea yet his family sucks!! they suck! Except for his niece. But everyone else sucks!! Evil family!!!! Okay okay sorry that is not even a review. *Bows head* The chapter was painful to read but still well written and so much conflict and emotion it is something that makes me think about how a family can treat their own flesh and blood that way. *Shakes fist* Well still liked it and i cannot wait to read more. Update soon! *Cruses Cid's family* Ahem update soon!
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  • From ANON - Q on December 12, 2006
    Yay! Updates! This is a very interesting turn, but you pull it off so well! Cambridge...tee hee hee :giggle giggle: I like it :D Anywho, good job! We all appreciate your work!
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  • From SorceressFujin on December 12, 2006
    Excellent chapter! Absolutely loved it! Highwind's family reminds me of mine. lol :P
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  • From ANON - Tant on November 30, 2006
    Lol. That warning is the funniest thing I've seen all day. I don't know why a het lemon warning struck me as funny but...
    The chapter itself was good too. You wrote the het lemon well. Is it safe to assume this won't be the last one? It's nice to see an Elena that's not timid and submissive, especially around the guys.
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  • From ANON - Ri on November 29, 2006
    Love the scene with Cloud and Sephiroth dueling and Cloud telling Sephiroth to lead and be the leader. Ah brings me back to memories when He use to lead. Sexy leader...anyways for the other half O_O OoO *Claps hands over mouth* OoO;;;;;;;; I was shocked yet i thought it was well written. But yet O_O but still i enjoyed the chapter. can't wait to read the rest! And no the arguments will continue in the next chapter? and Cid's family!? OH NOES!! I cannot wait!!! update soon!!
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  • From ANON - ayachan on November 28, 2006
    what? what? wow, that's a surprise.. cloud asking sephiroth to lead! and woah, i'm surprised that there is a warning for het lemon too! lol, i never thought that i would see one of those *grins* elena and zack are cute together ^^ i just don't really see her getting laid.. or being seductive either XD.. she seems too... stiff? lol, which is probably why she is getting laid and being all seductive and jazz.. sorry, skipped through the lemon, but i'm sure it was very good- your yaoi ones are, so i'm sure your het. ones are as well. ohhh,, now this is exciting.. i want to know more about the highwind family! i'm guessing that's for shattered children? anyway, good luck and keep up the good work!
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  • From SorceressFujin on November 28, 2006
    Yummy chapter! LOVED IT! :P
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  • From ANON - elvenarchress on November 15, 2006
    Hi again! Loved the fight scene. Not because they were fighting but cause it's a chance for them to learn more about each other; love's not just about the sex after all. Keep posting.
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  • From ANON - ayachan on November 15, 2006
    no! that was horrible! and it's going to get worse? O_O oh man *goes in corner and cries* quite a tense scene there, good job with all of the emotions! *sigh* good luck vincent and cid! lol, and good luck to you too, dracoqueen :)
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  • From ANON - Ri on November 15, 2006
    *Is gasping and gripping the table with a death grip* HOLY CANNOLIS!! It keeps on getting worse!! WORSE!! So sad and horrible so harsh so omg so much emotion between Cid and Vincent you have no idea who's side you should choose! I mean gah you can be like "I agree with Cid" but then you are wait no "vincent i mean it is cid who does not want to listen" But then you are like damn it all both of you need to sit down and talk!! They need to go see a psychologist!! XD *Sits down with a notebook and in a fancy chair* Let us review their emotions and see what the problem is ya?
    Anyways so much is going on with everyone! Cloud for example and well Cid and Vincent had their moments but my gosh it just seems like the fire keeps on growing and there is no sign of it dying down fast! Sigh reason why i love your story. Gah i am going to be dying until i get to read the next chapter. Well update when you can!! BYE!
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  • From SorceressFujin on November 14, 2006
    Excellent chapter! :) I am definatly eager to see what happens next. Mwhahahaa! :P
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