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Reviews for Absent Presence

By : DB2020
  • From ANON - Raneynr Lerrqu on October 03, 2006
    This is one of the best stories I've read of this paring. I agree with your thought that they'd become friends in a unique way. Fantastic job!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 26, 2006
    Are you sure this is finished? I mean i loved it but...thats it? There are so many loose ends. you cant just...finish it like that? can you? i know im an anon so if you want to say anything to me my email is anime_obsessed_lover@hotmail.com. I'd really love to know in-depth, what you were doing with this story. and i dont mean in a bad way, its really good!
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  • From ANON - Gfsgrl on August 21, 2006
    i don't review lots of the time, but i really liked this story. Good job. And to theabove reviewer... helloo, there was even a warning about Seifer and Sqall going at it...jeepers... dun read something after being warned and then complain about it. Great story DB, I thought the scene was cute! it was definitly just like a young Seifer... or Irvine mayeb. Childhood curiosity is always so amusing. Everyone's first kiss can't be so unique.
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  • From ANON - Figmentedreality on August 21, 2006
    Hello there. Wow. Nice story. But seriously. Ten-year-olds? Goodness. That's a little TOO young to be making out, don't you think. But yeaaahh. It's still a real good story with enough sensory details.Kudos!
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  • From ANON - Figmentedreality on August 21, 2006
    Hello there. Wow. Nice story. But seriously. Ten-year-olds? Goodness. That's a little TOO young to be making out, don't you think. But yeaaahh. It's still a real good story with enough sensory details.Kudos!
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  • From ANON - Leon on August 06, 2006
    I really liked this, really liked it. It's really well done, and I completely agree about how they wouldn't exactly be 'normal' friends. Anyway, I won't waffle on about it. It was a great little story, and I do hope to see more of your work around. ^-^ You've definitely got one avid reader here. Dare I even say stalker? xD
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  • From ANON - margyy on August 04, 2006
    I really liked that story :) thou i was kinda bummed you sorta skipped the sex scene xP

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  • From ANON - Jazzbo22 (not logged in) on July 29, 2006

    Just dropping you a line. I think this story is really great, I love how you have captured Seifer's and Squall's emotions (and character). It is exactly how I imagined they would be. Please finish this, I am very intrigued to see how their meeting goes.
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  • From ANON - Katamari119 on July 29, 2006
    I really liked this part. I like the character of Seifer. It is so funny how he can come to reason on how he is feeling and he thinks its some type of descies lol. Really good job. I can't wait till they meet up again. I also like how you made the rain a big important element in the story. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - LiardDestrier on July 28, 2006
    INFATUATION! DESIRE! MORE! Or...something like that. I'm not completely fluent in Fujin-ese yet. I loved your previous works, Proteting the Lion and Strings Attached and it's marvelous to see more delectable SXS. You should've let Irvine rape Squally in SA though...No, no. Just kidding. I love squall, really I do. But...I love seeing him suffer even more. *grins insanely* Your portrayal of Seifer is exquisate and Squall is very cannon. Keep writing please! I'm not sure which gives me a bigger rush, seeing Squall leave that bitch Rinoa or seeing him make out with Seifer *swoon*. Squall's episode with Cid was kind of...odd. Almost random. You made it sound like Squall had simultaneously been bugged for monthes on end and not at all. How often does Cid get on his case? PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON! *begs*
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  • From ANON - katamari119 on July 26, 2006
    Omg! This was such a wonderful and sweet fic! I give mega props because your writing style is really great. You could probab;y turn this into proffesional work if it wasn't copyrighted lol I really loved how kept on the characters' personalities, especially Squall. And I love the part when they were kids. It was really sweet and I could npt stop laughing on Zell's comment. I liked it how you described the charaters without going to crazy detail like some stories do. Also that you didn't go into Rinoa-bashing mode. I actually got to see a side of Squall that I didn't realize was really there, that he actaully thought he acted like an ass sometimes. That he actually thinks that he should be feeling really good about his life. You really desbrined his situation very good and if the game focused on Squall and Seifer as a couple, I see this as part of the sequel. Really excellent job. I cannot wait for the next part. I would really love to read Seifer's thoughts in all this. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Missy on July 25, 2006
    That was cute. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - slypantera on July 25, 2006
    "Seifer and Squall are making babies." LMAO, that was cute. Good story! :D
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