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Reviews for Obsession

By : girldisturbed
  • From ANON - Angel_shae on October 19, 2006
    More! Write more please!
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  • From ANON - CrystalFragments on October 18, 2006
    love the fic I also love the idea of forbidden love
    now all we need is a storyline that is as epic as the orig story itself mwahaha!!
    .. ehem anyhow you get the point
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  • From ANON - tifaluver on October 17, 2006
    hurry and update soon please!! can't wait for the next chappie :)
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  • From ANON - writelove on October 09, 2006
    I really enjoy this story, please update soon. :)
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  • From ANON - The Empress on October 04, 2006
    >:) Hehe Next Chappie please. I wanna know what's gonna happen. *snickers* Also, I like this story. :)
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  • From ANON - Frump on October 01, 2006
    This was a good chapter bit short though...well not really, I just want to see more, great fic though hope to see more soon
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  • From ANON - Mishka on October 01, 2006
    great chapter, i cant believe no one reviews this fic its great. do vincent and cloud like tifa?
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  • From ANON - The Empress on September 24, 2006
    >:) heheheehee oh yes. Things are about to get interesting. Muahahahaha! ahem...More please. :D I like this story.
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  • From SorceressFujin on September 21, 2006
    Excellent story so far, I am anxiously awaiting more!
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  • From ANON - Avaliea on September 21, 2006
    Great chaper, haha yazoo the peeing tom, i know you just did but update quickly
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  • From ANON - tifaluvah on September 19, 2006
    wow!! i'm totally hooked since i haven't read tifa in an angle like yours it was very nicely done. some simple errors were forgiven but thats understandable. please update soon!!! i'll give it a perfect score!
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  • From ANON - anonymous kinky woman on September 18, 2006
    I agree this is a very good start.
    And it's good to see Yazoo screwing someone besides one of his brothers.
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  • From elegyenigma on September 18, 2006
    Why doesn't this story have more reviews??? Oh well, I'll put words here in place of everyone else who reads it, whacks off, then leaves without a word... (ungrateful punks)

    You did good, but you hit the enter key WAY too much. You don't need THAT many seperate paragraphs, otherwise it just stretches it and makes it hard to read. In some cases it's good for making certain points, like thoughts, but for the most part, you really should try getting to at LEAST four sentences before creating a new paragraph, that's all I'm saying. Plus there's quite a few punctuation errors throughout.

    Nitpicking aside, the plot is delicious. It's like...it's like crag leg meat dipped in garlic butter, it's THAT good. I like the whole hint of mystery you had going on with who she was screwing. That deserves MAD props. It leads up to a lot of speculation and possibilities, which is terrific.

    Perhaps a bit more detail on the sex scene...or detail in general. That could use some work.

    Overall, very good. 4 out of 5 stars.
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  • From ANON - mishka on September 16, 2006
    this was a great fic, very well writen. i love tifa paired up with any of the SHM.
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