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Reviews for Shattered Ice Redux

By : Crya2Evans
  • From ANON - margyy on March 08, 2007
    ahh! The new additions with Cid and Reeves were great :D
    I never really thought about if Reeves knew that Tifa was a traitor.. but thats cool you mentioned it :D
    yay! back to the yummy CidxVincent at the end of the chapter
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  • From someonesneaky on March 02, 2007
    *flails* Nooo! Cliffhanger!

    (So what if I know what happens in the original. That's beside the point.)

    I'm so glad you got another chapter in, though (as usual) it's not nearly enough. *sniffle*

    I'd forgotten your CxV. Maybe that's why I still prefer Ice over Dreams - the concentration on one relationship, instead of being relatively unfocused. I'm definitely not complaining, though. Hope to see more soon - where ever you update. n.n

    ~SneakyOne
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  • From ANON - Samma on February 17, 2007
    Aww, Chapter Twelve is all warm and fuzzy! *Coos and makes an embarassment of herself* Yuffie and Red as you write them are indeed a match made in heaven, and it never fails to make me smile. Even if in-game Yuffie made me want to reach through the screen and throttle her. I also like how Cid tries to dodge being the authority figure, even though he is the logical choice. With the foreknowledge of his past, it makes a great deal of sense, as does his friendship with Reeve. They were practically neighbors growing up, if my one-cup-coffee memory serves me?

    It does surprise me that Reeve and Archer couldn't find anything out about what happened to Vincent. Hojo strikes me as the anal-retentive type to record everything (after all, look what Sephiroth found in the Nibelhiem basement), and with mediocre hacking skills, could have access to the database. ...unless Hojo put everything in hard copy for that very reason.

    Jeez, you're good. You've got me second-guessing my own theories. Keep up with the new scenes. They add depth and shape to your world.
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  • From ANON - Samma on February 02, 2007
    Ah, coffee, the elixer of the poor working-class. Now I'll really be able to review properly!

    Well, another good pair of chapters. Tifa makes a good bad guy, when played right. I was surprised at that in the original story, and I'm admiring the characterization that's improved in Redux. The Reno/Reeve pairing is better done, I think, with more expression between them. It's less of a surprise to the readers, making it more real than it just dropping out of the blue.

    Oh, and there's a small typo in one chapter, referring to Tifa's hips. It was accidentally written "way seductively" instead of "sway seductively". I'm pleased that it's the first incongruity in spelling and grammar (and that's just a simple typo!) that I've noticed in the whole series. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - margyy on January 26, 2007
    Just for me your putting in an extra Cid and Reeves sceane? Yaay! ^_^
    Wow! I can't believe how horrable Cid's father was! Trying to "beat the gay" out of him! Thats horrable! :( Vincent's personality deffinitly seemed a bit differnt in the last sex sceane.. but maybe its just me ^^; Keep up the great work!!
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  • From ANON - Samma on January 21, 2007
    Redux... hmm, it's much smoother than the original Shattered Ice, and it flows better. I say it's an improvement, though I can't say how much as of yet (nine chapters into an epic is hardly a good judge). So far, I'm enjoying the rewrite.

    Oh, and any time I've tried to access your website, I get a "Not Found" page from the host server.
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  • From ArchNemesis on January 20, 2007
    I seriously thought that Vincent was just going to totally loose it and kill Cloud--not that I would have blamed him. Cloud was being a jerk especially when Vincent told him to back-off, which he didn't.

    Call it whatever you want, but Cloud's lack of mature was evident when he didn't knot the signs for when to let sleeping dogs lie. It was just a good thing that Cid came downstairs when he did. So, Cloud being the nosey Parker that he was found out something about Cid and Vincent and let's not forget about Reeve. I wonder... will Cloud now talk to Cid about his preference or will he just leave it alone?

    The funny thing is that Vincent only talk to Cid.

    Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

    Nemesis ^_~
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  • From someonesneaky on January 19, 2007
    I began reading the Redux first; I didn't pay much attention to the fact that it was the improved version of a story until I hit the last chapter. Then I decided to see if the previous version was still up.

    To my delight, it is.

    I read the entirety of it in the space of hours; it's quite addictive. A well-written story indeed, an excellent read. Even the changes to the plot were done very smoothly (and besides, I never liked Tifa much anyway).

    Thank you for a marvelous story. Now I'm off to read Shattered Dreams!
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  • From ANON - Elfwench on January 19, 2007
    I loved how the described Vincent's transformation in this. You did a really good job with your description and the others reactions. Yeah for Cid! I like how he defends Vincent in this too! Will be watching for more!
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  • From z32 on January 18, 2007
    I simply ADORED this chapter, Vincent's confussion over Cid and how Cid is so mature! *o* and now Cloud knows!! ZOMG please please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - Samma on January 11, 2007
    I spent most of yesterday (from about one in the afternoon to midnight, with breaks for food and the like) reading Shattered Ice, as well as the handful of side stories that are up. I was pleasantly surprised to find how vivid and real your stories are, going beyond most fanfiction authors. Your characters are delightfully fallible, their relationships realistic (in many aspects!). The plotline isn’t a cookie-cutter story hashed together using the original storyline and whatever aspects you like (or didn’t)—it has depth and realism that one is sometimes hard-pressed to find in published works.

    I enjoyed being surprised by the twists of fate you included, from Nanaki’s transformation to the Four Demons of the Apocalypse, pleased at how you made aspects I’d never seen before work. I admit, I was skeptical of a Reno/Reeve pairing, but you gave their relationship depth, even though it isn’t really mentioned in the story. I will be eagerly following the sequels, as well as the revamping of this original story.

    Yes, I’m longwinded. But hey, I just reviewed forty-plus chapters in less than a half page! Keep up the awesome work.
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  • From ANON - elvenarchress on January 10, 2007
    Hi! I really like how this is coming along. Much better than the first!

    If you would pardon a grammar comment..."Some child left their snowboard..." maybe it would be better to change "their" to "a", if you don't want to mention a gender. child and their don't seem to match...

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  • From ANON - Elfwench on January 08, 2007
    “If you listen hard enough, you might be able to follow the sound of Barret’s snores.”
    “Unless he gets confused by Cid’s,” Vincent muttered under his breath.' I love this...Sorry I'm late on reviewing, but I've been busy lately. I'll be waiting for more!

    Elfwench
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  • From ANON - z32 on January 07, 2007
    Hehehehe poor Cid xD, nice chappie, keep up the great work!!I really want to know what'll happen between Vincent and Cloud, their rivalry is really interesting o.o
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  • From ANON - ArchNemesis on January 06, 2007
    Excellent work! I'm loving every moment of this. There's not a lot good Vincent/Cid fics out and I love their interaction. Please continue the fabulous job.

    Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

    Nemesis ^_~
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