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By : ArchNemesis
  • From ANON - Lady Shinigami on December 07, 2006
    Yes, I DID notice that. First, I thought, "Hey, 'SG1', that's like Star Gate!" and then I thought, "What the hell? Star Gate? What does that have to do with this?" and THEN I thought, "No way. That's a coincidence." But I couldn't figure out what it was an acronym FOR. So thank you for assuring me I'm not crazy. I never really watched the series, though--I MUCH prefer the original movie (binding two of my favorites--aliens and Egyptian deities) and my little sister is a big Farscape fan.

    So anyway . . . DUNDUNDUN!! SEPHIROTH KNOWS!! I REALLY like how he felt the baby move and thought it was a threat. I find that very Sephiroth-like and it was a delightful tidbit.

    Cloud's attacking Zack is strange. A mood swing? Mako adjustment? Hm . . .


    ~LS
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  • From ANON - malcara on December 06, 2006
    OMG!!!!this fic is soooo aswome!!!!! everyone is sooo in character! and i love it!! please update quickly to find out what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Legolas19 on December 05, 2006
    O yeah, that was hot *drools* wonderful chapter, I can't wait for the next one, update soon please.
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  • From ANON - maddie on December 05, 2006
    it's great :D
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  • From ANON - squallpaine sephirothpaine on December 04, 2006
    OMG.....that was some awesome smut in the new chapter. As always, love your work, can't wait to the next update! ^_^
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  • From ANON - memorietrail on December 03, 2006
    more oh please write more
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  • From ANON - YamiMarie on December 03, 2006
    I love this story big time. The series you made reference too is Stargate SG1. Please update soon. ~ Yami Marie
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  • From ANON - Lauren on December 03, 2006
    Obviously the sci-fi series you're talking about is Stargate: SG1!

    Okay, so how did Sephiroth know? Besides the usual kicking of the baby and the like, did the Planet communicate to him?

    And was it Jenova's influence or just pure rage that made Sephiroth a little crazy?

    Keep up the good work! Can't wait to see the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - squallpaine sephirothpaine on November 24, 2006
    Awesome fanfic.....I dieing to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Lauren on November 23, 2006
    Awww! Cloud is pissed off - I love it when he's pissed off. He's just so CUTE! I hope he enjoys moving in with Sephiroth!

    I really enjoy reading this story! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 18, 2006
    Hi Nemesis!

    Sorry for not reviewing earlier! Life has been so hetic leaving me drained. *Anyway* I cannot really say much about the fic as I unfortunately have no experience of 'Final Fanasty' beyond seeing pictures up for it in shops. How old is Hoju out of interest? (sp?) Otherwise, I think this was very good opener - the prologue offers a tantalising tidbit of what is to come. Only complanit? It is *distant footsteps ...* not 'distance footsteps...' but that is simply a typo and easily dealt with.

    In other words ... keep on writing!
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  • From ANON - Lady Shinigami on November 18, 2006
    I have good news and bad news.

    Good news? This is an awesome story and though I personally feel that Sephiroth is mildly out of character (if he even knows what love is, I really doubt he'd show it so openly even to the one he loved, having never had the experience of being loved before then, but that's only my opinion), but it doesn't take away from the story because he's still 'normal' around everyone else, which balances him and makes him not such a sap. So kudos there, as I've found that to be a major stumbling block for other writers.

    Bad news? Two things, actually. One is that during their initial tryst in chapter two, Sephiroth noticed that Cloud was 'wet and well-slicked', I believe was the phrase.
    My first question is this: Is that wetness pre-ejaculate or is it some equivalent to what a woman has? Either way, you didn't write it to sound that way (your intention?) as far as I could tell and it confused me. No real biggie, particularly if you meant it that way.
    The second--and more important--question is this: SURELY Cloud noticed something was wrong with his body at SOME point; if he has a uterus and is ovulating, then he's also menstruating, so that would be a considerable indication of internal change. In chapter one, I think, Hojo noted that the gear was 'dormant', so Cloud would not have started menstruating--nor, subsequently, would he be ovulating--when he hit puberty and thus not know about it as pointed out in that chapter. Fine--I get that. However, if that's the case then the equipment isn't receiving enough estrogen--no matter if it IS high for a man--to induce estrus, so there wouldn't be so much a POSSIBILITY of pregnancy at that point. He would, essentially, be barren even with both barrels fully loaded.

    Inconsistencies aside, please update soon. If you have explanations for my questions that you simply don't want to reveal yet, that's okay--it's just been bugging me for a while and I HAD to ask so I could start sleeping again. Feel free to leave a tiny note for me on the next available chapter, or you can e-mail me.


    ~LS

    P.S. Why, if women are the only ones who do it, is it called MENstruating?
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  • From ANON - Lauren on November 14, 2006
    Oh sweet lord! That was so hot, I'm going to need a cold shower for this chapter! Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - SorceressZila on November 11, 2006
    I Abso-fucking-lutley LOVE it! ^,,^
    I've never really been a SephirothxCloud fan, but i cant get enough of this Fic of urs! Im totally addicted! Now, i probably read far too many YAOI's anyways,(if such a thing is possible) and now i have to skip past the sex scenes cause their all the same, bUt im finding urs very impressive. I'm so in love with this story of yours. PLEASE! Keep updating! PLEASE!?!?!?!?! I'll give u a cookie...? Or a chocobo...? How about a moogle, those are cute, right?
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  • From ANON - Legolas19 on November 11, 2006
    wow, that was awesome! I loved it! It was sweet and tender and hot at the same time, wonderful job, thanks for the e-mail! I love this story to death!

    -Legolas19
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