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Reviews for My Little Whore

By : Sephanie
  • From Kyuubichan20 on December 30, 2007
    ...huh...
    That was rather interesting...
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  • From Qiana on September 13, 2007
    That was so sexy
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  • From ANON - Luvey on September 13, 2006
    Haha, cute.
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  • From ANON - luvey on September 12, 2006
    I wonder how Cloud will endure this.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 09, 2006
    Please keep writing, i think your story is great the way it is.
    Cloud whore is awesome
    POOONNN TIME!! XD
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  • From ANON - Si on September 07, 2006
    I'm just writing to encourage you to keep expressing your ideas. If anyone tells you NOT to write, ignore them. I'm still reading your stuff and I will read whatever you write in the future. :) Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Luvie on September 06, 2006
    Hahahha, love it.
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  • From ANON - Luvie on September 05, 2006
    Interesting ^^
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  • From ANON - Zillah on September 01, 2006
    Story certainly has some potential. But work on the build of sentences and more importantly, punctuation!
    Also, the story is kind of straight in the face. Perhaps a little subtlety can be used.
    If you're going to post more chapters, don't forget to give some background info on the characters, or atleast small hints to the character's past.

    Good luck.
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  • From on August 31, 2006
    More? Yeah, sure! Why not?

    I loved it! Don't worry about your spelling/grammer. You have better grammatical skills than a LOT of fan fiction writers out there. This was a Sephiroth/Cloud WITHOUT cliches, and that's something you should be proud of!
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  • From ANON - Pyra on August 31, 2006
    THAT WAS FRIGGIN SWEET!!!!!!
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