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Reviews for Apology Accepted

By : horrorgal
  • From missbja on May 12, 2008
    I was going through your stories after reading the AerisxCloudxTifa one and I must say I'm not regret! You portraited them perfectly! :D

    And it was HOT HOT HOT! :D
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  • From JohnMadden on December 16, 2007
    There was nothing I didn't like about that story.
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  • From Jyet on February 06, 2007
    Short and to the point, but very hot and well-written. While the fic is of course PWP, it's obviously intended as such and tells its story quite well. Keep writing!
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  • From WalterKraken101 on January 26, 2007
    Wow. That was a nice piece of action. Woulda been funny though to shift scenes to a room next to them and having someone laying awake and looking disturbed.
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  • From ANON - jesphoenix on December 27, 2006
    "Here I thought you were compensating for something, carrying that big sword around," hahahahahahahaha! I always wondered about that! Oh that was fun! So much fun!hahahahahaha
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  • From ANON - wantshentai on November 04, 2006
    Hell yeah! That's my kinda fanfic. I love yuffie/cloud pairings. Very well written and thought out. It's believable and I love it. I'm working on starting up my own fanfic page (www.myspace.com/wantshentai) (I mostly used myspace for the free domain and web space) anyway, I was hoping I could post your story on the site. I plan to include proper citation (MLA) and give you credit. Shoot me an e-mail if that's okay with you. (wantshentai@yahoo.com) Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Dorian on October 01, 2006
    It was good, though a tiny bit too PWP, even for my liking ;)
    If you want me to return the favour by writing something to, lemme know.
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  • From Meili on September 27, 2006
    Not sure exactly what to say, it was certainly well-written and technically good. However it seems to lack a certain spark to it. Maybe I was unaffected or left cold since I really don't like either character. I understand that it is basically a one-shot fic with not much plot so unless you plan to continue writing more chapters not much can really be done to develop the characters more due to the fic's length.

    Hmmm just as a general rule, sex involves not just the body but also the feelings and the mind, I think the build-up was good physically but not mentally or emotionally. As I said though, you would have to expand the fic's length to get more into that but as a one-shot it's pretty good.

    Thank goodness it's het lol, most FFVII fics are yaoi.
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