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Reviews for Defining Love

By : DB2020
  • From ANON - bouncing_baby_bunny on January 02, 2008
    Your an awesome writer...that was a wicked chapter. So seifer has actual feelings for squally poo...i hope squall comes to his senses. LOL....this is just a great story. Any update as to lore and seifers son dad relationship?...will seifer ever own up to being his dad and will lore accept it?....i could see this having a happy ending...yay hail seifer and squall...hot coupling. Anyhoo loved this chapter! Keep up the good work!
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  • From angelofinnocence on December 30, 2007
    I really love this story. Please update as soon as possible. I am always so pissed when it ends. I actually scream at the computer sometimes. lol.
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  • From ANON - Akira on December 29, 2007
    Yay, I don't have to sign in to review! I only set up an account to review this and other stories, but I don't remember the log-in information lmao!

    Anyways, I love the story so far. Although I really hope there will be a chapter at some point with Lore thinking about his connection to Seifer (I love the parts where Lore and Seifer interact with each other because that gives "Defining Love" another little backstory for us readers to enjoy.) Plus, that makes the story even longer hehe. I love how you keep Squall and Seifer's personalities as they are in the game, but they have started to evolve and make the characters even more complicated, which is a really good thing in my opinion.

    I always bookmark the newest chapters of this story, while deleting the previous chapter from my bookmarks. That way, I know when there is a new chapter up.
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  • From ANON - theozz on December 26, 2007
    another great chapter!! can"t wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From LeafZelindor on December 18, 2007
    So my computer died and i just now had a chance to come and catch up! boy Am i glad to! Excellent couple chapters you posted since i last read, the Slow changes in everyone is fascinating. ^^
    Lovely job dear, keep it up!
    ~Leaf~
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  • From gir4me on December 07, 2007
    I'm really enjoying this story - and I avoided reading it for a VERY long time because I don't care for mpregs as a rule. You've done a fantastic job of capturing the changes parenthood brings about, without crossing over into cliche territory. Also, you mentioned somewhere along the line that Squall is OOC in some of his reactions. I'm old enough that I'd argue he's experiencing some major and unprecedented events here, and the heroics of his teen years are sure to have left some emotional baggage too. So I personally think your Squall is perfectly plausible...and Seifer's got nearly a decade of catching up to do! Hope all in your RL is going well, and that you find ever more time to write. Looking forward to seeing the updates.
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  • From ANON - lilclily on November 26, 2007
    I have been reading your work since last year October, and it never fails to amaze me. I absolutely LOVE your writing style, and how you can fit and mold the FF8 characters into whatever plot or whim you want and still create something wholly entertaining. I mostly love how you always make the time to develop the characters in each story, especially Defining Love. Keep up the fantastic work!
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  • From ANON - Heretic on November 23, 2007
    Since you like reviews.. I'll review! As much as I'd like the story to be finished right now, it's understandable but don't just leave it! It'll be bad or something. As for it being drawn out, I don't think so, well not really, besides it's better than them just being 'I luvs you for no reason! Yay!' but anyway, good story. Review, w00t.
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  • From salmiakkikossu on November 23, 2007
    I have to say that the scene with Lore is so cute. He's trying so hard to accept the fact that his father should date. He's growing up. -sniff-


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  • From ANON - Zoe Renae on November 21, 2007
    Hey I have been reading your story for a long while and well there's a friend of mine who reads it as well.. we always have a who found out you updated first thing.. hahah anyways I love where and how this is going. Lore is soo.. I cried. He's soo sweet. *sighs* I can't wait for the next chappy. PLease keep up the wonderful work.

    Your fan

    pet's mistress..

    ~Zoe~
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  • From ANON - theozz on October 30, 2007
    OMG I come back and there are 2 lovely chapters waiting for me to read. .....and it was good. =)You rock.
    I love the entire story so.
    I cannot wait for more.!!
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  • From ANON - bouncing_baby_bunny on October 17, 2007
    i love it!
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  • From ANON - bouncing_baby_bunny on October 15, 2007
    Nice....keep going. It's a great story. I like the little comments between Seifer and Lore. They are starting to 'accept' that they are father and son. I'm sooooooo happy that seifer and squally boy are together..they make such a hot couple. Seifer is starting to get feelings...*squeals with joy*.....*taps fingers*..waits for the next chapter!
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  • From darkphx on October 11, 2007
    My friend actually recommended this story and im glad they did cause it freaking awesome i absoulty love your writing style keep it up
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  • From salmiakkikossu on October 09, 2007
    I have to say that I love your writing. I’ve followed this story and your other two as well, and I’ve found them both to be really worth the read. However, I have a few criticisms for this story that you are more than welcome to take with a grain of salt. My first issue is the pacing. It could just be me being impatient to have all of my questions answered, so again, feel free to take that with a grain of salt. I also know that you are busy and you don’t have the time to update the way that you would like to, and that could be a large part of the problem. What I’m thinking of is the fact that you leapt forward like ten years in between Seifer’s return and now, which was fine for the advancement of the story. But now it feels as though the events are just dragging along at times with only one day taking up three chapters.

    I also feel that not enough attention is being paid to the Mpreg side of this story. I have to admit that this element was what originally attracted me to it, and I went in wondering how you would pull this off and what the explanation would be. You mentioned that it was the fault of Ultimecia, but that was it. I feel as though everyone in the story is a bit too comfortable with a concept that is entirely unnatural, especially Seifer. I can understand him not wanting to dwell on it because it is entirely weird. However, I feel that this is something he should wonder about a little more often, especially considering the fact that the two have made love and have been naked around each other on two separate occasions now. The scar being there would bring anyone’s mind back to the situation and would leave anyone dying to know how the fuck that happened, but I feel as though everyone has fallen into this state where it’s normal for Squall to have this kid and they don’t even want answers. Maybe he doesn’t because it would humiliate him to be examined, but then again, he’s already been sort of humiliated so how much of a stretch would it really be to find out why that happened to him?

    On the good side, I feel that the relationship part of the story is developing well. Someone said in the reviews that killing Cale might have been a cop-out, but from reading beyond that, I think that it added more conflict and depth if anything. Cale was probably not that much of a contender to Seifer in life, but in death, he’s quite a foe, with Squall feeling guilt at every turn. While Squall is jumping into bed, I think that the death of Cale has quite the potential to stop him from giving his heart so readily. It’s an interesting twist indeed.

    I just wanted to offer you this honest opinion and to tell you to keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more from you. :D

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