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Reviews for The World Can Wait

By : Scarecrow79
  • From ANON - Kurotoshi on January 10, 2007
    Hello! I've been in this fandom for 10 years, and I've been an enormous fan of this pairing for 10 years, and frankly, this fic is probably number 1 in my favorite RudexReno fics EVER. For someone's first Yaoi, it's *glorious*. Absolutly amazing, and wonderful, I can't wait to see what happens next ~ just like Reno. I love the pace you're going at, and the way you choose to write, guh, absolutly everything about this fic is breathtaking! I will wait as long as it takes for the rest!
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  • From ANON - Squallfan on December 14, 2006
    This buildup up is painful, yet pleasurable. I'm still loving your work. Please continue soon.
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  • From ANON - DA on December 05, 2006
    You go girl, this is so good. Probably the best Rude/Reno fic I've ever come across! Please update soon, and I'll be sure to read it!

    DA
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  • From ANON - Moonchild DJ on November 03, 2006
    Oh wow...O_O This was the most fascinating Rude/Reno story I've ever read...both very sensual, and very sweet and hot at the same time. I am impressed that I saved the thing. *grin* Please, PLEASE continue, I must see more of this hotness as soon as you can post it! Maybe the world can wait, but I can't wait for more of this! XD What a wonderful piece of work! Congrats, and do keep up with it, and soon!
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  • From ANON - sweetcandie on October 24, 2006
    I think this is excellent work. I like how you lead into the act instead of just "wham bam get it done". The foreplay is what really makes a yaoi piece work because when it all comes down to it the foreplay is what sets your yaoi scene apart from the rest of the scenes out there. Also you are building up to the big act and by breaking the chapters up the way you do it also makes the reader want to come back for more. I guess it could kind of be like sex huh. Your descriptions and writing is wonderful there are few yaoi stories that catch my attention, and yours has definately done that. So keep up the good work and please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Yuki on October 24, 2006
    Hey, just a quick review to say that for your first yaoi, it's not bad at all. I've seen first lemons/yaoi attempts that are... well... bad, but yours certainly doesn't fit that category. I can understand your nervousness, though: lemons are some of the most nerve-wracking things to write, even for authors who've written lots before. But you're doing well, and the story is pretty damn hot at the best of times. As well as the physical stuff you've got plenty of insight into both the minds of Reno and Rude. Just keep going at the pace that suits you.

    For criticism, I did catch a couple of grammatical errors - missing apostrophes and the like. And there was one paragraph that was doubled up. Just keep your eye out for things like that. And as for content... personally, all I'm really missing is some more dialogue, as it was the banter in the game and AC that gave this particular pairing such great potential. Some more verbal exchanges between Reno and Rude could really heat things up more.

    So, yeah, keep going! I'm waiting anxiously for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Simon_the_duck on October 24, 2006
    Arrrgh, I hate you! You can't leave this story like this! Not fair!!!
    XD Please do hurry for the next part, okay?
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  • From ANON - Squallfan on October 24, 2006
    Awesome addition to the story, but a paragraph was doubled in the first part of the new chapter. You might want to fix that. Other than that, I'm pleased with it. I'm loving the slow build up.
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  • From Zell505 on October 09, 2006
    I love your story... Love it to the brim of my soothed soul. I'm not very poetic but you words are amazing. I just jumble everting up...^^;
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 05, 2006
    I didn't understand the last line - I distinctly remember something awesome from when the double post was on there.

    Anyway, apart from that - please do keep writing Reno and Rude. You're so damn good at it!
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  • From ANON - Squallfan on October 05, 2006
    Such an awesome build up. You're doing great. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - lo on September 09, 2006
    Nicely done. I liked what you have here it works very well.
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  • From ANON - Jessifer on September 08, 2006
    Neeh! I love it!...But where's the rest? It stopped too soon. ^.^;;
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  • From horrorgal on September 08, 2006
    Awesome first chapter. I just love the build up, to what is going to be some really hot sex. Update soon.
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