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  • From HatakeHinata on December 21, 2008
    Wonderful!!!!
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  • From ANON - Glacial on September 28, 2006
    Amazing absolutely amazing, and really hot also
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  • From horrorgal on September 14, 2006
    I love TifaXCloud pairings and yours was definitely hot. It was raw and lustful and awesome. Can't wait to read more from you.
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  • From Ihategels on September 08, 2006
    Thank you sooo much for writing this!
    And so well too!
    I thought everybody hated Cloud/Tifa!
    But I love it!
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  • From ANON - Tikku on July 30, 2006
    First of all, yay for another Cloud/Tifa fic. :D You have an interesting story going. I really wanna know what's going on with Cloud. I loved this chapter, though, so please update soon!
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  • From Pen-Versus-Sword on July 14, 2006
    Oh. My. God. That was pretty hot, but some cc. Put a full space between paragraphs so they don't run together. It makes it easier to read. And Cloud...good gravy! Would that my own husband had th same staying/regenerative powers! I don't think I'd ever leave home. One other thing...I have seen moans and gasps (among other things) in quotation marks. Lots of people use that particular storytelling deice, me included. Sorry, kiddo, you ain't the first. Anyways, great job, keep it up, and keep practicing...good luck!
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  • From ANON - Josh on July 08, 2006
    Hey great begining and they always did care for each other so hope to see an update soon. I hope you will update this story and make it better
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  • From ANON - phoenix on July 04, 2006
    WOW,THAT WAS HOT!!!!! ALSO THANKS FOR WRITTING THIS,CAUSE THERE'S DEFINITELY TO MUCH YAIO ROUND HERE
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  • From ANON - the rurouni on June 15, 2006
    score another Tifa/cloud fanfiction nice work keep it up
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