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By : ArchNemesis
  • From ANON - Anon on February 07, 2008
    wow ^_^ Clouds little baby is so cute ^_^

    I wonder what will become of all those test tube babies..........I hope they don't die or anything^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 22, 2008
    Gloud run.......(pray that Cloud makes it safly with the child)

    Thanks for the update.
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  • From Malcara on January 20, 2008
    yay!!! You've made my day! this line had me in stitches!

    “VALENTINE! GET YOUR FUCKIN’ ASS IN HERE RIGHT NOW AND EXPLAIN WHAT THE FUCK KIND OF HICKEY IS THIS!!!”

    lmao!
    And now for some guesses as to what happens next...
    Cloud is obviously in labour and hojo obviously sent sephiroth on that mission possibly with help from president shinra. Oh and tseung is obviously pregnant again...^^ I'm so happy...........^^ i love this story!!!^^
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  • From Malcara on December 22, 2007
    OMG!!! An update!!!! and just in time for Christmas too!!!! im so excited about the next chapter!! will we hear anything about rufus and tseung though? it sounds like we're almost back at the beginning.....i hope the next update is soon!
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  • From HawkChic on December 20, 2007
    Oh my god! I just have to know what happens next! You can't just leave me hanging like that! *nods* Especially when it's my first Cloud/Sephiroth fanfic! But... YOU HAVE SO CONVERTED ME TO TSENF/RUFUS. *races off in deranged fangirl mode*

    Xylia: Uhh.... I'll finish up for her then... summing everything up, Kat loves this story and is excited to read more. *looking at it* In fact, I may read it too. But later.
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  • From Dalcora on November 21, 2007
    Ok, I have to say that there are some points of this story which are a massive disappointment to me, but all in all I am really enjoying this story. I absolutely can't wait for the next chapter, so hurry up!! I can't believe its this good! I usually can't stand MPREG stories, but this one is pretty damn good. Anyways, keep up the good work! And yes, obviously Tseng is just like Cloud. Write more!!!! Soon!!
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  • From sephcounttheways on November 17, 2007
    Wow...never in a million years did I think I would be so into a male preggers story. But yeah, I'm lovin it.

    Two little criticisms from a nobody:
    1- "pregnant lover". You use that phrase, or a similar combo of those words a lot. Mix it up a little. There are some very colorful ways you can put it, he's a pregnant guy. Go nuts.
    2- Cloud. His estrogen levels are through the roof but I wish he would man up just a lil. But he's a very very sweet Cloud, and I'm enjoying the way you're writing him, but like I said.. a little more masculinity wouldn't hurt.

    But yes, can't wait for the next chapter. ^__^
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  • From AyaFujimiya on November 16, 2007
    Nice, I just love this story and as for Tifa being the
    bad guy, that would be something new. I think you
    guys should step up your game of evil with her and
    wipe out those emotions she has for Cloud, cuz' they
    make her seem more hurt then bad... Anyway, like I
    said I love the story and keep up the good work.
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  • From nickkroon on November 08, 2007
    waahhh gimme gimme gimme!!! just a quick comment on the whole Hojo/seph thing; Hojo could never EVER EVER be sephs father! not in a million years so there! for one thing, he might have treated the poor man like shit from the moment he was conceived for knowing it wasnt his child. (my POV anyway) and i really like the tseng vincent thing, as there is already so much attention for the cloud/seph relation, it makes a nice change in pace!
    keep up the great stuff!

    Mitts, do you by chance also work with Hakucho? you can answer me on my email, Nickkroon70@hotmail.com if you want.
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  • From Malcara on November 02, 2007
    YAY!!!! AN Update!!! I always get so excited when you update!! ^^ i loved the tseng ad rufus scene and i can't wait to see how tsume reacts!! hopefully rufus will do something about hojo now. he really needs to be stopped!
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  • From Dragon7 on November 02, 2007
    This is a great chapter please continue writing it and post again soon.
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  • From Dreamfool on September 28, 2007
    If you hurry up with the next chapter I'll give a nice two paragraph long review.
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  • From Malcara on September 16, 2007
    YAY!! update!!! OMG!! finally!!! rufus and tseng!!!Sephiroth and vincent!!......i'm very incoherent arent i? oh well you know what i mean i suppose.....looking forward to more can't wait to see vincent's forgiveness and rufus's enlightenment ^^
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  • From ebilangel on September 15, 2007
    waaiii waaiii waaaiiiiiii~~~~ *glomp*
    im shoooo happy ToT you know.. in the real FFVII Hojo was Sephy-chan dad's. im glad you make vincent as his father. cuz ne... Hojo as sephy-chan father? that is just plain weird ~_~;;;;

    thankz for the new chp ^-^ luff ya and do your best
    ehehehe
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  • From nickkroon on September 11, 2007
    choisa teabags! another cool chapter! ~yayayay~ * bobs up and down with glee*
    did you check out the little piece of art i left for you in the photo section?

    greetinks YES
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