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Reviews for Shattered Ice Redux

By : Crya2Evans
  • From ANON - Levi on December 19, 2005
    For some reason, this battle didn't seem as engaging as the Zombie Dragon or Tonberry/Malboro fights, but it's still good all the same. However, to see the ENTIRE PARTY in action together was definitely cool. For once, I'd like an FF game where you can use everybody at the same time.

    The only real problems I could see was there was a time when you referred to Jenova as it and then started using her, but then again, it may be a more appropriate prounoun for her when you think about it, and the Brothers are named Sacred and Minotaur, but like you said, you didn't really remember and came up with your own version.
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  • From ANON - LordIckarous on December 18, 2005
    I did think it was the end! I was hesitant to click, but i am glade i did. You tease!


    Wonderful yet again.
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  • From ANON - Moonglider on December 18, 2005
    Chaos is going to eat them all. He wants out so badly. ;_;

    Dang, I need to do the final battles again, I've forgotten most of battles and such. Wonderfully written as always, and I don't want Chaos to eat Cid's soul.. or liver, well not eat more than rip to shreds and turn back into Vincent so he can find his lover's remains caked under his fingernails, sorta evil.
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  • From ANON - l-chan on December 16, 2005
    No, I have no bloody idea what's going to happen! ^_^o And I like it that way!

    I must tell you though, I squealed in delight when you busted out the tonberries!! Oh gawd how I adore them~ ♥

    Your battle scenes truly are top notch and I'm highly interested in the route you're taking with the summons. It baffles me to no end what you've got in store with them or for them. They are obviously a great part of the plot with the foreshadowing going on, but what exactly? No friggin’ clue on my part~

    The biggest thing for me is that usually I'm pretty apt at deducing where a certain plot point is going. In this case though, I'm so stumped it's eating away at my brain... literally making me go: LET'S FIGURE IT OUT!! But then I come up with nothing and feel my brain cells dying as they overload and turn to mush.

    And you probably have NO idea just how happy that makes me! So many plots are entirely contrived and even though I may enjoy a fic [or book]; when I know where an author is going it sucks a lot of the fun out of reading. In this case, I NEED to know what's going to happen and it's making me check back more often than I normally would. Let's just say, if this was a published book I had in my possession, I wouldn't have put it down until I was finished with it. Would have skipped work and pulled all nighters until I turned the last page of it. That is just my testament to how DAMN GOOD this fic is!

    And now, that I have babbled too much, I leave you with the customary: update soon please!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Levi on December 16, 2005
    Another satisfying adrenaline rush.

    Man, you make Tonberries creepy as hell.

    And I love Reeve's smugness. He didn't get a scratch, did he? Kitty's too fast for 'em, eh?
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  • From ANON - Moonglider on December 16, 2005
    Tonberries! I hate tonberries! I always run from battle when I face those buggers, they kill me so good. ;_;

    Vincent cracked a joke. :D He's breaking down. Gosh I just love the characters, and you keep adding your own little summons and such, which is so cool. ^___^ EEEE.
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  • From ANON - LordIckarous on December 16, 2005
    ...i will try not to get too discouraged. and i am looking for to the next one, there will just be this 5 minute period where i will be sad. Anyway, yet again another great chapter. i thought you did well with describing both battle scenes ^_^. Great job...again!
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  • From Cidsa on December 16, 2005
    Another awesome chapter :D
    I always thought of Tonberrys as kind of cute..but after reading this, I think you're right. They are totally evil little bastards! XD
    I thought you did a great job of writing both battles scenes at once, I think you're getting better and better at it :3
    Also, I can safely say that I really have no idea what is going to happen next.

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  • From ANON - Jessifer on December 15, 2005
    I'm very much pleased with the chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - Levi on December 15, 2005
    Top quality action, if I do say so myself. I could learn a thing or two from you. I always considered my action scenes adequate at best. The newest story I'm writing contains a lot of it, and your chapter gave me a few pointers on how to write some better fights. So, thank you for the unintended lesson in battle-writing. Back to the fic.

    And aha, all the couples are seperated. ANGUISH. For all of them. But it might be better that way, more focusing on the task at hand (and some adorable fretting) and less "OH NOES! MY TRUE LOVE IS BEING ATTACKED! I MUST SAVE MY DELICATE LOVER!" *Insert cliché taking the hit while protected person goes through the "Why?" routine here*

    How nice of Barret to give a parting gift. He may be spending what he feels might be the last of his days with his daughter and a new girlfriend, but he hasn't forgotten AVALANCHE, or better put, his friends and what they went through together. An Ultima Materia. Wonder where he got that? He's been out of action for a long time. Maybe Elmyra had it stashed somewhere.

    How about a "There ain't no getting offa dis train we're on!" for old time's sake?

    And I'm still hung up on the family thing with Barret, Cloud, and Aeris. If all goes well, they'll be related to each other. I'd love to see them come to terms with that. Sounds like good comedy fodder to me.
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  • From ANON - Moonglider on December 15, 2005
    I have no problem reading another chapter. :D

    Carbuncle is so cute! X3 I want one of my own now. I hate the zombie dragons, by the way. Nasty masters in the crater. :3 I think you did wonderfully. XD It's bee awhile since I fought Sephiroth, but I think your battle descriptions are good. Cid comforting Reno was very sweet, and feel bad for all the pairings being seperated. Poor dears have to worry about each other. X3 Well get that next chapter out as soon as you can. :3
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  • From ANON - Margyy on December 15, 2005
    heeyy! That was really goood! Poor Cid got burnt ;-; but um heh heh he could get some nice attention from Vincent because of that..
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  • From ANON - arora_kayd on December 15, 2005
    i thought it was another well written battle ^.^
    yay! an extra chapter. Works for me :]

    thanks once more for updating so quickly!
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  • From ANON - l-chan on December 15, 2005
    OMG! Just as I was about to go to bed... I said to myself: Well, check Shattered Ice again, it can't hurt. And BAM! Ficcage!

    Now, I'm totally down with how you've got Reno and Reeve involved in the final battle! It truly is a twist unlike any I've seen before! (Not to mention Nanaki in demi-human form o'course) Your battle scenes themselves are incredible! I'm personally hoping that maaaaybe we'll see a tonberry? So cute~ ^_^o

    I also love how you split up the team by couple - it gives good openings for the angst factor. And how you matched out their strengths and weaknesses is perfect! I also have to say, you keep up this excellent work and you will quickly reach Twig Collins (LHR) status - for me you already have (In regards to the Cid/Vin ship - which I had so very much so wanted!) I hope your sequel will include some, if not all, of the pairings mentioned in this fic - at least cameos~ You are creating an epic beyond my expectations, and I love ya for doing so!

    Now, excuse me whilst I go light a candle at the alter I have fashioned to ya and worship ya before I sleep! ^_~

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  • From ANON - LordIckarous on December 15, 2005
    you write battle scenes so well! i am jealous.. i get lazy and it always ends up sounding like "There was a big bomb and everyone died..the end." But you are so descriptive..it is lovely..and yet i am sad. i don't want to see the last chapter..because that means it will be over..come to think of it, i never did complete the end of the game. i was forced to watch it, but i refused to kill sephiroth.. i just couldn't bring myself to do it..but of course he kicked my ass in about 10 seconds...oh man..i am depressed again. i would say i can't wait till the next chapter, but i can. i don't want it to end yet...*cries*
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