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Reviews for Defining Love

By : DB2020
  • From Trollmia on August 24, 2007
    I've had a few months of both this and that, thus making me fall behind a bit... but now I got 3 action-packed chapters to read. And I loved every single second of it. Godlike work as always. You sweep me up in the story with your way of handling the words and damn!! Yeah - you're good and you know it :D

    Thank you for the angst, lemonesque, somewhat cute and cuddly - chapters. I really enjoyed reading them.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 24, 2007
    another great chapter although I am wanting more advancement to the story, lol love reading but seemslike its takin forever for them to get anywhere with things.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 20, 2007
    This just continues to excite me. I can't wait for the next chapter.


    -ZE
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  • From Leonhart29 on August 19, 2007
    You give us a little insight into Irvine's thoughts on this one, and Seifer's a bit more intuitive than one would usually give him credit for. All in all it's a good job. (And I know what you mean about the tests and chapters - I have the same problem with my stories - the faster I write them the more worried I am about the whole thing).
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  • From Ravensky on August 17, 2007
    I love this chapter. Seifer is totally onto Irvine with the whole liking him. I think what Lore and Irvine don't realize is that they are too close to Squall to know what he really needs. That's where good old Seify comes in :D
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  • From ANON - Raven on August 17, 2007
    Oh, I loved it!!!! God, this chapter was so good!!! Thank you for bringing Lore back and the confrontation between Irvine and Seifer was something that was very much needed b/c it brought up a lot of unanswered questions. The biggest one being (to me) what the hell happended to everyone else!? When seifer asked that question I was like "where is everybody?" I mostly want to know what the hell Zell and Quistis is doing. Rinoa I don't care for, but I would like to know how she reacted to Squall being pregnant and if they were together when he first found out. I think you covered a little bit of the pregnancy story earlier but I don't remember, so if that seemed redundant at all, sorry. This was a great chapter believe me, you did well on it. It's definitely an A (read your a/n at the bottom). Please update soon and keep on making Seifer the sarcastic asshole we all know and love!
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  • From LeafZelindor on August 09, 2007
    wow...excellent...the amount of difficulty Squall is having has the right effect I think. Wow....
    Fantastic really. And a little sappiness is okay from time to time.
    ~Leaf~
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  • From ANON - kieras on August 05, 2007
    Absolutly brilliant, i love the dynamic you have developed for squall / seifer's relationships in this story!! and always leaving poor seify all pent up, fantastic. i will await your next chapters with added fever.

    keep writing magnificent stories, so i can read them :P

    many thanks

    Keiras
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  • From ANON - kikvws on August 05, 2007
    Excellent new chapter! Gah, so much happening, and as always, I'm loving the dynamic between Seifer and Squall. The detective has my fangirl meter pinging a little bit, I like the character already, even though part of me isn't sure that I should just yet ^_^ The little car scene was most definitely long-awaited and hot...Seifer is so wonderfully, subtly changing to accomodate Squall. Keep up the fantastic work, always looking forward to seeing more from you!
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  • From Leonhart29 on August 04, 2007
    The story is coming along quite nicely. I have to wonder just what the Lieutenant was after - and what he will do with the information he got. It's almost a bit of foreshadowing - whether you meant it to be or not. I look forward to reading what you have up your sleeve next.
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  • From ANON - Joziann on August 03, 2007
    I like Seifer when jealous ;P
    and by the way, the car scene WAS hot...
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  • From ANON - raven on August 03, 2007
    Oh, that was so good!!!! The part with seifer/squall making out in the car was really hot!!! God, you are such a good writer!!!! Please update soon because I miss Lore.

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  • From ANON - SorceressZila on August 03, 2007
    I didnt think it was too much at all. The way you write Seifer is amazing. He seems to be slowly, ever so slowly, realizing his feelings for Squall, but he still remains the stuborn ass he always is(And I love). I was super excited to see that you updated to quickly. I'm watching closly, keep it up, i love it! Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna go get me some fish. Seifer made me hungry. ^,^
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  • From ANON - Baby_Bouncing_Bunny on August 02, 2007
    Nice this is the longest fic I've ever read..i try to read others but they lose my interest after like 6 chapters, this one kept me interested from start to finish..when squall and seifer actually get together(hopefully they do)..it's gonna be awesome! Keep going!
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  • From ANON - ao on August 02, 2007
    I loved it and this chapter was worth the wait but I really hope the wait for the next chapter isnt quite as long!
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