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Reviews for Calm Indulgance

By : Armot
  • From ANON - Nirvana_X on December 18, 2006
    Oh god im gonna be sick *throws up* ohhhh...gooood.....*faints*
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  • From ANON - FukinCrazy on September 21, 2006
    Ok first off, you are one sick motherfucker. But brilliant work!! A absolutely gripping story, phenomenal! The ending could have been a little better but otherwise good job!
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  • From ANON - ... on September 04, 2006
    wow...
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 05, 2006
    ...

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  • From ANON - dude.... on July 30, 2006
    i was totally grosed out... yet i couldent look away... your sick man... SICK!
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  • From AngelMeiru on July 06, 2006
    Cool fanfic. People need to realize that this is all FANTASY. IT'S NOT REAL.

    Anyways, I've written a Final Fantasy VI snuff fic and working on a Final Fantasy VII one.
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  • From ANON - Kitana on February 11, 2006
    Amazing. The flowery language and the long paragraphs really add to the story, while at the same time making it not as disgusting to read as it could be. But I agree with the other posters. You have issues. Keep using those issues to write more, please!
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  • From ANON - BrucesGirl (Too Lazy To Log In) on January 30, 2006
    Well, I really should review longer than I am, but considering my brain is fried, I will tell you this. I really liked this fic and it went on my favorites. You have a lot of gumption to post something this vivid.

    Two points of advice.

    Might want to make your paragraphs shorter...it helps the reader transition through the text with more ease!
    Also, you don't wanna write like Dickens, so try to cut out at least SOME of the description. You have beautiful detail, but after a while it gets difficult to read. Otherwise, it was beautiful.

    Please write more. I really wanna see a Cloud/Seph fic from you. That would be amazing.
    Love ya sweetie.
    BG

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  • From ANON - Candy on January 27, 2006
    Curiosity killed the cat. That was...well...the grossest thing I've ever read. Can't believe someone...requested this.
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  • From ANON - Elklodge on January 26, 2006
    Wow that was amazing! Sick but sickly brilliant! 5 out of 5 thanks for answering my challenge others are open to answer it if you like.
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  • From SelbenCoirlo on January 25, 2006
    Well, I enjoyed the story anyway. Though I think you have excellent, vivid descriptions in there I also think that much of the language used is unnecessarily flowery and, at time, confusing. That floweriness is seriously at odds with the overall tone of the story in terms of content, and while I think that sort of contrast could work it does more harm than good in the context of this story. The vivid descriptions are excellent, but the language elsewhere IMO should be toned down to better demonstrate and emphasize those descriptions. I do think the story fell apart a little bit near the end, with the evil dude in the armor controlling everything behind the scenes (so TRITE), and the very last sentence is extraordinarily silly... IMO. Overall though, I thought it was great, especially if it's your first effort.
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  • From ANON - uberman on January 24, 2006
    u are the sickest motherfucker in the universe you need some professioinal health really how could u have something like that happen to rikku u sick basterd
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  • From ANON - Lisa on January 24, 2006
    ...you have serious, serious issues. I'd seek professional help. Soon.
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  • From ANON - .... on January 23, 2006
    plain sick, good writing but still rather sick
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