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Reviews for Shatter

By : LemonLimeCrush
  • From psycokitty on May 04, 2007
    ok i finished the fanart
    its colored now YAY!!
    and i read this story like a dozen times
    its sooo awsome!!!
    http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/54513151/
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  • From psycokitty on May 01, 2007
    wow i love this story and i made a fan art to it after i finnished it its not colored but im going to try and color it w/ color pincels, i wish i had a tablet TT-TT
    oh and i did buy some oreos and then i read the story gah!! i loved it i looked at oreos different now ?-?
    any way please please please wirte more stories like that i love bondage i cant write to save my life
    oh the fanart is at deviantart.com look for psycokittysamurai
    oh and I LOVE YOUR STORIES^__^
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  • From Itavita on April 19, 2007
    *enjoyed this immensely* Very well written, especially the sex. xD *re-reads* Mmm...nummy....

    Glad to see another Weiss/Nero fic. There are hardly any on here. D: I should probably write one when I get all this other crap finished. >.>;

    Anywho, looking forward to more in the future. :3
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  • From GabreillaMoushigo on November 18, 2006
    What can I say? I've been putting off reviewing for this for waaay too long. God I love this story. I think I read this one right after I wrote my own lemon and I was so totally blown away by it (and totally embarassed about my story afterwards).

    Maybe I'm just a pervert - but I completely love this story soooo much that I read it a little too often. It really got me anchored into the whole WeissXNero pairing.

    You convey emotion really well. They really love each other and it shows (even if they are rough hehe). I think someone mentioned you use the same words a lot - I noticed it too - but I am totally guilty of doing that on more than one occassion (like in almost everything I write hehe).

    Anyways - before I turn this into an essay I really loved it and I wanted to review for it. Good job! =D
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  • From ANON - Zetht on October 25, 2006
    I haven't read any other reviews for this piece, so I'll probably just be repeating the exact same things everyone else said. Still, after a beautiful story like that, how could I not do you one the simple favor you asked for? I shall now, to the best of my ability, review.

    First of all, even despite the lack of beta-ing, it is marvellously written. Gramatically, your only slight problems were run-on sentences and keeping the verb tense in line. But...I actually had to read it twice to catch all of the mistakes, because the first time I read it I was rocking in my chair, eyes superglued to every word on the screen. The pace and flow of the story was beautiful - much better than a whole lot of stories I've read here, no offense to other authors here. You have great word choice, and it pays off in the most erotic way. Your characterization was great, too. I've played through DoC twice now, and your depiction of these two seemed to hit the nail on the head, as they say. There's extra credit right there: they had great, hot sex AND you kept them in character - canon, even, seeing as there were plenty of hints that the two loved each other, even if it didn't go so far as to suggest they were lovers. And there didn't have to be a plot at all, since this was a PWP, but it still fit into the main story really well.

    "Shatter" is definitely one of the best PWP's that I have ever had the joy of reading. My hat's off to you, my fellow author. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Brittny on September 25, 2006
    Your writing is fantastic! Why have I not discovered this sooner?
    Loved this story and your other works.
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  • From ANON - Anikky on September 17, 2006
    Hei, I usually don't review (can you believe it, I'm too SHY to), but I felt that this one especially deserved one! I love bondage and such, especially between two guys that could be described as both semes, so this was great to see. I loved the role reversal and the sudden switch at the end, great! :) I like your method of writing.

    Anikky.
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  • From ANON - lunatic_vn on September 12, 2006
    WOW,what the hot kinky sex screen.(Not be able to have any word to descripe this story better than this.) Adore your writing style very much, so danm smooth yet twisted exciting.This's now the longest sex-making sene I've ever read.And you beat that last one quite badly in quality. It's hard to have a long but interesting for read to the end One-shot. But if it's only my stupid feeling that I think some words were used a little too much ?(then it must because the story lengh.)Love to see more...WeissxNero forever!!
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  • From ANON - Mitternacht on September 04, 2006
    Oh wow. That was amazing! I love your writing style! And the characters, the romance, everything was just perfect from you! Another winning fanfic I see... must *twitch* write *twitch* more....
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  • From ANON - Aquila on August 30, 2006
    Damn, is it hot in here or what?!

    Wonderful story LL Crush, keep up the great work. I am definitely looking forward to reading more from you.

    I have to say I was in love with this pairing the very first time I saw them and you’ve done a magnificent job at bringing the characters to life (in the best way possible of course)! I especially enjoyed the power dynamic that comes through with Nero and Weiss and how that dynamic changes throughout the story. There were some twists in there that I totally wasn’t expecting.

    Your prose is well constructed, the story flows very smoothly. There are a few places which need a bit of work, but to be honest for a piece this long I didn’t even find them that distracting and I know you’ll fix them up soon :)

    For anyone who hasn’t read this story yet, what are you waiting for? Go GO!

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  • From essenceofmalice on August 28, 2006
    That's quite deliciously hot. XD And I know you stated that this wasn't beta'ed, but you really should look it through. There's a few errors here and there that can be distracting. Aside from that, quite nice. ^^
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  • From ANON - Raye on August 25, 2006
    *takes comment virginity* HAHA! Anyways that was so F-ing HOT!!! Not too familiar with the characters but when sex is involved...WHO CARES!! Kudos to you and your Yaoi writing ablity...I'll figure out how the hell you all do it one day!!
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