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Reviews for Defining Love

By : DB2020
  • From ANON - Anon on March 25, 2008
    wah~! I love this chapter. I love how you write the chracters of Squall and Seifer. They sem so beleivable. ^^V
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 25, 2008
    wah~! I love this chapter. I love how you write the chracters of Squall and Seifer. They sem so beleivable. ^^V
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  • From lawrencecasher on March 25, 2008
    omfg!!! That was so hott!! The ammount of emotional and sexual tension in this story is so intense that my grandchildren could probably feel it. I'm so happy that you updated and I can;t wait for the next update. College is such a bitch I'm sure yet I can't wait to start this year. PLZZ UPDATE SOON! This is the perfect spring break gift!!
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  • From Infek on March 24, 2008
    It's wonderful to finally see them coming together and both of them acknowledging their feelings for eachother. Great writing!
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  • From ANON - Sandy on March 24, 2008
    I'm glad to see you haven't given up on that story cause I enjoyed it from from the very start! Have a nice spring break too!
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  • From ANON - asialisek on March 17, 2008
    **whimpers**
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  • From lawrencecasher on March 08, 2008
    so hows it going? haven't seen an update for a few months now just wondering whats up? I love it by the way! I can't believe Seifer is realizing feelings after all this time!
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  • From ANON - Brit on March 06, 2008
    I actually found this story a few days ago and have been working on reading it between class, work, and sleep. I don't know if you've had anyone else comment on it, or if it's something that you've thought about, but the story has a good flow overall. Yaaaay! I'm really looking foward to how Seifer and Lore interact. I really hope that they talk about the missing pictures from the boxes of pictures. But, I look foward to when you update no matter when it may be. =)
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  • From ANON - Akira on February 01, 2008
    Ooh, I can't wait until the Seifer and Lore parts of the story! Of course you already know that from my last review lol. I'm wondering if Seifer will eventually end up accepting Lore as his son too and love him just as much as Squall does. If that happens, hopefully Lore would feel the same or that would bring lots of new problems into their lives hehe. A parent and a child who are both as stubborn as these two might give a good laugh. Awesome story so far, I love it!
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  • From ANON - florinoir on January 30, 2008
    Seify, Seify Seif...*Hyperion's tip at my troat*I mean,great Alamsy-sex-god... Hem...
    /Seifer/That's better...
    /Squall/*snort*
    ...You really think he will make a scene? It's Squall!!
    /Seifer/Yeah...But I'm me...*cocky grin*
    ...Okay...
    Good continuation!!(poor Irv', he just try to help..sort of...)^^
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  • From ANON - asialisek on January 27, 2008
    @_@ this is a really kewl story.. overall, and the twist that i originally wasn't sure about is turning out to work.. yaaay~
    i've read a LOT of SxS fandom (as it is a top 5 fav. for me), and it's ALWAYS refreshing to discover writers out there that manage to create a unique pov., either though plot, character development, AU, etc. It's weird, but.. I like that there's a lot of complications for our fav. boys (the Cale element almost broke me.. n'I totally didn't expect that end for him........ o_o ), that the whole 'reconciled relationship' thing isn't just cut and dry.
    Hope I'm not repeatin' myself... just wanted to let ya know I love this story!
    Keep up the intrigue (not to mentioned palatable sexual tension .. s'like freshly baked brownies.. delicious.) XD

    KUDOS!
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  • From ANON - raven on January 23, 2008
    I can't wait to see how seifer and lore's relationship develops. I mean ever since the earliest chapters of when seifer first met lore when he was 5, nothing has been said about how lore feels about having only one father and then all of a sudden his biological father steps into his life again. I love that distance. But surely it's in the back of lore's mind right? I love this story so much, great job! BTW, the way you've written squall reminds me of Ada from the film, The Piano. It's a great movie, if you haven't seen it already, please watch it. I think you'll enjoy it!
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  • From ANON - sindel on January 22, 2008
    That 36th chapter was great. It was detinitely worth the way. The scene in front of the window was quite sweet.
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  • From ANON - bouncing_baby_bunny on January 22, 2008
    YAY!....yummy kitchen play. As well as the quiet calm moment they had after...hot! Wonderful just wonderful!...i hope Lore comes not to hate Seifer anymore!
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  • From ANON - obsessive_depressing_love on January 21, 2008
    Arrgh, I am in awe of your writing, in *awe* and I can't stop reading. All of it actually, your subtle attention to detail and the amazing way you keep the characters in character make me weep. Weep with joy and there's not just one story I can pick and say it's my favorite because they all are, and I find myself re-reading them or laughing at certain parts over and over again.
    I bow down to your brilliance and making me see the light of Seifer/Squall. I rememebr cruising through the stories when I randomly saw a final fantasy ad and was like 'huh, wonder what this is about.' Stumbled upon FFVIII and clicked on a Seifer/Squall story of yours. I'm so glad I did, I can't get enough and I find myself using your skill level of writing and characterization as a basis of comparison for other stories. Only a few have matched up. ;P
    Anyway, just thought I'd let you know what a wonderful job you're doing and give you praises since I've been a lurker of yours for ages and have recced you quite a few times for people to read in FFVIII communities, Seifer/Squall websites, etc. Ah, if only I could spread the joy.
    P.S. I love your Squall. So strong and vulnerable at the same time but still the fierce fighter that some people seem to forget when pairing him with Seifer. If I ever step into the FFVIII fandom, my first story will be dedicated to you in your amazingness that fills me with fandom joy. *grovels and throws out cookies* ;)
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