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Reviews for Give Me Someone to believe In

By : XxMarcusxX
  • From ANON - Christy on November 25, 2006
    Hey! It's Christy, dropping a line. I have to admit, it started out interesting. It would probably be easier to read if you shorten your paragraphs. And whenever someone speaks out loud, you start a new paragraph.

    "Like this..."

    Anyway, I think you have promise, you certainly did a good job with the 'tumble' in the gym. ^_^
    Anyway, I'll probably go read the next chapter now. If there is one...I don't remember...
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  • From ANON - SheWolfe7 on October 18, 2006
    Great start, I can't wait to see more so please update when you can!

    -SheWolfe7
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  • From ANON - Sekre on September 16, 2006
    Interesting start ^^
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