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By : LemonLimeCrush
  • From Avinacode101 on June 29, 2007
    :o I have some critique here!


    It’s possible then that more exist here in Deepground....

    er.... what are you trying to say?


    Nero was rather enjoying his position on Weiss’s lap, and how easy it was to keep his finger combed in that wild mane of white hair,

    I hope Nero has more than one finger...


    That's all I found! Awesome chapter. It was... incredibly fast paced! Nero learned to use a gun, Nero and Argento meet, Weiss and Nero have sex, Weiss meets Indigo and Viridis. Who was Verde in Chapter 8, but that might have been changed, I must check. And Weiss and Indigo fight. A lot to put into one chapter. You did manage it without making it sound choppy, but i still think that it should be broken up a bit, and more detail added. I have no idea where by any means, but maybe you could point out why Indigo and Viridis made an explosion for the hell of it, and maybe a bit more on Weiss putting his clothes on. It was only one word, so I managed to skip over it and I had one thought for the rest of the fic (before I reread it) - Is he fighting Indigo naked?! I reread it, and looked for it, and Weiss did "redress" himself, but it was a little hidden. Easy to skip over. Also, might want to add how Argento knew Weiss and Nero had sex. I mean, was she there? It was the first time they'd done it, and she's onto them!


    Great fic, looking forward to more.
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  • From AquilaBlue on June 29, 2007
    Thanks so much for the mention *blush* I'm always happy to help out however I can ^_^

    Another excellent chapter. I really enjoyed the introduction of the two new Tsviets and really enjoy how you write Argento. She does come across as rather mysterious in the multiplayer mode.

    And of course, great smexing :3
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  • From Avinacode101 on June 21, 2007
    I love your latest chapter, and the rest of the chapters of course. Lovely fic! Very dark when it comes to Nero. I always keep thinking that whenever Nero is around, there is very little light, while when Weiss is around, there are brightly lit corridors. Nice writing style - vivid imagery.

    ~ I_Desire_my_Valentine
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  • From AquilaBlue on June 21, 2007
    Yea! I'm so very happy that you're continuing this story :D Another excellent chapter, I'm definately enjoying how you're having Restrictor play a bigger role, he's such an evil bastard! I hope that you'll cover the story behind how Nero gets his wings as well!
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  • From ChibiGonzilla on June 02, 2007
    0.o

    Are you..god?

    {Howdy! I just joined AdventChildren forums (Grigio) and was directed to read this fiction...)
    and omfg i'm glad that i did...I was pretty much squealing and whimpering the entire time!!!! I'm going to read all the rest of yours now
    -nods-

    I'm still pretty sure you're god tho.....kyyaaaa! update soon please god-sama! T^T


    {Oh...at the first chapter or something you said that you had/knew where to get the script for DoC online event, i'd really appreciate it if you sent me a link or something of the like....}
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  • From Itavita on April 19, 2007
    *tackles* I love this fic so very much~! It's so adorable - it leaves a fluffyness in your belly when you read about the brothers' interaction. ^^

    Looking forward to the next chapters. :)
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  • From Avinacode101 on February 14, 2007
    Well now! I did not expect to find such a well written fic here! There is a greater age difference between Weiss and Nero here than in other fics, but somehow it worked without being cute shota, which is absolutely horrible.

    There are spelling mistakes, the kind that Word doesn't look for. For example head was misspelled thread, that sort of mistake. Otherwise, your plot moves quickly, yet does not rush, and your charachters are very believable. I like your descriptions, and how there are good explanations for phenomenon - like Nero's tattoos, and why all the Tsviets look up at Weiss in Dirge of Cerberus.

    Great job, and I will watch for your updates.
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  • From Amaya1560 on February 06, 2007
    Wow... absolutely amazing!!!!!!!! I adore your story!!!! It's so amazing!!!!!!! Nero and Weiss make such a cute couple, ne? I honestly can't convey how super, amazingly, fantastic this story is!!!!! Yes... I used those words... forgive me as I revert back to the age of 9. Now, I think it is time for some artwork for this story you have here... when it is finished, I shall email you a copy! It might take a while though... sorry! I'm a bit of a slow artist. But it will be done! I can't wait for your next update, so don't take too long!!!
    See ya!
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  • From ANON - Fallen To The Slashy Side on December 11, 2006
    Well this story has made a believer out of me!
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  • From ANON - z32 on December 11, 2006
    THIS STORY IS JUST SO AWESOME!! You are a great writer and PLEASE!! continue it I'm so looking forward to it!! Wai!!! SO CUTE ENDING FOR CHAPPIE SEVEN!! WAII!!!! I JUST WANT TO DRAW SCENES FROM YOUR FIC LIKE THERE'S NO TOMORROW
    ok, rabid fangirl here xDUU
    PLZ CONTINUE IT!!! TOT!
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  • From AquilaBlue on December 04, 2006
    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. The ending was so sweet! Don't apologize, I love mushy stuff like that ^_^ I have to agree with everyone else, this chapter was well worth the wait, I think I have to go clean up the blood from the induced nosebleed now ;)

    Not a fanart, but a haiku for you:

    Juxtiposition
    between the shadow and light
    their pure love prevails.

    Heh, and I'm glad you can't look at the snack aisle the same way again, my work here is done! *evil grin*

    And last but not least, please write more!


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  • From ANON - D.P on December 03, 2006
    THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!
    THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!!
    I did looked upon the spinal tap, and it must have hurt a lot, I hope you are feeling better now
    and finally! nero said someting!, that last part was so sweet.
    thank you soo much for sharing this story with us.
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  • From ANON - lunatic_vn on December 03, 2006
    Die happily form Orgasm. Heh Heh. This is worth for the waiting you know? The most memorable chapter by the way?(Just kidding.) Don't worry about the ending. It's quite good. Nero's speaking made me smile. Can't help it but he was very quiet in this fic. Still curious about the things you set up for them in the future.(Form what I heard form you, It sound good.) ^_^
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  • From ANON - Shido Burrito on December 03, 2006
    Yes yes yesss! The time has come! They finally became one (ha, a poet and didn't know it)! That chapter just made my month. Christmas came early! Yay! Santa brought smut! But seriously, I am loving it. And thankies for the blurb at the top! I feel loved! Talk about an ego boost, I'm so happy that you got to see my fan art! Your fan fic was so inspiring I just had to illustrate it. Please keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Ta Boo on December 03, 2006
    Forgot to add ...

    Nero spoke!! SQUEE!!!!

    ^_^
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