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Reviews for surrender

By : laurenloogie
  • From ANON - vinvalen on August 01, 2010
    One of the best Cloud/Seph fics I've ever read. (I've read a LOT)Excellently done!
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  • From ANON - Angie-Bop on September 03, 2007
    Your writing is livid and emotional. I could picture all of it and for some reason, I wasn't disturbed. I wanted to cry almost because I could see that, all of it. Please, my lovely, continue, You have quite a knack
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  • From ANON - Will DuBois on May 13, 2007
    Hisweety, just read your chapter again and I have to say that I think you've reached your zenith. A tour de force, no bullshit.
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  • From ANON - 19 on June 26, 2006
    That was exquisite, dear. Very very hot, and very beautiful, and very sad, and just right. Thank you. : )

    XIX
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  • From chesierecat on January 29, 2006
    Now that was something new. Beautifully dark and hot, I absolutely love it. Seriously, I had to plug my nose while reading even though I wasn't really nosebleeding. It just had that effect. Also I love how you portray Cloud's anger and the cause of Seph's surrender at the end got me right in the heart. It gave me an impression of replaying the game and seeing it in another light. Awesome job and thank you for writing. Hope to read more from you. ;)
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  • From ANON - sephslover on January 28, 2006
    Great story! I love uke Seph, especially when the seme's Cloud. As you said, it's a hard-to-find pairing.
    Also I like the way you picture Seph. I guess not many people see him as something more than an almighty psycho who wants to destroy the word. Thanks for all the fun.
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  • From ANON - Nashwa on January 28, 2006
    That was hot o.o

    And kinda sad. I got all misty eyed at the end. Poor Sephy *sniffle*
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  • From ArdwynnaMorrigu on January 25, 2006
    HOT! Red, fiery hot! Really some of the darkest Uke!roth I've seen to date. I like that you dwelled more on Cloud's anger instead of his grief, as is more commonly done. The sex was steaming and yet there was actual motivation and feeling behind it on both sides. It made this fic believable and more than just a good PWP. There's enough little detail behind Seph's sadness and Cloud's struggling to make a reader wonder about what the full story was on both sides. I'm usually not fond of seeing reference to Earth things in FFVII fanfiction, but the phrase about Sephiroth wearing blood like Gucci really nails that image in the mind. It's just the perfect line, great rhythmic balance and it says exactly what it needs to with really stunning clarity and impact. This was some damn fine fiction!
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  • From ANON - Antisocial Butterfly on January 25, 2006
    "Fucking Sephiroth’s ass was as alien a concept as Rufus ShinRa being straight."

    I loved that line. And the fic. As you say, an odd pairing, but it definitely works!
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  • From ANON - lauren on January 25, 2006
    Thanks so much for all your reviews! I've never posted a fic on the web before so I was a little nervous. Ha ha... yeah, Cloud's pretty pissed. I don't know... when I played the game, I always thought of Cloud as kind of an asshole, so it wasn't hard for me to imagine him doing something fucked up to poor Seph. Anyway, thanks again for all your nice reviews!
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  • From ANON - ShadowIcia *not logged in* on January 25, 2006
    Not really into this pair but thought I check this out. Its nice to see Cloud kicking some fucking ass once and awhile.
    I think if you piss Cloud off enough he sure as hell will whip a can of whoop ass out on you. Sometimes fangirls make Cloud too soft. I think even I do at times.

    It was cool.
    Shadowicia


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  • From ANON - Anon124 on January 24, 2006
    Whoopie for seme Cloud! Good job on this!
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  • From ANON - ZombieDuke(not logged in) on January 24, 2006
    THAT WAS SO FUCKING GOOD! I am SO glad that Sephiroth being bottom hasn't been abondended! I love it! Beginning, middle and ending! I absoulty LOVE this story! Gaaah, a bruised and bloodied Sephiroth, it's like a breath of fresh air! So yummy! Happiness!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - atOmicSquid on January 23, 2006
    Did I forget to mention how much I loved it? It was truely beautiful.
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  • From ANON - atOmicSquid on January 23, 2006
    Oh dear god. I LOVED IT. ABSOLUTELY. FRIGGIN'. LOVED IT. I want to hump your leg.
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